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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Hi.. Nice FF.. I liked it s much.. Pia and Abhay being opposite characters.. And the precap is so much exciting..
Could you please add me to your PM list??

thnx😊m happy u said so😃...will surely pm u😊...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr88 1 plz continue soon...and PM me tooo
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CHAPTER THREE:THE MEETING
PIYA'S ROOM:

PIYA:di,get up!!!!!!!!!its time 4 jogging...

SUHASI:(closes her face with pillow)not now piya...bye bye

PIYA:wat bye bye!!c'mon get up...she removed the pillow from suhasi's face...

SUHASI:ho piya...thum be na...chalo lets go...

piya luved to go jogging ...the early mornings fresh breeze...the beautiful chillness that hugs her...the lovely songs of d birds...its all so divine 2 her...she feels it so magical...

after finishing they sat down on the beautiful grass pitch on the park,
their usual jogging spot...piya was enjoying seeing the blooms near her...when a handsome looking guy came near to them...he stopped seeing them...

the guy:hi piya(looking at suhasi),hi sweetheart...

PIYA:hi kabir...so early???????kya apne pyaar say mila aagai/(guys sry if there is grammer mistake in hindi)

kabir c down n slightly scratches his head...

SUHAS:hi thakkur,n u piya u r chance less...shut ur mouth...

KABIR:well sweet heart,just thought of asking that u r free tonight...(he was nervous)

SUHASI:(was also nervous but happy he asked her)ofcourse
kabir...i'm always free for u...
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kabir melted at her words...they were looking at each other...they shared an eyelock...
PIYA:ahem...ahem...its public guys behave...its not good 2 romance on the road...
they came 2 their sense at piya's comment...suhasi gave piya killer looks...
PIYA:its ok sis...don't kill me with ur eyes...u continue..i'll go...

SUHASI:monkey u r 2 much...

KABIR:well then suhasi...be ready i'll pick u sharply at 7 in evening...

SUHASI:sure...but where...

KABIR:not so soon...u will see it urself...
saying this he bids them gud bye n leaves...

PIYA:so first date ha!!!!!!!

SUHASI:piya ...stop this...i don't even know wat he feels 4 me...may be becoz i'm his best friend so he called me...it doesn't need 2 be this...

PIYA:u both r crazy...even a blind can say u both luv eachother...its just u both don't have guts 2 say it...

SUHASI:its true tht i always luved him ..only him...(there was taers on her eyes)

PIYA:di c'mon...stop being sensitive..it doesn't suit u...
suhasi gives a stern smile...
they both return 2 their house...

the maid says that vikrant has left 4 india on a sudden emergency...n that he had couldn't call them as they left their cell at home...n also would call them soon...n was very sorry 4 d sudden depature...
hope nothing critical has happened,said suhasi n piya was really upset that he didn't even bid them bye...

then d maid give them an envelope,piya opened it n exclaimed,di we've got an invitation 2 the great valentine ball in italy...

SCENE SHIFTS;

JEH:hey dude...gmorning

ABHAY:morning jeh...

JEH;whats up dude?

ABHAY:nothing...m bored...

JEH:so i have something 2 lighten it up...we r invited to d valentine ball at italy...

ABHAY:sounds great dude...(guys abhay enjoys balls but the thing he runs away is only love)while abhay receives a call from sid saying that abhay has got the contract for construction of a beach resort...jeh is very happy listening 2 this...

JEH:well its party time raichand...make ur wallet ready...

ABHAY:sure ,come lets go 2 the cafe...

SCENE SHIFTS:

piya n suhasi r busy packing their stuff...when piya remembered about the book fare...

abhay was driving...n jeh busy chatting with his buddies on FB through his blackberry...suddenly something caught his attention...n he sreamed...abhay was totaly confused..n asked,why the hell were u shouting...jeh pointed out to the book fare n said tht he wants 2 go there...
abhay was more than shocked ...

ABHAY;god what a day has come jeh n books...i agree that u r topper,ur average books leave it... but u n book!!!!!!
JEH:well if u have finished ...shall we go...

ABHAY:yeah

in the book fare piya was searching 4 a copy of ANTONY N CLEOPATRA...
piya if ur shopping is finished lets go...its already 5pm
di don't worry u will be on time for ur date...
piyaaa...
jeh was busy searching...n atlast he came near romantic novels...h picked that book...that minute he could feel her...her face...her voice...it was shattered when abhay exclaimed...
ABHAY:NOOO ...u 2 jeh...pride n prejudice...gosh additi is crazy about this book...

JEH:(2 himself)i know that abhay thats y m here...wish i can give it 2 her one day...loudly,yeah its 4 some one special...

