AN ANGEL OF MINE chapter 5 updtd page30 - Page 19

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Superbb update Shivani... thanks i m glad you liked it

Piya scolding Jeh was too good... 😆 Loved it... thanks yaar i hope i m not upsetting anyone its the demand of the story and Kabir... woh yeh natak dekhker maja le raha tha... 😆 he can't do anything else than enjoy himself

and seems like Katherine is Abhay's past love and both have mutual feeling till now. well she was a important part of his past but in what sense for that you will wait for the next chapter I hope it wont cause a rift between Abhiya. nothing can break abhiya's eternal love and I just love the song - Back to december 😳 Its one of my fav from Taylor Swift as well... 😳 yaa i loved it and thought of using it here

I specially liked the first song u mentioned where Abhiya were lost in each other and rest I have to listen...will do later 😊 all of them are rocking songs do listen to them

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow nice story plz update soon

Originally posted by: TISA07

Oh no!abhays past luv?hope it dsnt ruin abhiya.nd lykd da way piya scolded jay.

Originally posted by: piyali.1228

srry 4r d late rply dear cuz i m nt well hey its completely ok wish you best of luck to regain good health soon

btw

its amazing

superb thanks

i can imagine the whole concert i have attended a concert once of living damned so i decided to depict my own experience

n the pain of abhay right at that moment when he listen her name

really superb yaar thanks she is a very important person to him

i luved it

n thanx 4r d pm my pleasure

do continue will try

tc😊

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

👏superb shivani i loved the part when pia scolded jay i enjoyed it 😆thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: madhuri16

shivani🤗🤗🤗...(here m with my essay😆...wat 2 do u make me write) hey thanks a lot for this much appreciation although i don't think i deserve it

it was such a marvelous update...hilarious...fabulous..⭐️.

gosh m running out of words!!!... thanks for being so kind at me

wow...u just made d whole thing live..👏.

.i really visualized it

it was sooo rich(d way u describe) n perfect.⭐️...i have attended a concert of living damned once so i tried to write what i saw that day

d songs were truly amazing⭐️...n Back 2 December is even my fav.😳.. yaa its a gr8 song i love its lyrics so i decided to use it here as it depict katherine's feelings fully

d way piya answered jeh...i luvd it 2 d core😆😆...but my poor jeh🥺🤣i like him yaar😳 oh i m sorry but no offence to jai fans its the demand of the story jai is negative here i hope you won't mind

i agree with kabir..they both r good at saying lies..😆😆 yaa pyaar insaan se kya kya nahi karata

kabir was really cute n understanding...wish misha falls 4 him..😍😍she will soon after all no one can ignore such true and virginal love for long

trangad!!!thnx 4 giving them corner seat.🤣.. its for the best of them, their friends even us😆

omg!! d alina's blabbering part with abhay n his expresions...while piya enjoying it was really cute n funny.🤣🤣.. what to do yaar abhay is so cute how can pia control herself

so katherine😕..is some one who was close 2 abhay earlier n left him later...were they in a relation??..😕 yes they were very close but in what sense that will be revealed in the next chapter

i don't want her 2 be after abhay😒... well no one can ressist his charms he is the most desirable man on this planet

anyways..i luvd her entry😛😊...chalo after giving such a cute update...u r forgiven 4 being late😆.. thank you gosh finally i m relieved

.btw...now i want more of abhiya romance😳 well just wait for a while you will sure get it

now m really curious abt this new girl!!! continue soon...m waiting eagerly..😊. will sure try to update soon

tc,

madhu.😊 thanks for ur beautiful words🤗

Originally posted by: abhiora

brilliant update shivani!luvd it!nw i hpe katherine doesnt create problems!cntnu soon

Originally posted by: sunflower52

Fab update. Thanks for the pm. Hope Abhiya remain together.