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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: peehu24
awesomethanks peehu😳..loved it.glad u liked it😳.misha and her language 😆...gosh..aww...abhiya moment was cutethanks ...piya was crying..aww..i hope abhay runs behind her in next update 😳he will😆update soon.will try.and thanks for pmmy pleasure😳...

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome updatethanks pari😳
finally Abhiya metya finally !!
but why did Piya cried?u will know that very soon😳
continue soonsure😳

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
haha nice updatethanks shrish😳.No dear I m not upset yaar ab Abhay tharkey hai toh tharkey hi bolengeya he is tharkey but now i will miss his tharkigiri also😭 & I m happy u learnt new words frm me afterall haahhayes u r my chalti phirti dictionary🤣.Ok I love Abhiya 1st meetingpheww achha hua sabko pasand aa gayi varna i was a bit nerveous that kuchh zyada fictious na lage but glad u liked it😳 & Abhisha's bonding😳i wanted that in the show also but koi baat nahi😳

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

@alicia- thanks dear
@sunflower-aww glad u liked it dear
@shivranjini - ya perfect college vaise bhi aajkal ke colleges mein studies kam aur tharkeyness zyada hai

@piyali - thanks allot dear . glad u liked it . take care u too :-)
@richa - thanks dear thats so sweet of u . m glad u liked it .

sorry guys short mein nipta diya but have to go so hope u understand:-)

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Monkey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Awesome,lovely update.pls pm me nxt tym.

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Why didnt you pm me ????? I missed your privious chapter...

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

@tisa- thanks dear will pm u
@rashi - oh m really sorry dear will keep in mind next time :-)

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

When will you update the next chapter?????

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

chapter 4
pia kept running n crying . she could just remember her dreams . he was wid her . they both were about to kiss that everything just vanished n darkness was everywhere . she heard a sound of thunder n that brought her back to reality n she realized that she was too far from the college campus. pia was now alone in the dark forest . she wiped her tears n thought "damn it !! what m going to do now ?" she was panicking coz she didn't know the way also . n she was tired also coz she kept running busy in her thoughts so she didn't realize that she spent whole day running only !!
her dreams were haunting her badly . sumtimes they gave her pleasure n the other time they just made her cry . she cried " help help !! is anyone here ?" now she was scared that she heard sum noise . she turned around n saw abhay . pia was thinking about what just happened in the college .
what would i say him thatb i ran away from u coz u r my perfect admirer ? pia thought but her eyes were still down . she was busy wid her own thoughts that she saw abhay was cuming closer .
abhay - u ok ?
pia hasitantly- ya m fine
they both smiled
abahy - m abhay raichand n u ?
he extended his hand
she kept her hand in his n said
pia - m pia jaiswal
abhay - i think u r new to college ?
pia- ya actually we shifted from other city thats y ..
abhay - i think its getting dark we need to go
pia panicking - but i don't know the way !!
abhay - don't worry u cum wid me n then we will find out sum way ok ?
pia smiled - fine

raichand mansion
haseena was continously walking here n there looking at the watch .
haseena - where is abhay ? oh god what shall i do wid this boy ?
sid - mom calm down he must be cuming ..
haseena- but he cums at 5 daily but its 6:30 right now !!
sid - mom just wait he might be cuming na
haseena - but misha n stacy said he didn't attend the classes also !!
he is okay na ? i hope he has not gone so far
looking at haseena's worried face sid smiled n thought "mom i know u love both of us . m just wondering what will happen after he cums ?
will u able to scold him ?" sid smiled again
haseena looking at him smiling - y r u smiling sid ?
sid - urmm nothing mom i think i shoul call stacy
sid was about to call stacy that misha entered wid stacy n panchhi in almost a speed of a rollercoaster !!
sid- u found him ?
misha - no yaar pata nahi kahan hai ye pagal ?
sid - u called him ? i tried but he is not picking it up
misha - i tried but he isn't picking it up
sid looked at panchhi n asked - who is she ?
stacy - she is panchhi , her friend pia is also here we thought if we find
them together
sid - ok
misha again tried to call him . this time he picked up

forests
abhay looked at his cell n the name was shining "miss tapori dangerous "
pia was confused who might be this !!
abhay picked up but before he could say halo misha started
misha - abe dhakkan kidher hai tu ?
abhay - halo miss tapori
misha - dekh no need of formality n if u say sumthing stupid then u
can't even imagine what i can do !! where r u hun ? u know how
much we all r tensed ? wait wait y would u care ? u might be
busy wid ur any bimbo gf right ?
abhay - ho gaya ? ab mai bolun ?
misha - jaldi bak
abhay - m in the forests n m wid pia . we both lost r way
misha - so pia is wid u ?
abhay - u know her ?
misha - no stupid her friend panchhi is searching for her
abhay - we r cuming don't worry n tell her friend to stay there only
misha - fine
she hung up the phone

