poem: PROMISES (caps added)

Peehu24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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He tells me he loves me,

And says all these beautiful

Words to me--


promises of a

Bright future and a life I

Long to have.


But these things have been said

Over times




and time continues

To pass, and makes me wonder

"Are we really meant to be?"


I ask him so much and he tells

Me nothing...





the only thing Said is "Wait and have faith

In me"...


But with no sign, and no

Answer, ignored at every turn,

How am I supposed to feel?


If only he would answer my

Questions,


if only he would

Communicate,




if only he had

As much interest in keeping


In touch with me as I do with him...


All the effort is being made by

Me, nothing comes from him except a

Bunch of promises...


I know he loves me and I trust his love


But this never ending pain often makes me wonder



Yes I know we are meant to be


Because its our undying love


Which have entwined us from within




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Rashiiii thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice work..Abhay is going wrong even if its unintentional..desperate times desperate measures...and Pia is all right in her place..
but i think Abhay never promised her A BRIGHT HAPPY FUTURE.. it was always meant to be dark and tough considering what he is..
but having said that,this is also not done for sure..
Hoping CVs ko akkal aaye.potion word and hassu k fangs daalne se supernatural ka quota nahi poora hota..this seems to me like a normal soap only..
and CVs Abhay ko ruin karna band karo.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWww.. such a cute poem peehu :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifrah.

AWww.. such a cute poem peehu :)

thanks a lot
Peehu24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you ash...🤗
..tora.tangled. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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brilliant peehu!'u put up piya's pov really well!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww...such an cute poem peehu..🤗the post killed me..☺️ especially the pics..and dialogue just suited it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful Peehu... 👏
Commenting on a post after a while 😆
I dont blame anyone of them... both are right and wrong at their places thats it.. situation is something like this... thanks for the caps 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome post peehu...😊
abhiya were looking cute...

Peehu24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a lot rashu

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