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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

its beautiful dr... i just loved it... n abhay pia finally met... cool i hope abay also remember dat pia is d same girl who he dreams about every night... cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...

n i want u 2 cont ur ff...


thanks a lot akshi 😳 yup abhay will soon remember about it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vikramdey

😭ooo please don't stop this beautiful story😭 after ending of this show all of yours FFs are the only ambrosia for us as we don't have any other entertainment left except that saas bahu crap 🤬which I am not interested to see



aww thanks a lot dear that means a lot to me 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

awesome..loved it...

abhiya were cute...but i loved haseena..her dialogues...haha...it was cool...
hey dont end it..would love to read more..thanks for pm...


thanks peehu 😳 glad u liked it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

awesome update

misha and abhay conversation s too good and abhiya r cute , haseena it was cool caring mother dear continue u r ff i love to read .


thanks soni 😳 glad u liked it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow dear awesome updatethanks shrshti😳.So Abhiya were lost in jungle.yup junglr mein mungle 😳So romantic but y stacy was shocked 2 c Pia.u will get ur answers😳Wht is Abhiya's story?u will know that also very soon Me 2 excited yaar😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

hey that was an awesome updatethanks shivani😳
abhiya and sid stacy were so cuteglad u found them cute 😳
i hope soon abhiya will fall for each otherthey have started
thanks for the pm and continue soonma pleasure n i will do that soon😳
everyone of us will be here to read even after show ends
aww thanks for that😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

will do that😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 5
abhay was angry wid haseena so he avoided eye contact n didn't reply also.
haseena - abhay please try to understand its for u only
abhay didn't reply to her
haseena - abhay please try to understand. its not safe for u to go there
this made him more angry . he thought haseena still took him like a baby .
he directly went to haseena's room .
misha - aunty y is he going to ur room ?
haseena - i don't beta lets check
haseena , masdhu n misha went to chandeena's room n saw abhay taking out the same old book which they tried to hide from him .

abhay took that book out n thought "mom, now lets see . u told me not to even touch these books but m gonna read this whole book ." n saying this he took the book n went to his own room . misha ,haseena n madhu followed him . they all tried to hide behind the door so he doesn't get any clue .
misha whispered -don't worry aunty he can't open it now . mom told me
that u opened it already
but to their shock as abhay touched the book it got opened automatically. it was a shock for abhay too but he thought he was dreaming .
misha - aunty we need to stop him
madhu - no misha . haseena , its high time he faces the reality
haseena - but how will he face the torture ? they won't let him go so
easily
madhu kept her hand on haseena's shoulder
madhu - but we are not having that much time n if we do any delay
it would be more difficult for him . pia is already facing them
alone n abhay needs to support her .
haseena nodded - ok lets go
n they all left . madhu n misha left for their home n haseena was in her room . chand didn't cum from the office yet . abhay was in his room .

abhay started reading the book . as he opened automatically one page turned in front of him n he read "the incomplete love story " .
he started reading
" in the world of witchcraft , a king ruled who had a princess named maithili . she was a half witch n half fairy . it was a rare combination as her father was a wizard n her mother was a fairy . though both fairies n witches have same magic but as a combination she had dark n white magic n she was extreme powerful but her powers were yet to be activated as per the rules , when she was 20 , then only her powers would be activated . it was just 1 year left for her to be 20 . as it was her 19th birthday . the king gave a big party for his daughter . in the party she met a boy wid icy blue eyes n was tall . his features were perfect . she found him polite . his name was abhyendra . after that party they both became good friends n slowly they both started having feelings for each other . abhyendra proposed maithili but she refused as she knew it would be dangerous for both of them . as abhyendra wasn't aware of his powers n his powers would be activated when he himself realizes that , as her father told her . abhyendra was heartbroken n left the place .
after few months a strong wizard named raver came there to propose maithili . first she refused but her father told her if she didn't get married on her 20th birthday which was now after 20 days , she won't be able to use her powers . she told him she will be ok widout powers also but the king told her to marry for the sake of the people of the kingdom . maithili didn't want to marry raver as she loved abhyendra but as a good princess she accepted the proposal . after 20 days , maithili stopped talking to everyone . she behaved like a zombie now . she even learned the truth that raver was not a good wizard . he just wanted to marry her coz if he would marry her , she would be in his control n he would be able to use her powers . but maithili didn't refuse yet as for maithili , he heart stopped beating . sumone told her that abhyendra jumped off a cliff coz he was heartbroken n couldn't bear that pain anymore . she blamed herself for this but she didn't know that it was all fake as raver got to know about their love n he told them to say so . at the marriage when both raver n maithili were about to kiss as per the rules so that their marriage would be considered as a marriage , abhyendra entered all bleeding . maithili saw him n ran towards him . she was crying badly looking at him n hugged him tightly . raver could not control his anger n told his men to finish him off . raver held maithili from her arm n insisted her to marry him . however , maithili freed herself n ran outwards to abhyendra . she saw him laying on the floor all bleeding . she sat near him n kept his head on her lap . but suddenly raver came n killed both of them !! but after he left in anger maithili's father n mother both showered their powers on abhyendra n maithili wid abhyendra's parents . they needed 2 more powerful wizards wid them .
for their support , abhyendra's best friend sidhharth n maithili's best friend sanya (guys its stacy ) who both were in love helped them . but as raver's powers were very strong it was difficult for them to bring abhyendra n maithili back to life . in result , both sanya n siddharth lost their lives . maithili n abhyendra's parents pleaded to lord antro , the supreme power to help them . he couldn't bring them back to life but said "they all four will reborn n will win n defeat that evil wid my help"

abhay took a long breath n closed the book . he thought "y i think i know this story ? may be coz almost all stories r same !!" he kept the book on the desk .

