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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: peehu24
hey its a great update..i loved it...but i never come to know when u update and usually...miss it..or read it late...

btw coming to ur update...i loved it..it was cute...do update soon...

thanks peehu actually i was waiting for ur comment n i will update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

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chapter 4
alina n jeh were sitting on the couch in their house . pain , anger , revenge all could be seen in her eyes . jeh was helpless now ! he was tired of telling her to change her plan but she did not listen to him . alina had a glass in her hand . she was drinking a red drink from that . jeh said " alina please change ur plan ! we still have sum days left ! if u want we can change our plan of going dehradun !
alina- bhai please ! u know m not gonna listen to u ! n whats the problem ? i will get my abhay n u will ur pia ! thats too simple !

jeh - alina please try to understand . we r bloodsuckers now ! the living dead , the vampires ! how can u 2 be one ?

alina- y not bhai ?we can turn them also ! just like our mom turned us !

jeh - please alina just try to understand !
alina- oh please bhai ! what is the problem ? u luved pia n i luved abhay !
we both will get our luvs !
jeh was now fed up n left . alina continued drinking blood .

mount college ( drama class )
teacher - OK everyone ! so this time we will do sumthing different !
all the seniors n juniors make respective lines .
everyone made their lines .
teacher - so now this time we will do romeo n juliet !
abhay - but what is new in this ? we do this every year !
techer - i know abhay but this time there would be 2 romeos n 2 juliets !
everyone started whispering about what she was saying .
teacher - u all heard it right ! there will be 2 romeo n juliet ! 1 pair of
seniors n the other one would be played by the juniors . i
thought that we should give chance to juniors also so i
made sum changes in the story !
abhay - but what changes mam ?
teacher tells them the story . ( i will tell u while the play only )

after sumtime
tashi introduces pia to abhay .
tashi - bro she is pia .
abhay - hi pia ! u sing good really good m sure u would be selected !
pia - thanks abhay !
kabir cums there . pia sees him n calls him there . she introduces him to tashi . they get to know that abhay n kabir r already very good buddies!
class over !

cauridore
pia n kabir r walking together disscussing about sumthing .
pia - so u proposed misha or not ?
kabir - not yet yaar ! i m scared that if our friendship also gets over ?
pia - y r u scared kabir ? if u like her then y u r taking so much of time
to tell her ?
kabir - leave it na yaar !
pia sees that abhay n misha r cuming together . she is a bit shocked coz she never noticed them together !
pia - oye kabir ! what they both r doing ?
kabir was not shocked coz even abhay knew that kabir likes misha n abhay takes her just as a friend n afterall they both r partners in bunking classes !
kabir - don't worry he knows !
pia - it means i don't even know him properly n my best friends shared
all their secrets wid him ?
kabir - sorry
they both cum to them . suddenly T cums from behind n hugs abhay . abhay notices that now he is in a big trouble !
t - hey baby ! i missed u a lot n u did not even call me !
abhay - m sorry t
t - what sorry u know na i luv u then why don't u accept my luv hun ?
abhay wid out knowing what to said - m really sorry t but kabir likes u
n i can't betray him !
misha is smiling coz she knows that abhay can say anything when he is confused !
kabir shocked - sorry t but now i have decided to sacrifice my luv for
my friend
abhay gives hm angry looks 😡.
t - awww thats so sweet of u kabir ! i hope there is no problem now ?
abhay again in hurry said crap - m really sorry t but m already married!
t shocked - what ? but when ? i never saw ur wife !
abhay - actually we married in our childhood ! she is in his college only !
t - then introduce her to me .
abhay saw around misha was the closest but he did not want to die ! so he widout thinking held pia's hand n said " she is the one !"
t was shocked n was not having words n same wid pia also !
abhay thought its better to leave now n left a peck on pia 's cheek n said " bye sweet wife !"

so i end this chappy here only . i know m a bit late but i was confused whether i should continue it or not ? coz i was upset coz there were very few comments ! i hope u liked it n if u liked it then please hit the like button n comment also 😳

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

haha nice one.I loved it.Acha decision tha Abhyay ka Pia his wife hhaha.And alina & jeh vampy?Is this Abhiya new birth?😕😳

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Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

aww...i loved the update...abhay took step one...piya ko wife bana diya..cant wait to see her reaction..she is surely gonna blast him..update soon..thanks for pm...

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
haha nice one.I loved it.Acha decision tha Abhyay ka Pia his wife hhaha.And alina & jeh vampy?Is this Abhiya new birth?😕😳

glad u liked it shrishti 😳 abhay is sumtimes immature here totally childish n sumtime very serious but koi baat nahi we r having benifit of it ! ya its abhiya new birth n how they died i will tell in next part 😳

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sweety_crazed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

hey!!!!awesome FF...totally luved it...just read now n its amazing⭐️...i luved d 4th chapter👍🏼.😆..piya abhay's wife😲😆.😆..abhay was sooo funny😆...so alina is evil🤔...n jeh...i really liked him😃...btw wat were u saying...confused...well u don't need 2 be...u should really continue😊...would luv 2 read more😊...n next time pls do pm me.😊..

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: peehu24
aww...i loved the update...abhay took step one...piya ko wife bana diya..cant wait to see her reaction..she is surely gonna blast him..update soon..thanks for pm...

thanks peehu 😳 m glad u liked it ! abhay can do anything , he does not care what others might feel but tries not to hurt anyone ! pia's reaction will be in next part n i will try to uodate soon coz now its time for dark secrets coz i have updated complications of life n love while drama so only dark secrets is left ! m happy that u liked it peehu coz i was upset coz of last time's response !

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Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: cuteteddy

thanks peehu 😳 m glad u liked it ! abhay can do anything , he does not care what others might feel but tries not to hurt anyone ! pia's reaction will be in next part n i will try to uodate soon coz now its time for dark secrets coz i have updated complications of life n love while drama so only dark secrets is left ! m happy that u liked it peehu coz i was upset coz of last time's response !

will be waiting for ur update..and dont be upset...u really writing it well..and m loving it...though i wish u could make it lil longer 😆...but no prob...i enjoy short update too...

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: madhuri16
hey!!!!awesome FF.thank u dear !..totally luved it.glad that u liked it 😳..just read now n its amazing⭐️thanks again madhuri !...i luved d 4th chapter👍🏼.😆.it means my hardwork did not go waste .piya abhay's wife😲😆.😆.its just starting sweetie aage aage dekho hota hai kya !.abhay was sooo funny😆...so alina is evil🤔...n jeh...i really liked him😃..ya alina is evil n jeh is positive .btw wat were u saying...confused...well u don't need 2 be...u should really continue😊...would luv 2 read more😊...n next time pls do pm me.😊thanks swwtie i will try to update soon now n m sorry i thought i sent u one but i will take care that i pm u next time😳..