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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Artemis678

Awesome. Continue Soon.

This was just a ONE OFF yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome update! I liked how you beautifully described Maithali's memories of Abhay and her in the past! 😳 I kind of feel bad that they're not together no more and their love is not what it used to be. Maithali's obsession over Abhay will probably cause her to harm Piya. Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

Maithali's emotions are justified because she'd spent years in waiting for her LOVE and she is still living in the past. Those memories are all she has to hold on to. SO i just wanted to express them out loud. I find Maithali's character is very complex. Its no excuse for what she is doing i know but it explains her rage.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: missglam


Superb OS ! Aysha
loved it... It was beautiful

Great U like it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: kuttu

This Maithli is tooo danerous and she can go to any lengths may be even kill Abhay so that no one can get close to him looks like. Pia is just going to meet her worst night mare looks like. So what is the scorned lover planning on waiting to see your side of the METz story.

I have given my side of Maithali's story rest is all down to the show na
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: KIZ ~ KS ~ KAYA

i actually sort of feel for maithali sometimes... 😛

Pyar main kya nahin jhel ni pad this hai. Sukh aur Dukh but i feel Abhay has found life again but Maitali is right where she's always been.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh

wow... what an OS... Ametz... unusual...but amazing...! Metz ki beautiful memories...in T's room...I wished the CVs for once showed this side of Metz... rather showing her at 2 different ends... they could have showed her in T's room... thinking abt Abhayendra... amazing... sorry I dunno your name... so please tell me...so that I can thank you in a better way... and Ametz scenes were beautiful... cute Abhay...aww!!! amazing OS...and thanks for PMing me alag se...I would love to recieve PMs from you for your other works like OSs as well...


thanks,
shivangi

This is the emotional side i wanted to see of Maithali's a side she keeps locked away but only comes out when she is all alone.

I'm Aysha By the Way

If U want i'll send U more of My work. I have loads where these OS came from.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: prernasinghking

ayesha maar dala yaar aapni ise damake daar update😆 😆 se superb yaar hats off to you 👏.👏.i want abhay will be come to mathli 😳coz for the sometime i am only reading those abiya couple ff now , i want some metz and abhyendra ...rocking shocking update ke liye thanks yaar ...


Me too. I got fed up of ABHIYA FF's and OS. Hence the reason for my dabbling in other Coupling OS/FF's
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: NIDIZ

👏 wowww I felt this was needed...
Methz n Abhay scene... I wish she was not turned that *****..
I wished Sid had not poisoned her..
But, this one reminds of the old past history scenes..
Defiantly,T face Methz has potential but, Methz n her Abhiyandar did rock onces upon a time.. U're o.s was like tuning the time- sand back..

It's the maybes' that bug me. What could have been and should have beens but then we'd never have ABHIYA's love story but poor Abhay gets bajaoed by Pia as well so jaye to bechara kaha jaye?
This is what i wanna see portrayed in the show
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: pratiksha2009

well awesome update, i always have soft corner for metz, because what happend in her life is not her fault and feel bad about her, its hard to give up someting that very special for you, i think spicial word is nothing to compaire what maithliy lost, she cant give up abhay because he is last hope for her , because of him she enter a dark world, that;s why she is not moving on him and cant let him go, but at the last its only abhiya

Ditto my point exactly. Meri baat tumne cheen li
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: .-.LonelySoul.-

Its a very Nice Oneshot and you have expressed Maithili very well done. This is the Justice She deserves from her role , I guess. Keep writing More wonderful Stuff.

xoxoPriyal

Glad U liked it

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

4 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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