Beshrmi FF: Abhiya Ka Bacha! Maithli nay chori ki! - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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pia felt disgusted n started crying silently
abhay - pia trust me . she is lying
metz interrupted - what r u saying abhyendra ? tumne hi toh mujhse
kaha tha na that u want us both together n pia is
just wid u so u can get the child from her n obtain
powers ..!!
abhay shocked - what the hell r u saying maithili ? y would i do such ..
pia interrupted - y abhay ? y u again did this wid me ? it was my fault
that i again trusted on u ..!!
pia started crying
abhay - maithili just leave now for god sake or else u r gonna be over!!
metz - fine abhyendra , hum samajh gaye that u have not done ur work yet ..!! i 'll be back sweetheart
abhay clinched his fists n gave a disgusted look to metz . metz left giving an evil smile .
pia couldn't believe what had just happened to their beautiful night .

abhay cupped her face n asked .
abhay - pia don't u trust me ?
pia didn't answer . abhay couldn't stop the blood tears cuming out seeing his love of life crying .
abhay - pia please tell will u trust me or that maithili who already
created probs in our lives ?
pia still was crying . she knew abhay couldn't do this wid her but maithili's words were like a silver knife in her heart .
abhay couldn't help n he placed his lips on her lips trying to take away all the pain from her . pia first wasn't in condition of replying back but abhay's love n passion filled kiss made her response back wid the same love n passion . now both were trying to take away the pain from the each other . finally they parted away
abhay - pia now please tell me do u trust me or not ?
pia started crying n hugged him tightly .
pia - yes yes yes . i trust u n i love u . i just can't even bear the
haunting thoughts of u wid sum other gal !!
they both kept hugging each other n finally pia started feeling sleepy n dozed off in abhay's arms .
abhay smiled looking at his sleeping beauty . n made her lay comfortable on the bed .
he tried to go away to the window but in semi-consiousness also pia held his arm n didn't let him go .

now also u people call me lazy ? c'mon i wrote that i will continue just thinking that sumone will continue but u people r even lazier šŸ˜† ab if u find it sad update then tell to soni coz usne metz ko bulaya šŸ˜† n madhu now u will have to continue 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
wonderful deepa yes madhu its u r turn ho sake try to write amtaz romance deepa tum phar abhay pia sath kardi but i want amatz romance yr . isli unko ek room b choda tha aur pia ko waha se nikala ek din to yr matz ka b banta woh abhay ka old pyar hai šŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
oh i thought only m ametz fan here thats y abhiya romance likha .
don't worry u bring up metz agian n i will write metz n abhay's romance too .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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after sometime abhay get up on the bed and go close to window . he saw something in garden and go there . he saw a shadow coming close to him .after some time see saw his face . he shout matz wat u r doing here . wat the hell u say pia about all thing . matz looking strait in abhay 's eyes and her eyes changing colour black to purple .another side abhay affected and going under matz spell.
matz abhyander chlo humare sath .
abhay jo hukam apka
abhay go with matz in forest .
suddenly pia felt uncomfortable and open eyes with jerk .


deepa amatz romance tum lakna ok
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
aww...deepa di it was cute...n sonu..thum tho metz sei abhay sei syada pyar karti hunšŸ˜†šŸ˜†...isliye thume continue karošŸ˜†...
di m not as good as u n sonu...but will try ametz romance!!!!
Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
piya opened her eyes with a jerk...her eyes were searching 4 abhay...but she could not find him...she shouted his name...tears were rolling down her cheeks...y!!! abhay y!!!!

Deep inside d jungle...there stood a big palace...which should have been beautiful once...it has turned out 2 be a ruined place...where people never visit..a long forgotten one...

seeing that place all her old memories splashed in maithali's mind...those precious moment spend with her abhyendra...this was d place where she had met him first...where they both loved...where they became one...its this place...which stood as a symbol 4 their unknown love ...

maithali saw abhay standing behind her...her heart ached seeing him...she luvd him madly 4 all tese years..but wat he had done...luving some stupid human...nahi abhyendra...tum sirf humare hoon...sirf hamare...

Di, see..i wrote!!...i know its not good...but still tried.. now u continue ametz romance...sonu else tum continue karo.😊..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
hey madhu it was really nice . now next part over here

metz tried to control her anger n smiled at abhay standing silently n innocently .
metz running her long fingers on his cheek
"abhyendra , i love u " she said in a seducing voice
abhay didn't reply . metz got angry
metz - abyendra , hum poore jahan se sirf tumhare liye ladte hain n u don't even look at me
(sorry guys , my hindi is not poor but the words which r used by metz r too heavy n i have prob in spellling mistakes then so english mein it would be easy šŸ˜†)
abhay wasn't replying now also .
metz held his hand n lead him to the room in which they both used to stay together hiding from others .
"abhyendra , tumhe yaad hai when we both used to spend our lovely time here ?" she asked
he was still behaving like a zombie wid an expressionless face .
metz told him to sit on the bed . the room was decorated by metz as she wanted this night to be special . she placed her fingers on his lips seducingly n said - just wait n watch sweetheart ..!!

metz went to bathroom n came out taking a bath n wrapped in a towel . her straight long hairs were all joined together coz they were wet . her white silky body was also shining coz of the moonlight cuming out from the window .
she came towards him . maithili's spells were effecting him now . he was totally hypnotized n could do anything she said .
metz slowly while unbuttoning his shirts said - abhyendra , i love u more than anyone would
have loved sumone . these humans don't even
know the true meaning of love . our love is true
abhay was now totally in metz's lov spell n said - yes maithili !! our love is pure n true

till now metz already took out his shirt . she took a blanket n now abhay was lying on the bed.
metz was on top of him . she was kissing his bare back . abhay turned n she kissed his bare chest . abhay slowly took the towel away n covered her back wid the blanket . he was caressing her soft back . metz started kissing him passionately . both were kissing each other touching each other's body wid passion . metz was about to take another step when abhay shouted shockingly - maithili !! what the hell r u doing here wid me ?
metz - what happened abhyendra ?
abhay realized what he was doing coz pia was crying shouting his name . abhay decided to go back to her .
soni , it was ametz n last abhiya ka track i again started sorry . thanks madhu u tried n it was good . now next turn is of u people 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
haye di..!!! u r tooo good in writing such sequence...n it was amazing...will try 2 continue!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
thanks madhu it means my besharmi is increasing day by day 🤣
btw where is sony i wrote ametz romance for soni only .
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Posted: 13 years ago
madu and deepa wonderful job guys deepa thnx lot amtz r hot . i love it . matz ne poora advantage liya situation ka.

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