||Hold On A Little Longer|| Abhiya OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: Artemis678

You Are A Talented Writer Bani. Don't Hide It My Friend Show It. Express It With Your Beautiful Story. (:

Originally posted by: me_shreeya

oh my god..bani..i didnt know u were such a good writer...😲🤗
its amazing...waiting 4 more...😳when it cums 2 abhiya i alwaz want more n more...😆

Originally posted by: AyshaNoreen

awww how sweet😳... i really really really love it so much❤️... it's cchhhooo ssshhhweeettt an romantic☺️...
great job👏... well done👏... our forum badly need this type of posts😛..
LOVE ABHIYA❤️🤗❤️

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

🤗bani superb itna din talent chupaya 😡

Originally posted by: madhuri16

awesome OS👍🏼...u portrayed abhay perfectly...wow...d note with d rose...was sooo romantic.😳..

Originally posted by: ilove99

Awesome os ..no u r not a bad writer!!!!!do write next part!😛

Originally posted by: Beb0

Bani 🤗
loved it dear❤️ very well written👏

Originally posted by: syria2014

First of all i am not a good writer at all, i see some awesome awesome writer that can make the most wonderful OS. I shouldn't even write this but i couldn't help it b/c after ages abahy had a line that made me say YES YES! go get your girl abhay so i just had to write it even if it sucks so please bear with me b/c this is my first OS😳

Yes Yes!You are a bad writer.! So bad, this o.s. is crap.! Happy! Bani! 😡 Bani Omg, the gangster wrote this!😲 Bani, don't u dare call urself a bad writer. You are one the best I have seen so far. Finally, u came our of ur closest . I knew u wrote FF , but never knew ur were such a amazing writer. Now that ur talent is out, I want tons of Abhiya O.S.I mean thousands.!

Abhay standing next to the fireplace of his raichand mansion. The fire reflecting his shadow on the wall. He was looking like a dangerous predator, tall, stone feature, his deep dark blue eyes set outside of his window that is letting the cold Oct chill air into his room. His soft silky hair flying from one side to another.

Syria Blushes!Aww my baby!😍

The moon was shinning outside his window, reflecting his determined face. He looked at his right hand that has a crystal glass bottle that looked very ancient that had dragon shape caps to it. Abhay smirk and brought the potion infront of him and start playing with it by changing it's color from red to green, green to blue, blue to purple etc'.

Aww, our smarty Vampire is trying every potion to free his mother.!😍

Abhay, "POTION=FREEDOME. I got what I wanted. I cured my mom with this potion. I did what I had to do and now it's time i give someone the happiness of her life. She has suffered more then anyone; I have given her nothing but tears of pain. She has brought me back from the dead bed and what did I give her in return, erased her memory, propose to another girl for the sake of my mom infront of her, make her bear the pain of fakeness that I had done with my enemy, I given her pain and pain only.

U echoed his sentiments for Pia so perfectly. Poor, guy he was torn between his duty and love. But, he is bang with bang.!

Abhay, " Piya." closed his eyes as tears of blood ran down his face while his BG started to play.

🥺

Piya was lying on her bed face down with her head on her soft pillow while tears flew from her eyes as the flashback of abhay and alina came infront of her. It was like it was taunting her, ripping her slowly, making her hard to breath each passion moment. She dig her nails into her soft palms while a tingle of blood flow from her palm.

Piya, "why abhay why? Why did you hurt me? You said you love me then why did you give me this unbreakable pain. Come back to me abhay, I need you, we need each other abhay. I cannot live without you, just once hold me in your arms and make me smile again. Abhay she whisper and slowly drift to sleep.

u echoed Pia's restlessness so perfectly here.Poor girl!🥺

A cold chili came out of piya's window making her cruel up like a small child. She could hear the noise of the foot step but she was too exhausted to open her eyes to see who is this uninvited guest in her room, the last time she check she locked the window then who can dare to enter her room without her permission?

I love this desprcition of yours. it gives me such a visual imagery .!

The person kneel beside her and with his hand he removed the hair from her face and took her hands in his hand and healed her wound. Then kissed her palm and whisper, "sleep well my love, tomorrow is a new day, a new beginning." Then he vanished into dark night.

Awww, a new beginning.! 😍

Piya jumped up from her half sleep mood and screamed, " ABHAY!!." While her hands forward but the only sound she could hear was the silent of the night and her echo of abhay name.

Desperation to see her beloved.

Piya, " Just like every night it's just my dream, he was not here, why would he be here when he does not love me anymore, why would'" at the same moment she saw her palm and the wound was gone, she rubbed it with her other hand and got up from her bed and ran to her window.

Piya, " So you came and left without saying anything." She turn around and saw a red rose on top of her bed where she was asleep few minutes ago, she ran to grabbed it and picked it up with a shaking hand, nothing wanting this night to be a dream night. There was also a note beside it and an eagerly piya opened the note.

Piya my love, just so you now that I am coming for you.

Love Abhay ❤️

Piya brought that note to her lips and kissed it while she jump on the bed with joyness, "He is coming, he is coming only for me. I love you my bad boy abhay raichand." With a smile on her face she fell peaceful sleep.

Awww she knows her knight and shining armor is coming soon.!😍

thank you🤗

thank u for this amazing o.s. Loved it.! I want this to happen on the show.!😍

Originally posted by: shewascool90210

thank you.🤗