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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay guys I am creating topic like after so much time and that to little negative one so plz those like positive things plz dont read ahead =].

Tomorrow I have off so I just catched up repeat telecast and mind me I watched the sow after ages cz in past I had very less time and story just moving nowhere and CVs just roaming nowhere and again waste of my time better I had spent tym wid my PS instead of watching it. So I need to vent my frustration

>>Frst of this show is moving nowhere. This show is purely running in the inetrnet fan bases. When there are JiYa fans active they give jiya when abhiya fans then abhiya when abhina then they give abhina... Do they have there own thingy in.🥱

>>Abhay well I will say less on him but what he is doing is not right he is hrting Piya in present and Elena in future I knw he has some reasons[idk much in detail ant the reasons will be glad if someone enlightens me] but tht doesnt mean that will play around wid innocent for ur selfish reasons

>>R's they are now no more heroes but they are totally acting like willians and now I dont get one thing is anyone left in this show wjo is not willian🤔

>> Jeh well yeah I liked him but his character is turned into well whatever how can a bro use his own sister for hos selfish reason. I like RD acting anyhow and better he leave this show if he has to do such role. Now I am RD fan not Jeh fan

>>When the hell will CVs close down there past tracks or I shud say when will they give proper ending to every track

>>okay I didnt knew Kabeer and Misha track is going on but anyone rmbr in very episode Kabeer considered Misha as his sister😲

>>CVs cant handle supernatural stuff show is running just cz of indvidual or couple fan following

>>Biggest failiure is they try to handle multiple tracks like TVD but here they fail miserabely

>>Well if this continues then CVs get ready to get low TRPs as u people have got nice competition now

>>Many of u guys watch this show for ur fav couple well to them I have one ques what u want proper end so that u dont have to go thru this torture anymore wid 2 min glimpses of ur fav couple or continue wid dis crap as u r happy wid that 2 mins


p.s- I am not fan of this show is as simple as that just but yeah I am fan of indvidual actors mind actors not characters. Now I dont like any character in this show whether Misha, Piya or Jeh all are ruiened. If JiYa fans considers me disloyal well I dont have any prob with that and if ABhiya fans then too and if misha fan then too I dont have any prob cz I belive in standing for what I believe

Mano ya na mano in this show every character is messed up...

Feels awesome after venting out⭐️



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Posted: 13 years ago
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i agree with you...abhiya are my life..and yet every abhiya fan is presently heart broken..the cvs have made their enigmatic magic nothing but a complete joke after their confession...as all they ever even do in their 2 minute scenes is play on the tape recoder of continuous i love yous ..the cvs are making mockery out of something that has become deeply a part of us..for the reason..even though they are messing abhiya up big time..we cannot leave the show for these two..and believe me , we curse ourselves vehemently for it...and i completely agree with all the side characters being messed up with..no one agrees with abhay's present diplomatic decision..and considers this to be his worst action taken for damage control till now...there is not a flint of selflessness in his situation..and abhay has always personified selflessness normally unless situations force him to do so otherwise..the reason why he is playing with alina's emotions is because he needs to retrieve a potion from alina which will be able to save haseena from becoming an all time blood thirsty , nocturnal vampire to be completely revealed , and has to receive it immediately as the vampire clan has decided to kill haseena , considering her to be a threat for the exposure of their species , especially after she accidentally attacked chaand..as she feels as if someone else is controlling her radical actions..but using alina's emotions is obviously not the best decision...neither is breaking piya's heart unaccountably..even when she is his..hasn't she suffered enough for loving someone whom she has to lose her sanity and normalcy for?i don't agree with whatever abhay is doing either..and trust me..most of the members here don't either...and yeah , all the side characters have been severely messed up with..pre-leap everyone was so enjoyable...now tracker , angad..kabir and misha have become a sort of head-ache...not kabir exactly..but all the other side characters..most definitely...the cvs have messed up such a show with such vast and massive potential..it hurts to see that...especially being an abhiya lunatic..it hurts even more...i hate myself for being addicted to this show , seriously.
Edited by austenrox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome topic and very well said 👏👏👏
Okay, I dont know if you read my pervious posts in poca's topic and in some other topics too, i wrote almost the same and i just have same thinking as yours...
Let me also vent out my frustration and appreciate your topic in that process.
1. if we watch any vampire english series, we get to see lot of MEANINGFUL story and action...they show lot of background and stuff...and build up a nice story with all connections... in pkyek cv's had so much stuff to show but they just wasted it...there is no connection between any tracks..there are so many loose ends which are not even closed...
2. when sid entered, they cud have utilized and formed a better story like they were showing abt powerful ring and superiors...but unfortunately ended abruptly with some diff track with no proper logic for his evil nature...then an interesting mathili track was introduced, but that too just fizzled out...same goes with werevolves track...where they show weak plotting by werewolves...dipanitha was just randomly missing for what reasons dont know, then now she is back..what they want to show abt them, dont know...
they showed that some lady (supposed to be haseena) did accident to danchi and she left them in that state...but later they didnt close as to why haseena left them in that state...or for that matter they didnt reveal that it was haseena...but its just that we understood...
there are so many loose ends that have been forgotten to close them...
3. When this show started, my fav characters were kabir and misha...then kabir was made dumb and senseless...his char was ruined (though now he is fine and coped up)...then when sid track was introduced, my fav character was sid, then his char too u know...
and then when Jeh entered, i so loved his character, then he too was ruined very badly and made senseless
and now i loved alina and the same goes with her...
and if you look at misha, she had so much potential, but cv's were not utilising her properly...they give her not so cool lines and dumb storyline for her sometimes and they made her character bit annoying...
as far as abhiya goes, cv's really do not know how to show nice and new romantic scenes for abhiya just like how they do not know how to give cool lines to misha's character...
most abhiya fans are watching this show just like a regular love story show waiting for some hawt romantic scenes and drooling over it...but to me, they are just showing the same stuff about them again and again...the script and screenplay for abhiya romantic scenes lacks depth...
4. every character is shown to loose their sense becoz cv's project these characters like that eventually...be it sid, jeh, pia, arnav, panchi, misha, kabir, angad, ruhi, T, alina, chandeena and now abhay too...
5. every character gets repititive dialogues...looks like all the characters in pkyek are given repetitive dialogues...very poor writers i must say...
6. as far as the story goes, they just show khichidi abt 1 particular track like sid, jeh, and now haseena...the tracks go in diff directions without proper closure and they dont have connections between them...
no proper supernatural stuff...they just dont have proper story and depth...
Ps: no offense to anyone...i still watch pkyek just becoz its a youth based serial with all vampires and stuff...
Edited by abhina_roks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice post Sanju😳I agree with most of your points

