Originally posted by: mandy1024
Best update of this FF! 👏 Superb, mindblowing, fantastic, awesome, fabulous n well, I've run out of adjectives for this one! 👏 Super charged with thrilling moments, emotions n love. Sid is feeling remorse at wat he did he to Alina n Metz well lets not talk abt her 🤢 I felt sorry for Jeh too 😭 But more than all this, my heart went out to Pia. How can Pia still love the man who killed her sis n slaughtered her father in front of her own eyes? 😭 She knows Abhay isn responsible but still this wont bring either Panchi or Arnab back. To top it off, she is fighting for her baby 😭 Sid wants to finish Abhay n so do the werewolves n Metz wants to turn him into a monster which is far worse than being dead. I am scared for Abhay Even if Pia does forgive him, can he forgive himself for the countless lives he claimed? Can he forgive himself for inflicting this unbearable pain on Pia by having first killed Panchi n then Arnab? 😭 It was really hurting to see Pia beg Abhay to spare her life tat too not for herself but for their child 😭 U have written it so well tat I could literally picture the whole thing infront of me. Brillaint job 👏⭐️ This is the kind of story that will qualify as a dark love story not the candyfloss romance we are seeing on screen right now.
I'm thrilled this UPDATE was to your liking MANDY. The action in it was meant to be super charged never allowing U to take a break because Abhay is on a rollercoaster ride.Pia can't even scream, lash out, hit Abhay or accuse and abuse him to vent out but swallow all of her Pain to get her ABHAY back with LOVE. Anger doesn't kill ANGEL but LOVE always wins over. I thought the baby would add an extra dimension to this story because now Abhay isn't just doing this for Pia but for their baby. It makes it more of a HEART tugged emotional blast of fireworks
need to worry for Abhay turning full 360 evol coz Maithali and Sid forget ABHAY still has hope left in him. Will Pia forgive Abhay is an answer even i don't know not gone that far yet but we know ABHAY well enough to know this truth will eat away at him because he had given PIA immense PAIN.
I guess i appeal to the MATERNAL instincts in all of us girls when i wanted Pia to beg for her childs life making ABHAY weak at the knees. It was a hell of a way to bring him back to EARTH.
I tried my best to add shock value and mix it up with my signature emotional overkill. I saw it playing in my head at night and got inspired to write this down.
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