pia asked who was it . he told her about misha . they both were now enjoying each other's company . they told about their families n pia told him that she was a kid when her father died n then she n her mother were alone n she always studied in girls' school n panchhi is her childhood friend . when pia n sugandh came to dehradun panchhi also came there wid her family .
all this while abhay was just thinking that what kinda name is panchhi ?
but he thought it would be better if he keeps quite coz pia loved her n she was her best friend .
it was getting very dark n they both were getting bored so abhay asked her if she knows singing . first she hesitated a bit but then she sang few lines
tu aaja
tu aaja
mujhko meri saza to suna ja
woh aanhein han woh ansun mere hisse ke muh ko rula ja
sapne tere saare
jinme main rehti thi
tukde banke mere
zakhm seene me bhar gaye
mene mere jaana ab hai jaana
ishq tera dard tera haye
suddenly it thundered n pia got scared n hugged abhay tightly
she was very close to him . so close that they both could feel each other's heart beat .
abhay smiled n said - everything is fine pia
pia realize what she was doing . she got embarrassed .
"its okay " said abhay reassuring her . pia smiled .
finally they both reached raichand mansion

raichand mansion
stacy opened the door n sighed in relief that they both were here now.
she was shocked to see pia but she tried to not to bring that on her face.
abahy directly went to haseena n said - m sorry mom but i know u luv
ur son n u won't scold him .
u know how much m scared if u
get angry wid me . please
he made a puppy face .
haseena smiled at his son's behaviour.
sid - i knew it
abhay - what ?
sid - that only u r the one who can escape easily from mom 's scold
everyone laughed
misha - OK so pia n abhay as u both were busy in jungle mein mungle
i wanna tell u there is a trip from our college .
so r u both cuming ?
pia - i will ask from my mom
abhay asked from haseena - mom may i go ?
haseena - no
abhay - but y ?
haseena - i don't need to give u any explaination abhay !! m ur mom
abhay - but mom i wanna go
haseena- fine then go !! i knew that one day my sons won't listen to me !!
u don't need ur mom anymore na ? u can make ur decisions on
ur own . bacche kitni jaldi bade ho jaate hain . i still remember
u used to be in my lap n eat from my till u were 10 !!
abhay - mom please i won't go but don't tell them that i used to urgghh
haseena - now u feel ashamed if ur mom tells about ur childhood
this was enough for misha to tease him .
misha - haww abhay u used to behave like a child
"shut up misha " said madhu cuming inside .
madhu - u don't need to tease him
that was enough for her to keep her mouth shut as she knew she can't say anything in front of her mom
pia- i think i shall go now . lets go panchhi
abhay - i can drop u
pia- no thanks i can go bye
abhay - bye
he went wid them till the door
sid- oye hoye , my bro is liking sumone ?
abhay - pehle khud ko dekho bhai . u r still holding stacy bhabhi's hand
stacy blushed n said- abhay don't call me bhabhi
abhay - don't be shy bhabhi
stacy - i think i shall leave now
sid - i'll drop u
stacy- i can go sid
abhay - don't stop him bhabhi . he needs soe privacy wid u
stacy blushed n ran towards car
sid glared at abhay n followed her
they both were out now
stacy was still smiling n blushing . she went scarlet red hearing bhabhi for her from abhay's mouth .
sid - hey what happened ?
stacy - nothing
she was still looking down smiling shyly
sid kept his hand on her chin n lifted it up .
sid - hey we are engaged
stacy - i know n m too happy
sid leaned towards her n placed his lips on hers .
they both were kissing each other till their perfect moment was disturbed by rain .
they both went in car n moved ahead .

pheww i know u might be thinking how lazy i can be ? but u don't know its too early for me😆
OK so now some serious discussions
do u people want me to continue ? i mean as the show is ending whether u people want me to still continue this ? hope u liked this chapter 😳please hit the like button n comment 😳 hope u liked it 😳

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PRERNA VERMA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Please continue all your FFs.😃 Nice Update!😊

Miss tapori & Mr. Dhakkan😆 Haseena is so sweet.Loved her dialogue-You don't need your mom anymore. Now you can take all decisions on your own na. Afterall it's your life.Bacche kitni jaldi bade ho jaate hai. 😆 Continue soon Deepa and thanks for Pm!😊

Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago

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