Originally posted by: --sunshine--


>>Frst of this show is moving nowhere. This show is purely running in the inetrnet fan bases. When there are JiYa fans active they give jiya when abhiya fans then abhiya when abhina then they give abhina... Do they have there own thingy in.🥱

True Sanju...this show is moving nowhere.The creatives themselves don't know what they are showing.They never had and they still don't have a story at all.Even 5 year old kids would have done a better job with the show than these so called creatives.The writers are even more pathetic.🤢
I regret getting attached to Abhay-Piya.It feels bad when I watch their old scenes and think about what they could have been and what they are now.To me they were beautiful..they still are but sadly they are in the wrong show.

>>Abhay well I will say less on him but what he is doing is not right he is hrting Piya in present and Elena in future I knw he has some reasons[idk much in detail ant the reasons will be glad if someone enlightens me] but tht doesnt mean that will play around wid innocent for ur selfish reasons
Abhay used to be my favourite character from the show...not anymore.He pissed me off yesterday.What he is doing to Piya and Alina is wrong.There is no justification for that.Piya trusts him blindly and he has taken that for granted.I felt so bad for her yesterday.He broke her heart yet again...maybe for the 9999th time SleepyAnd what about poor Alina?If she is really innocent then she will lose herself to the darkness once she gets to know that Abhay was just using her.

>>R's they are now no more heroes but they are totally acting like willians and now I dont get one thing is anyone left in this show wjo is not willian🤔
I still don't see R's as villian just like i don't consider the K's as villians.Both are fighting for their respective clans.Atleast thats what the creatives want the viewers to believe😆

>> Jeh well yeah I liked him but his character is turned into well whatever how can a bro use his own sister for hos selfish reason. I like RD acting anyhow and better he leave this show if he has to do such role. Now I am RD fan not Jeh fan
I was never a Jeh fan to begin with but i used to like him before the ww revelation track. I just cannot find see any logic in his behaviour .How can he use his own sister even if its for the benefit of the clan?😕 I dislike Jeh now but I like RD.He is a fabulous actor...no doubt about it

>>When the hell will CVs close down there past tracks or I shud say when will they give proper ending to every track
This is the biggest problem with pkyek cretives.They start so many tracks at once without having a proper idea of what they have to do with them.Then they just forget about these tracks without giving any logical end or proper explaination.

>>okay I didnt knew Kabeer and Misha track is going on but anyone rmbr in very episode Kabeer considered Misha as his sister😲
I used to find MishKa cute when their love track had started but later on they started to bore me.In tvd you don't find any tracks boring...Caro-Tyler inspite of not being the leads are loved by all.Pkyek writers have failed big time!They just don't know how to make use of the parellel leads like Misha,Kabir etc without torturing the viewers

>>CVs cant handle supernatural stuff show is running just cz of indvidual or couple fan following
True that the creatives can't handle supernatural stuff.I end up laughing when i see 'pkyek's super natural stuff'.If they cannot handle it then don't waste time showing it.Work towards the development of the main track.

