FF #Dont Separate us# Chapter 6. - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: abhiya03

update soon and plz pm me wen u do


Suree and will do!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
awesome update..aww..i loved misha..kabab main haddi...and omg..jeh tried to kill panchi..now whats gonna happen?? update soon..thanks for pm..

happy diwali
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: peehu24

awesome update..aww..i loved misha..kabab main haddi...and omg..jeh tried to kill panchi..now whats gonna happen?? update soon..thanks for pm..


happy diwali

Peehu! Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! No problem!
Same to you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Nice update! I hope Panchi doesn't get killed at the dinner party, I like her in this FF! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Nice update! I hope Panchi doesn't get killed at the dinner party, I like her in this FF! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

Thank you! I am trying my best to portray her as a nice person here. Suree! Im on it now!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Sixth Chapter!
The party was going well and all were enjoying it.
Alina on the other hand was completely irritated by Jeh.
Alina:*To herself* Why did bro have to call the whole Dobriyal family here? Puri toli aagayi hai! In front of everybody I cant do what I want! Its all because of bro!
Soon after a while dinner was served! Jeh called everybody to the dinner table. Just then Abhay said that he was not really well and his doctor told him not to eat anything other than plain rice cooked n water which he had already had from home.
Pia winks at him and says"Jhoote"! Abhay gives a plain smile! : )
Since Alina and Jeh could not bring their plans into effect they decided to end the party as soon as possible. Just as everybody finished their dinner Alina dragged Jeh into the kitchen and asked him why he called the whole Dobriyal family. Jeh narrated his whole story of how Panchi saw everything which put Alina into shock!
Alina:Bro what is wrong with you?
Jeh:I did not do it on purpose and instead of blaming me, it would be nice if you could think of some plan to shut that Panchi's mouth!
Alina:Give me some time to think! But dont kill her! Think of some other way.
Jeh:What other way Alina? You think of it then!
Alina:There are people in the house so lets focus on them for the time being.
But they had not noticed that Abhay was overhearing the whole conversation.
Abhay:*in his mind* No! Now Panchi's life is in danger! I have to do something. He runs away from there so that the both of them dont see him!
All goes fine until the end of the party and they all return to their homes.
Before getting into the car, Misha goes to Abhay.
Misha:Should I pass some message?
Pia was already inside her father's car. She saw Misha and laughed!
Abhay:No its fine. Jaldhi jao varna gaadi choot jayegi.
Misha:Kitne boring ho yaar! Bye!
Abhay:Bye!
Abhay and Pia wave at eachother and so that there are no more confusions at the Khurana's mansion Abhay too leaves their house immediately.
The next day was a holiday so they had no college. Pia decided to go meet Mailthili. It was something she wanted to do for a long time. She woke up at 10 in the morning and had her breakfast and went to the Raichand house.
After she reached there, she rang the bell and Chand opened the door. He was not really happy to see her as he was not happy with Abhay cause he told her about them being vampires. He was scared if she would leak it out.
Chand:Oh hello Pia! What are yo doing here?
Pia:Uncle, Is Abhay there?
Just then Abhay entered the hall.
Abhay:Pia! Come in.
Pia entered the house and went to Abhay's room.
Pia:Abhay I have mainly come here to meet Mailthili. Can I see her now?
Abhay:Uhmm... Sure! Sid has gone to the office so its just Maithili. She is in her room. Come I'll take you there.
They both reached Maithili's room. Just then Abhay recvd a phone call and went out of the room.
Pia:Umm...Mailthili!
Just then Mailthili turned towards Pia.
Mailthili:Pia! I wanted to see you.
Pia:Uhmm..Me too! Feels pretty awkward to talk to a person who looks exactly like me you know.
Mailthili:I feel happy that somebody has finally some to meet me. I feel very suffocated. Closed up in this house all the time. Abhay and Sid are all vampires but they can move around the world since they dont have any human look alike.
Pia:I know you might want to go out and its because we look alike that you cant. its just fate.
Mailthili.Yes it is.
Pia:I dont really know what to say!
Mailthili:Well I have a lot to talk about but dont know is you would be interested.
Pia:Sure I am! You could tell me anything you want.
Mailthili:You know Pia, life has never been easy for me. I have always had to go through alot. I feel so terrible. Nobody to talk to or share what I feel. its always been very tough. Sid is always out!
Pia:You can tell me whatever you want. I always blame myself for your situation.
Mailthili:You dont have to. Its not your fault. Abhay loves you very much Pia. You just promise me that you would be with him forever.
Pia:I will for sure Mailthili. Anytime you feel like talking, you can just ring me up.
Mailthili:Sure Pia! Thank you so much. You have made me feel alot better. At times, even I wish for a normal life like you but things never work.
Pia:Its fine Mailthili. Maybe you could go out a me once in a while!
Mailthili:Your really sweet Pia.
Pia:*Smiles* Okay I gotta go now but we be back soon.
Pia goes out of the room. Abhay comes to her.
Abhay:What happened? I did not want to interrupt your convo you know!
Pia:All is fine. She is really upset. You all should try to something for her once in a while at home itself.
Abhay:Thank you so much Pia! You just do so much for others.
Pia:Dont thank me. But she is really upset!
Abhay:Hmmm... Come I'll drop you home.
Pia:Okayy lets go!
At the Khuranna mansion, Jeh was lost in his own thoughts.
Jeh:*In his mind* What is wrong with me? I am just going crazy because of that silly girl! I have to think of something else varna...
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Precap-Panchi goes tot he Khuranna house in order to find out about Jeh. What will happen there?
Read my next chapter to find out!

So I hope you liked it!
Please Comment!
Thanks!
Edited by MiniMouse810 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yippie me first.🥳...awesome update!!..so abhay overheard their convo...actually i won't mind jeh having tandoori😆😆...there wasn't much of abhiya😒...piya is sooo sweet🤗...i luvd maithli...hare yaar how can she be upset.😲..did sid know abt this...he can't leave his princess like this😳...i want 2 really read abt sid n maithli...continue soon😊...
Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice update, that mean abhay know now panchi life in danger, he surely do something, love pia and maithly convo, she truly love him so much, what jeh is upto, he started to think another plan, i am sure abhay made his every plan flop, and panchi try to be finding a truth about jeh, i hope she dont do anything stupid which cause a more problem for herself , anyways but nice update, oh did i miss something?, yes i did i like misha in this ff, lovely and bubly cute update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: madhuri16

yippie me first.🥳...awesome update!!..so abhay overheard their convo...actually i won't mind jeh having tandoori😆😆...there wasn't much of abhiya😒...piya is sooo sweet🤗...i luvd maithli...hare yaar how can she be upset.😲..did sid know abt this...he can't leave his princess like this😳...i want 2 really read abt sid n maithli...continue soon😊...

Thank you so much Madhuri!
You make me feel so happy!
LOL Tnadoori!
Will try to bring more Abhiya next time!
Sureee!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

Nice update

Loved it
Continue soon

Thank you so much Pari!
Suree!

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