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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: pari_smart

awesome os
loved it
please continue with it


thanks...😊...i will continue...

Originally posted by: sunflower52

Really nice OS do finish the story.👏


thanks...😊...i will...

Originally posted by: black_scorpio

wow peehu loved it sorry for rplying late


thanks a lot..😊..baba ash...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: notepad697

Really nice, you did a great job 😃
Plz update another part too


thanks a lot...i will update...😊

Originally posted by: aarendsena

thnks 4 d pm ..nyc cntiiinuu


thanks a lot...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

Peehu I am sorry I am late🤗..But i am so in shock after reading your OD..yaar ..it is so beautiful & so beleivable..How I wish they show it like this..I really mean it..GOSH..especially what Piya told to Jeh was brilliant..!!👏


thanks a lot...hema di...🤗...m really glad that u loved it...i also wish something similar happens...magar yeh cvs hamare hopes ki band bajaa dete hai......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunu123

hey peehu😃awesome concept dear👏👏👏...

jay was too harsed with pia yaar😡😡...
finally pia remembered everything...looking forward for abhiya convo...plz cont soonhav anice dayluv usunita


thanks a lot...😊...m glad u liked it...i will continue...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks...😊
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Abhay was shocked to hear that pia now remembered everything. How was it possible? He himself had erased all her past one year memory. So how could she remember everything? Abhay was facing confused state of emotions. He was happy because pia was safe, confused due to pia's memory and angry because he would have to break pia's heart again. Abhay had to keep pia away from him because he felt that it's the best thing for pia. she would be safe if she is away from him. but he never realized that pia was safe only with him.

Pia noticed that abhay was fighting with his inner turmoil. pia ran towards abhay and hugged him. she wanted to console him, talk to him but words were falling short. She didn't knew how to start. right know only one thing came to her mind that she was in abhay's arm. Abhay also hugged her passionately

Pia had tears rolling down her eyes. Pia finally parting away said," I am sorry abhay. I should have trusted you. U always told me that jeh was dangerous but I never listened to you. But now all are worries are gone. I remember everything. Now no one can separate us."

The time had arrived for abhay. He had to break her heart.

Abhay: pia its too late. I have moved on. We cant be together. U and me is not possible. I don't love you anymore. It is over. Whatever happened a year ago was a dream.

Pia: yes abhay, it was dream. It was a dream for me. How can someone so handsome and angelic can love me? And abhay, don't say that u moved on. U never moved on. If its that so then why you faked ur relation with misha and panchi? U wanted me to stay away from you. You knew we love each other and no matter what happens we would end up together.

Abhay: pia please, I have forgotten everything and its time u also forget about it.

Abhay started leaving but pia caught her hand.

Pia: wait abhay. I haven't finished it. I lost all my memories. I didn't remember anything but my heart always said that I love you. U were the reason why I survived even when my life was full of confusions. You were heartbeats abhay. When I again came back to dehradoon, u were frozen. but ur loved always called me. You helped me walk through rain even though you were not around me. I always felt ur presence in my mind, in my heart, in my soul. Abhay accept it, u love me. We are meant to be together.

Abhay was speechless. He didn't have points to argue with pia. but still abhay had to do it.

Abhay(shouting): pia enough. I already said. Its over. Please leave me alone. I have many other things to handle. You love me but not I. I have to go. U and ur talks don't affect me anymore. U are nothing to me. I saved you because I didn't wanted to be monster in my eyes. and somewhere you were in trouble because of me. I just wanted to save myself from being guilty. You think too much. u are nothing to me. I don't care whether u live or die.

Pia was shattered hearing these harsh words from abhay. She started running deep inside the jungle. Abhay realized that instead of getting out of jungle, she was running deep inside it. abhay ran towards the direction of pia. pia was now standing near the cliff.

Pia(to herself): abhay, I love you. Without you I am dying every single day and every moment. I cant take and bear this pain more. Abhay you always come near me, break my heart and go. but then you again come back to me. I cant live my life this way. Instead of living this pain again and again, its better I end my life. abhay, I love you, always had and always will. Even after I die my soul will continue to love you. I am yours and only yours. Our life is entwined and I hope my death will make u realize this.

Abhay came running there and heard pia's every single word. Pia on the other hand took a deep breath and said," abhay, I love you". He loosened her grip on herself was was about to set herself free from the world when abhay stooped her. He caught pia from her waist and pulled her out.

Abhay was shocked and didn't knew how to react.

Abhay: are you out of your mind? What the hell were you thinking? Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh? What would I have done?

Pia started crying and sobbing.

Pia: why do you care? You don't love me. You don't care whether I live or die. So let me die. Atleast this will make both of us happy. Leave me abhay..leave me...you don't have to save me for ur guilt. I m nothing to you. Let me die abhay...let me. I cant take this pain again and again. I will never love anybody in my life again and you don't love me.

Pia was shouting and fighting with abhay. Abhay had caught her tightly. she was struggling in his clutches.

Pia: let me go..abhay...leave me.

Abhay couldn't control her madness of running and jumping off the cliff. Abhay slapped pia. pia was shocked. She was staring at abhay.

Abhay: are you out of ur mind u stupid girl? How dare u end ur life. agar tumhe kuch ho jaata hai toh...I would have died pia...I am not saving because I would feel guilty. I am saving you because u are the reason of my existence. Cant you see? You are my life, my heartbeats of my dead heart. U are the reason why I smile. How dare you end my life? I hate you pia...I hate u...

Pia hugged abhay tightly and abhay kept repeating," I hate you.I hate you". But pia hugged abhay more passionately and said;"I love you" and finally abhay confessed pia in her arms," I love you..."

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I wasn't going to continue but since everyone wanted their further convo...i wrote this...I hope I did justice with their confession...press like if u like it and do comment...




Edited by peehu24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
peehu me first nice update so now ur are an os writer a ff writer congo ur hard work was succesful
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Posted: 14 years ago
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keep it up yaar
really awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
It was great you. Atleast u made Pia wanna jump.
Edited by snitchseeker - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the pm Wow, this was intense. Loved it. I am glad you continued.

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