A MYSTERIOUS LOVE STORY an abhiya ff note on pg64

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: priya.1
loved it shivani!!!
both love stories are realy good... loved abhayendra & maithili's 1st meeting... n also abhay & pia's... 😊
continue soon & precap seems interesting..

thanks will update soon
there won't be more of abhay maithali just bits and pieces but i will give their story as well every now and then

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
JUS LOVED IT:-):-)

thanks for reading

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
superb update shivani
i loved it .
abhay ana mazt first meeting was superb . waiting for next .

thanks yaar
there will be some more abhay metz

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: minibsp2007
Nice nice ..continue soon waiting for abhiya dance

thanks for reading will be updatng soon

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: bellaaa
superb abhiya first meeting awsome and evem abhay maithili was great now precap will be amazing abhiya dance wow thanks 4 pm me and plz now update contu ok

thanks for commenting will be updating soon

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
I'll kill you. Seriously it was that brilliant. That Ametz part was brilliant.

why killing me was it that bad😭
anyways there will be some more abhay metz scenes so u will have to bear with it😉😆

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sweety_crazed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#367

shivani🤗...firstly m sorry 4 being this late.😭..

it was awesome update n i luvd it.⭐️..

u expressed it sooo perfectly.⭐️.

i still couldn't get out of yr story it so mesmerizing.😍..

n u r a great story teller...as i always say even d tiniest of d details were given with perfection.👏..

aww...i luvd abhyendra here...i never thought will drool over him.😆..

do abhyendra has a sister????...wow d flash back of maithali was just mindblowing.⭐️..

i luvd d look of her dress.⭐️..so those two ladies were d dobriyals.!!..

but u ended d very moment..its totally unfair😭...my besharam mind was thinking more...but u just stopped.😭..

n my fav part was..."Panchi ..Panchi... don't torture the poor soul yaar. By the way Pia unfortunately this torturous fatty is my soul sister" ..i literally ROFLed...gosh misha..she was awesome.😆..

piya stole d show 4 me.!!..gosh i luvd her reactions...so stern n calm...i soo wanted her like this...continue soon n thnx 4 pm...m head over toe 2 read d next chapter !!!...

luv u loads n take care🤗

Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

amazing update..

abhayendra n metz were beautiful...

finally..abhay and piya face to face! Waiting 4 d love to start its magic already..the precap sounds really interesting ...continue soon...

Thanx 4 d pm

tc

abhiya love will start its magic soon and there will be some bits and pieces of abhayendra maithali as well
will continue soon

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: visufansona
aww shivani...khar sangu...u r such awesome writer..here every1 is..just wow..in writing.
tu pkyek chi cvs ka nahi zali?
jus loved it...yes read all parts...&all r awesome.
thank u very much..do pm me han!

thanks for reading i hope u have liked the story so far and i hope i will be able to keep u interested
will pm u for sure

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
shivani dt was an amazing update
once u said this to me,today i m saying i m in awe of ur writing skills
u write so well, dt most of d time i fall short of words
bt i wanna kill u for ending it at such an interesting point
nw pls update soon...cn't wait to read more

i m blushing now di😳 don't compliment this much yaar i won't be able to grab it all at once
i hope u won't kill me after u will read the continuation of it becoz i m afraid i will disappoint u this time in terms of romance

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