ABHAY;so jeh khurrana is in love...though i m not intrested i support u...who is the lucky soul..

JEH:u will come to know when the time comes...4 now lets go...
when they were moving near the parking...some one bumped in to abhay...n d books in her hands fell down...when she was about 2 fall abhay caught her by her waist...he saw those baby brown eyes...the same eyes which drove him crazy...she was in his strong arms...those hypnotic blue eyes...where gazing at her...she was looking at him like she would never get a glimpse again...they shared an eyelock...they broke apart when they heard the horn of a car...suhasi came 2 d spot n both jeh n suhasi looked at them...piya was embrassed seeing them look at her .
ABHAY:ermm...piya ..piya dobriyal right..
PIYA:thats right...abhay raichand...
ABHAY:yeah...get 2 know from d bouquet ...
PIYA:sorry about that day...in a hurry i didn't even apologize ...n 4 the flowers m sorry again...
ABHAY:its ok...
jeh n suhasi were totally confused seeing them both talking like this...seeing their faces abhay explained it to them...
PIYA:well abhay,this is my sister suhasi...n abhay introduced jeh 2 her...

JEH;hey guys so all friends now...
SUHASI:sure jeh...
JEH;wat abt a small party 4 our new friendship...c'mon lets go 2 the disco...

piya didn't know wat 2 say...abhay was shocked 2 see jeh calling the same girl whom he dreaded 2 see...but before any of them could say anything...suhasi appologized that she couldn't come but surely piya would join them...leaving piya with no choice...
so jeh told her that he would pick her up by 8

piya n suhasi reach their house...

PIYA:di y did u say that i will go with them...

SUHASI:it was really genuine of him to ask us...n it would be harsh 2 say no,u know my plan with kabir...else i would have join u...

PIYA:so r u tensed...after all ur first date ha????/

SUHASI:shut up...monkey

suhasi wore a long blue dress.she was wearing a diamond earrings..she looked gorgeous...she was nervous..

kabir was stunned 2 see her...she was looking so beautiful...he opens d door 4 her 2 get in...

Piya was tensed...she didn't know wat 2 do...though she wanted 2 be with abhay...she was afraid...
piya wore a simple knee length black dress...with matching dianomd stud...she applied a little make up...she was looking perfect...

a black mercedes arrived at her door...a tall hansome man came out of it,his blue eyes ,perfect eyes could make any girl crazy...
piya came down...her looks...he can't take his eyes of her...

piya blushed seeing abhays gaze at her...abhay opened the door 4 piya...they got in d car...while driving he informed her that jeh couldn't join them due 2 some urgent work...abhay really wanted 2 kill jeh 4 doing this...still he didn't want 2 hurt piya so he came 2 pick her up...though piya didn't mind abt jeh,s absence...she was tensed...thinking she n abhay alone...

they reached the disco...as it was a week before d valentine day...they place was crowded n everyone was dancing...
they both were watching d dance...n slowly they started talking with each other ...abhay started liking her so much...n he couldn't understand y?but still he loved her company...piya on the other hand...was totally falling 4 him...she luved his each action...donno y that she felt so close towards him...but she felt very safe when she was with him...

abhay asked her 4 a dance...piya was so pleased to hear him so...they both started dancing...piya was dancing with him perfectly as if she knows his next move...he admired her moves...their move was passionate...they danced with d song...perfectly in to each other...their eyes were talking...but far away from them there is something really dark...is waiting 4 them...

PRECAP:they r off to italy...its really tough 4 abhay 2 be tough 4 long...luckily he falls 4 her...but would he propose her.wat she will say...y vikrant was in a hurry...wat is the dark behind them...
next chapter:the valentine ball...

thnx 4 all ur lovely commments...sry guys couldn't write the ball sequence...next chapter will be long with abhiya scenes...if u guys like it please do press like buttons n leave ur precious comments...



























































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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Nice update
Loved it
Please PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awww...
awesum😊
superb👍🏼
lovely
literally luved it
u r jst superb dear 🤗
waiting 4r d next
continue soon
n thanx 4r d pm😊
tc

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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
wow lovely update abhiya moment r really cute and yeh vikrant k dark angle kaha se a gaya is pyarri si kahani mein and jeh also love some one waiting for next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Wow madhuri awsm concept.so jeh n suhasi left abhiya alone.thats good.i was waiting 4 the ball yar.anyways it was superb.bt whats the dark truth they r going 2 face.update son.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Lovely update ...
So Abhay Raichand is falling for piya dobriyal...
Loved the update...
Continue soon...
Thanx for the pm...
Love u ...
Renuka...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

Nice update

Loved it
Please PM me

thnx😊will surely pm u

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