FF #Dont separate us# First chapter

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello People I have completed my first chapter! I had earlier posted the character introduction but just in case anybody missed it here is the link!
So here it is! I hope you like it!

Pia!' Mr Dobriyal said in the morning. Yes Papa Pia replied. Mr dobriyal said that Misha is not well so I am going to take her to the dctor and Panchi has gone to Danish's house so you would have to ask one of your friends to pick you up. At first Pia was extremely sad when she heard that as she loved to go to her college with her dad but just a second later she got really happy. She though in her mind that if nobody can drop me then I can call Abhay. Atleast I can spend some extra time with him this way. But just as she thought so Jeh arrived and told her that her father had called him and told him to accompany her to the college. Mr. Dobriyal was not very happy with Abhay and Pia's relationship as he was not very fond of Abhay's father. But he did not want his daughter's life to get disturbed because of him so he never told her anything about it. When Pia heard about what Jeh said she was not really happy but Jeh was a good friend so she did not react much to it. After they reached the college Pia did not even say thanks to Jeh and just ran out of the car. Jeh felt really bad and followed her. As Pia ran out of the car she went straight to see Abhay. She saw him standing a little far away from her and called him Oh Abhay Jee. Zara yaha bhi aao. Abhay gave his cutest smile ever! And came towards her. Pia gave him a sweet look and said How are you? I missed you so much. Feels like I have not spoken to you for such a long while! Abhay laughs nad starts blushing* You know we just spoke to eachother an hour ago? Pia giving a sarcastic look and saying Really? I spoke to you? I never knew! Abhay smiles and says Pia what would I have done without you. You have made my dark life so colorful! You make me feel so special! Pia hugs him and says if you were not there I would have died! Jeh who is overhearing the whole conversation feels very jealous and angry and walks away from there. Just then Kabir goes to Abhay and Pia and says Agar tum dhono ka romance katham ho gaya ho tho Pia could you please tell me ki Misha kaha hai? (Looking shy) Pia then says Oh Kabir Misha did not call you? She is not well so she would not come today. Just then Kabir says Whatt!! And youre telling me this now? Im going to see her right now! Just as he runs from there Pia screams Ja Kabiraa ja! Kabir says shut it and runs away!
Pia tells Abhay that she was going to see Alina and would be right back. She comes back looking worried and says Abhay, Till when will you hide Maithili? Because she looks like me, she cant come out of her house too! Abhay says that Pia you dont have to worry about all this. I will handle everything!
Pia says I know you will Abhay! Thats why I am with you! Pia winks* Abhay says Oh really! And he tells her bye and goes to the library. Just as he reaches the library Jeh stops him and says How many times have I told you to stay away from Pia! Dont you ever understand? Abhay smirks and says ohh I can smell something burning!
Jeh is unable to control his temper and just walks away. Alina comes to Abhay then and says Hi Abhay! How are you? (Giving her most shy look)
Just as Abhay and Alina were talking Pia sees them and is not very happy to see them together. Pia interupts their convo and says Oh Alina! I wanted to show you something. And takes her away. Abhay smells something really weird. Though Pia knows that Abhay will love only her she just cant stand anybody else with him as after many difficulties there were finally together!
Then the Raichands house! Haseena and Chand are thinking about Abhay and Pia's relationship. Chand says That girl can cause us alot of harm if she tells anybody about what we are. Haseena replies confidently She will not. Her love for Abhay is too pure. She will never do so! Chand replies I hope youre right! I am still mad at Abhay for letting her know about us. The only way we have left is making her one among us now. Haseena looking shocked! No! Abhay will never let that happen! He trusts her too much. He would do something like that only if it is really necessary. Chand replies Who said we are going to ask him. Haseena laughs and says If you do so even without asking him he will save her. I am sure of that!
On the other hand Kabir goes to see Misha. He says Msha how are you? Why didnt you call me? What happened to you? How did you fall sick? Misha who was really tired tells Kabir shut up! IF you ask me so many questions I will have to think about the answers and I am just too tired to think about anything at the moment! Kabir feeling hurt said Mish I was just worried you know... Misha smiles and says Chup karo and sit here. I am fine now! Slight fever hi tha! Kabir says Thank God sounding relieved now.
Back to the college Jeh's uncontrolable temper does something really bad to him. He starts transforming into a wolf right inside the college. His nails start turning black.

Next Chapter
Jeh tries to run but will he make it out of the college? To know about it catch my next chapter!
Thanks!
If you want to Read my next chapter please do PM me!
And please do comment cause I will write my next chapter only if I get enough reviews!
Edited by MiniMouse810 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow awesome updated ❤️ i loved it 👍🏼 waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: preet111

wow awesome updated ❤️ i loved it 👍🏼 waiting for next update

Thanks alot! =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb update
awww. . Abhay blushing. .so cute!
Ooh. . Pia jealous. .hehe
brilliant start
OMG! Jeh turning into a werewolf. .
Eagerly waiting for the next update
thanks for the pm
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey..ausum update..i so loved jealous pia...update soon..and pm me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: missglam


Superb update
awww. . Abhay blushing. .so cute!
Ooh. . Pia jealous. .hehe
brilliant start
OMG! Jeh turning into a werewolf. .
Eagerly waiting for the next update
thanks for the pm
continue soon
tc

Aww!
Thanks alot!
Will om you right after I finish!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: peehu24

hey..ausum update..i so loved jealous pia...update soon..and pm me when you update

Thanks alot and Sure I will!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chap 2 will come asap
Edited by MiniMouse810 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY ITS FANTASTIC YAAR:-) DO CONT
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update! Chand wants to make Piya a vampire! 😲 I doubt Abhay will let that happen! And Jeh transforming in his werewolf form in college is shocking, I wonder if someone will see him! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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