>>Biggest failiure is they try to handle multiple tracks like TVD but here they fail miserabely
Exactly!!
>>Well if this continues then CVs get ready to get low TRPs as u people have got nice competition now
The trps are already low.😆I have a feeling that pkyek will not continue after the revamp.

>>Many of u guys watch this show for ur fav couple well to them I have one ques what u want proper end so that u dont have to go thru this torture anymore wid 2 min glimpses of ur fav couple or continue wid dis crap as u r happy wid that 2 mins
To be honest I prefer this show going off air now rather than continuing without a proper story.Abhay-Piya were the reason i tolerated this show for one year inspite of the pathetic tracks.But i don't have patience anymore.
I have almost stopped watching pkyek.I just read the written updates now and then watch the AbhIya scenes if any.Lately even AbhIya have started to bore me because of their monotoous scenes and dialoguesShocked.I prefer watching old AbhIya scenes.
I'm really sick of this show!I watch EHMMBH at 8:30 now and I like it.If pkyek continues to be as crappy as it is now then very soon I'll say goodbye to even the written updates.😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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woahha frst thing in this late morning for me to check IF and then this topic :D loved all the comment will reply now =]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Agree wid each n every point of urs.but da point related to Kabir cracked me up.🤣 I can remember very well,when dey showed Kabir and Misha together cono 4 da 1st tym,he was calling Misha his 'official chhutku sister'.N nw he wants to make her his gf😆.CV's hav ruined Kabir's character.first,Kabir was wid 'T'(according to 'T'),Den he fell in love wid Piya,post leap he was madly in love wid 'T'(remember,T's b'day and Te Amo😆),and nw,He's nw in 'love' wid Misha🤣...CV's hav made a joke of da word called 'love'...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOLzie 🤣
Mere dil ki baat keh di finally aapne👍🏼🤣 I actually feel pathetic these days because I am addicted to this crappy show which promised us to give a love story of a Vampire and a human but oh! what did we get?? The leads never together but always busy romancing with the other people of the show😳

Had they focused properly on Abhiya from the very beginning then I don't think people would have liked Jiya or Abhinna as couples. It is because AP were never shown together(except for those two weeks pre-leap) that people never got attached to them leaving aside dumbheads like me😳

Oh and don't talk about the story, characters and the logic. This show actually ran due to some characters and AP pre-leap (not the supernatural element), but now the TRPs of 0.4 and 0.5 say it all.

And how unromantic and un-creative the CVs can be, I got to know after seeing this show🐷
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I lost my interest in this show ill read the update instead.
Now its a boring show... they dont show a proper love track of abhiya. The storyline is totally messad up. They showed to much of birdie..like she is tha lead.
i agree 100% with u
👏👏👏
>>Abhay well I will say less on him but what he is doing is not right he is hrting Piya in present and Elena in future I knw he has some reasons[idk much in detail ant the reasons will be glad if someone enlightens me] but tht doesnt mean that will play around wid innocent for ur selfish reasons.
This girl went through a lot of pain, hurt and she's is not a doll.
abhay should treath her with lots of respect.

>>R's they are now no more heroes but they are totally acting like willians and now I dont get one thing is anyone left in this show wjo is not willian🤔
i dont like it also😵

>> Jeh well yeah I liked him but his character is turned into well whatever how can a bro use his own sister for hos selfish reason. I like RD acting anyhow and better he leave this show if he has to do such role. Now I am RD fan not Jeh fan
in the begin he had such a great storyline..he was positive sensible but now he's a villian..
>>When the hell will CVs close down there past tracks or I shud say when will they give proper ending to every track
thats good.. cv's give us sum decent ending of this show.. u guys closed ur eyes of what we demanded for months.
This show is soo boring end it please
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>>okay I didnt knew Kabeer and Misha track is going on but anyone rmbr in very episode Kabeer considered Misha as his sister😲
thats incest ieeuhw yuck.. thats really cheep!!!!!!

>>CVs cant handle supernatural stuff show is running just cz of indvidual or couple fan following
i agree with u

>>Biggest failiure is they try to handle multiple tracks like TVD but here they fail miserabely
i have one thing to show u and that is a👍🏼 for ur point.

>>Well if this continues then CVs get ready to get low TRPs as u people have got nice competition now
i think thats what these guys want. 🤢

Edited by .Reshama. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice to see u on the forum again.. and i agree with u 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sanju gud to c u making Topic... 🤗
and abt d show...i feel like laughing🤣
dis is wat d creatives r taking inspirations from Twilight and TVD...🤓🤣
They have ruined every character...
And d leads dey r yet not given proper focus...😳
plus Abhaya scenes r quite predictable nowadays😆
hug kiss and Pose scene khatam🤣
seriously creativity is nowhere to be seen...🤓
and sum unnecessary Useless scenes r shown as daily routine🤢 and d main characters r sidelined...
And abt dat Kabir considering misha as sister and now falling in love is a big example how foolish and memory loss creatives are🤣
and TRP's if these type of unwanted scenes goes on its obviously it will go down😆
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