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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

@ Abhiya_vijata ...thanx dear...glad u lyk it

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: -srija-
hey piyali m glad u r back. thanx dear...i m happy 2
u nearly broke my heart yar. i m soo sorry dear...pls pls pls forgive me
coming to the poem its awsm. thanx...glad u lyk it
u made me cry. ohh no ...i again hurt u...😭
u might think m joking bt seriously ur poem opened up my wounds n made me cry. i ll never dare to thought that u r joking...cuz i know how it feels when someone leaves u...u got totally shattered...n i m sorry that i opened up ur wounds...n again make u felt that pain...😭

i looked up at u wen u tried 2 say gudbye.
But i was breaking inside when u didnt meet my eye.
U considered me a betrayer,u said m a fraud.
U said i hav stone attached instead of a heart.
U left me here 2 mourn my loss,u left me empty inside.
Every second i missed u,widout u every second i died.

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piyali.1228

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: abhiora
beautiful and emotional update piyali

thanx dear...glad u lyk it

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piyali.1228

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: peehu24
aww..that was beautiful..glad u back...

thanx peehu...these words meant me a lot...they also make me felt that yes there is someone who luvs me n cares 4r me...again thanx a lot 4r ur lovely words...they really encourage me...😛

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piyali.1228

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

With All My Heart

I never really believed,
In this whole "love" thing,
But when I first saw your face,
I could hear my heart sing.

That sweet smile on your face,
The gentle look in your eye,
Just one look at you,
And I could hear myself sigh.

I gathered my courage,
And walked right up to you,
From that day foward,
I knew it was true.

We just started out as friends,
And talking on the phone,
But I couldn't take it anymore,
So I let my true feelings be shown.

I told you how I really felt,
The love I had for you,
My worst fear was you'd turn away,
But that turned out not to be true.

You told me you felt the same,
But had the same fear as me,
From that day foward,
We knew it was meant to be.

I hope we'll always be together,
And things will never tear apart,
I'd also like to remind you,
That I love you with all my heart.

i hope guys u all ll enjoy it...n pls guys do press the lyk button n leave ur precious comments here...they really encourage me lot...😊

note- guys pls let me know should i continue this thread or stop it here only as the show is going to end...😕

Edited by piyali.1228 - 13 years ago

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sandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

lovely poem piyali

i loved it.

i line r perfectly describe all emotions

.wonderful job

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PRERNA VERMA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Hey Lovely Poem. Thanks for Pm and ya please continue writing.😊

Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago

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--faroo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

wow great poem n plz cont n thanks for pm

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shafaq

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Posted: 13 years ago

#259

Awww wat a beautiful poem yaaa loved it ... Nd d show is gonna end dnt u dare end this thread or i will suck ur blood ;> plzzz dear continue wid ur poem plzzz