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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

u r an awesome write tammana!!thank u sooo much dear😊 srry for not commenting from a few days but i have to deal with my exams too!thats perfectly fine no problem... all the best fro ur exams do well...but on 28 its my last paper and i want u to give a sweet update!! thank u for ur sweet comments and encouraging words😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

i am clying aftal leading ual latest update😭

awww so sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago

don't be😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey guys i m feeling really bad by making u all sad... so here is a surprise, its an alternative ending for happily never after ?.. so those of u who have not liked the sad ending can read this and can cheer up😊 i have written this in a hurry so m sorry if its not good... thank u sooo much for ur love and support... love u guys muaaah...😊

alternate ending

1 month later
i sighed as i sat down on my sofa in my new apartment.. after the divorce, i decided to leave the house for piya. and everything else in it.. she can have it and share it with jeh... i promised myself to kill him if i see him anywhere.. my doorbell was ringing, i put down my glass of Sprite then walked towards it and open it. I was shocked to see jeh standing before me, I felt anger rise within me.. WHAT DO U WANT U BA****D.

"Relax abhay m not here to fight, just listen to me once, I want to talk to u about piya" said jeh in a calm tone.

I DON'T WANT TO LISTEN ANYTHING ABOUT UR AND PIYA'S LOVESTORY, DO U GET IT. I HATE PIYA, ITS ONLY BAD MEMORIES ASSOCIATED WITH HER. SHE IS A BI'.

"PIYA IS DIEING ABHAY" jeh screamed in anger.

It was like am hit by a truck, I couldn't think anymore. "Wha'. What do u mean, where is piya jeh, where is she'" eventhough piya had wronged me I jus couldn't forget her. She was an integral part of my life. Even after the divorce I couldn't think anything bad happening to her.

"piya is in the hospital abhay, she is suffering from brain tumor from past 4 years. Her tumor was the reason she always fought with as she wanted u to hate her so that u could move on in life after she dies." I felt tears streaming down my eyes. "Piya did not sleep with me that night abhay, she loves only one person and that's u. I was jus her good friend abhay, she couldn't give me ur place. It was all a plan. Piya wanted u to think that she is cheating on u so that u would divorce her. She wanted u to hate her so that her death wouldn't effect u." I jus fell on the couch lifeless crying my heart out. I couldn't imagine my piya suffering so much and that too for my happiness. " ho'w ho..w co..uld I ha..ve be..leie..ved th..at p..iya my pi..ya could ch..eat on me.." I whispered unable to speak. I hit my hand on the glass table before me in order to get rid of the pain and anger I had on myself for not being there for piya.

"ABHAY CONTROL URSELF, this is not the time to react this way, piya needs you" shouted jeh.

I saw piya's images coming before my eyes. I wiped my tears and tried to control my emotions. " m not going to let god take away piya from me. I'l fight for her life, m jus not going to loose her this time. Where is piya jeh"

"She is being operated, she dint want u to knw about the operation as there are only one percent chances of her survival." Said jeh worried.

"no jeh nothing is going to happen to piya, my love will change that 1% to 100%. Piya cannot leave me." I said with a lot of determination.

We drove to the hospital, all I was thinking was about the happy times I have spent with piya.

I and jeh were waiting outside the operation theater when the doctor came.

I and jeh literally ran to the doctor..

How is she doctor.? I asked nervously.

"We really cant say anything rite now. The next 2 hours are very critical. If she does not gain counciousnesss within 2 hours we might loose her." Said the doctor worried.

I found my heart beating really fast but I composed myself and wiped my tears. "Doctor can I meet her.."

"Yes but one person at a time." Said the doctor

"Abhay u meet her, she needs u rite now. And don't worry our piya is really brave. Nothing will happen to her she is going to be fine." Said jeh

"thank u jeh thank u for being there for piya. U r a true friend"

"I will be there for both u and piya no matter what happens" said jeh smiling

I hugged him and proceeded towards piya's room. I was going to meet piya after a month, the walk to piya's room was very difficult. There was so much to talk. I entered her room, I could hear the beeping sound of the machine which made me sick. I saw her lieing in the bed. She had lost so much weight but still was looking the most beautiful girl. I walked upto her bed and sat on the chair kept next to her bed. Tears were streaming down my eyes. I held her hand gently.

"why piya why dint u tell me about ur illness, did u not trust me. I could handle it piya and would have made sure that u were fine... I would have fed u my soup everyday, I smiled a little. I love u piya. I really do, m really sorry piya, I have not been able to fullfil my promise of standing by u." I was crying like a child now. "I promise piya I will never shout at u, I will do all he household chores, I'l even cook, I will also quit my job. I have it all planned piya we will adopt a baby girl who turns out to be just like u, I have already decided the name, we will call her angel and to make the family picture complete we will keep a dog as well, I will do everything that u say but just come back to me, I cannot see u like this piya. U r my life, my love, I will die without u piya I will die. I felt my hand being pressed I quickly wiped my tears and found piya's eyes open. She looked at me trying to smile. It was the happiest day of my life I got my piya back. I just couldn't talk and just hugged her.

"I had heard what abhay had said ,I dint want to leave abhay, abhay's love gave me courage to over power death. I smiled as abhay hugged me. " I don't want a dog , I prefer a cat" I whispered with great difficulty..

"It was music to my ears to listen to piya's sweet voice." I looked at her and gave her the biggest smile ever."

3 years later

"Then what happened uncle jeh" asked angel

"Then abhay and piya's life was complete with ur entry sweetie" said jeh lifting angel up.

I and abhay would meet all our friends once a month and today was one such occasion. Danish and panchi were married now and were blessed with a cute son, kabir misha are married and wil soon be parents. How can I forget jeh, he is the person responsible for mine and abhay's perfect life. Jeh and abhay are now best friends. Jeh is engaged to tanushree, we call her T and they are happy together. Abhay now loves me even more and angel keeps our house alive. We had adopted angel when she was 1 month old.

No kitty no running on my bed. That's kitty, It was piya's wish to get a cat, I had to listen to her eventhough I hate cats, but anything for piya and angel. This is our life and I love it...

Abhay dinner is ready

coming honey.. thats piya, got to go, cant afford to make her angry... byeee...

Edited by tamannamalik - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!no more crying now😳...no no i am crying i din't want it to end😆
Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you tamana...Love you for this yaar.😊I'm happy for Abhiya and Jeh is a sweetheart!😃Loved the whole hospital scene and Abhiya convo.😊 Loved the end! Thanks for Pm dear.🤗
Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago
ilove99 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
so u mean the last chapter was ending?and u made another ending?
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved it. Smiling now. thank you.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome yaar 👏 i m dancing🤗 i m happy😃 u make another happily part & now i m not crying but i m sad u r ff ending but i sure u will come another ff .
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey..ausum one..m soo happy that u gave alternate ending...i so loved this..thanks you so much for this...

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