D'souza mansion
sid n stacy were having dinner wid stacy's parents . sid told them he wasn't hungry but they insisted him to have it .
mrs d'souza - so sid beta how is everything going in the office ?
sid - evrything is fine aunty
mrs d'souza - u again called me aunty . i told u na to call me mom . u r my
son beta
sid - sorry mom
sacy was looking upset . mr.d'souz noticed it as both sid n mrs.d'souza were busy wid themselves
mr - what happened stacy
stacy - nothing dad . i just wish i didn't fall sick n could complete my
studies wid sid only . my half of the time got wasted .
mr d'souza - so r u upset coz u couldn't complete ur studies at time or
coz u couldn't complete them wid sid ?
stacy smiled shyly n looked at sid . he smiled back cutely n asked
sid - ya stacy please tell us
stacy blushed n ran towards her room .
sid - i 'll just cum
he smiled n followed stacy . stacy n sid were in her room alone .
sid came closer n stacy went backwards . he came more closer n she took 2 more steps backwards . it kept on going till she was stuck between sid n the wall . he started kissing her neckline . she started losing her senses.
stacy - sid
he kept his finger on her lips n said "sshhh , we both r alone "
she smiled shyly . he locked his lips wid stacy's rosy lips . (😭 its too hard for me to write sid romancing wid sumone else 😭)
they both were kissing passionately but their perfevt moment was ruined by the knock on the door . it was stacy's mom . they both got embarrassed n left the room .
sid - OK so i shall leave now .
mrs D'souza - nice to have dinner wid u .
sid - same her aunty sorry mom
they all laughed n sid left .

haseena was in her room n she was looking very tensed . chand entered n asked "what happened haseena ?"
haseena - chand , i think abhay won't be able to
chand - its OK haseena .
haseena - but chand he is not even talking wid me
chand - haseena , try to understand . u r thinking like a mother . a
mother can only think to protect her child but darling, u know
in order to protect him , u urself r hurting him the most . u r
separating him from the rest of the world .
haseena realized - OK chand . so i will let him go for the trip
chand - thats good

sid entered the raichand mansion n heard abhay screaming "maithili ".
he saw chandeena rushing towards abhay's room n sid also followed them.
they saw abhay was sweating badly n his hand was bleeding too .
haseena sat beside him n took his hand in hers . sid handed her the first aid box n she covered abhay's palm wid the badage . but abhay was looking all lost
sid - abhay how r u bleeding ?
but he didn't response just a drop of tear came out of his eyes n he said
"maithili " . this shocked chandeena to the core . she cupped his face n kissed on his forhead .
abhay - mom maithili (his voice was shaking )
haseena - abhay don't worry everything is fine
sid came wid a glass of water n handed it to haseena . she made him drink the water n kept it on the table .
haseena - beta m sorry
abhay - mom u don't need to be sorry . i was the one who behaved
immature
abhay kept his head in her lap .
sid - chhote , what happened ?
abhay was scared of recalling that dream but decided to tell him
abhay - bro , i told u about that girl na , it was pia but she was maithili
sid - abhay what r u saying ?
abhay - i don't know bhai . maithili was waiting for me standing at that
big door which was burnt . i went their n she came running
towards me but a dark shadow killed her
n a drop of tear came out from his eye
sid thought its better to not disturb him . he was looking scared !!
haseena tried to change the topic
haseena - abhay , i have decided that u will go to the trip n m sorry i
didn't permit u before but i was just a bit scared for u . i
m ur mother n i care for u
abhay - m sorry mom
n he closed the eyes n slept in her lap.

NEXT DAY IN THE COLLEGE
everyone was ready to go for the trip n sat in the bus .
misha kept her hand around abhay's neck n said
misha - mere laal , mere neele , mere hare , mere peele , how did u hurt
ur hand ? will u tell me please ?
abhay - nothing ms dangerous , it was coz of the glass . when i was
sleeping , accidently the glass fell by hand n a peice of glass
hurt my hand
misha - mujhe toh pata hi tha sumthing stupid reason must be there .
after all how will u take care of urself coz u only know flirting
wid bimbos nothing else . tharkey kahin kaa !!
abhay - shut up tapori
suddenly abhay saw pia entering the bus . his heart stopped beating almost .
misha - hey pia
pia - hi misha (she said while smiling )
hi abhay
abhay - hi pia
pia took the seat behind wid pancchi . whenever abhay heard her name always he just smiled thinking what kind of name was that .
panchhi - pia is everything fine now ?
pia smiled - ya
panchhi - take care of u babes .
actually pia also dreamt the same dream which abhay dreamt .

peehu dear , why do i feel like u will now surely get heart-attack 😆 just coz of u now my fingers r paining 😆 achha ok guys m really sorry for the delay but u know how lazy i m right ?😆 i know there wasn't much abhiya here but this part was needed n don't worry next part mein there would be full of abhiya 😉 hope u guys liked it😳 if u actually liked it them please hit the like button n comment 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awesome update I so loved it yaar.So Abhay-Pia r reborn.Me so excited 4 nxt part.Abhiya romance not bad.Oh hate raver😡.Plzz continue😳

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