OS- If i only knew.!! updtd pg 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3

Abhay was literally feeling his heart burn.. his piya wat if something happened to her.. he would be responsible.. 'i must have been with her.. to protect her.. to save her, and now the im standing helpless.. i should have never accepted this realtion.. this is all because of me.. taht piya is the prey today.. i should have never let her close to me..' he graoned as he stood frozen hearing those words.. immense pain began to spread all across his body due to grief that he had brought about so much danger to his beautiful innocent angel..
Jay was undergoing a lot of emotional turmoil.. should he do the right thing by saving Piya or should he keep up his mother's wrods.. there was justice and responsiblity hanging on a wary thread in his mind.. he thought he would just collapse any time soon.. only Piya's chirpy voice kept him from loosing himself.. she kept talking and talking about some funy incidents at home.. jay pulled off a smile ever 2 min.. Deepanita was getting evry restless.. her anger rose ever second Jay delayed the death, she screamed violently, once again alone in the huge house..
Abhay raced though the trees as fast as possible.. parking his car at the road, he swiftly jumped out.. without even pausing, he quickly made his run into the forest.. he could smeel Piya.. he follwed her faint smell and ran towards east.. while Jay was standing against the bark of the tree which had engraved jay<3 Piya.. he sucked deep breath.. "Piya.." he called out to her in a wary voice.. she stopped her muttering and looked back at him.. blinking her eyes.. "Um.. its nice of you to comfort me with your talks but.. ah.. can we just head back home.. i think im goin to be alright.!" he said looking straightly in a her eyes in a soft voice..
Piya just stared at him for a seond and replied, "Hey how did you know that i knew that you were under some emotional stress..? huh.. not fair..!" she said pouting cutely.. he smiled in response.. putting a hand around her tiny shoulder, "i know everyone of you actions sweetheart.!!" he said winking.. "PUT YOUR HANDS OFF OF HER..!!!!!" howled Abhay as he came towards them.. piya was shocked at waht Abhay was doing here..
"Abhay.. he is just talking to me.. sheesh.." piya answered cooly.. "Yea.. rite when are you planning to rip her neck off jay maybe i can join the party..!!" said Abahy sarcastically.. staring daggers at Jay whose eyes were filled of guilt now.. Abhay ignored that.. "Why would he kill me Abhay.. are you out of your mind.?" she screamed back.. she could withhold the anger in her when Abhay put such a blame on Jay.. "Piya keep out of this.. really.. just head back home.. you'll be safe i promise.." , "Promise..? you're talking about promise.. maybe i don rememer much of my past... but i strongly feel that you left me all alone.. and you were gone.. far far away from me.. when you must have promised me to protect me always.. and now.. we are together again.. blaming my friend for shit is just going to make me mad.. Abhay..!!" she said as she said in a hoarse voice..
"Just stop it.! i don want to see an unnecessary fight because of me..Abhay do you ever think i would do something like that.. and Piya i think its time you know everything..!" he said his serious.. Abhay was plainly taken aback.. yes how could he expect... he could alwasy read his mind and know hoe much he loved her.. but he was just to angry at the moment that he did go over what is wrong and right.. he went on with the flow assuming that Jay will cause her harm and came hurriedly like a streak of lightning..
"Yes.. it is..!!" piya said in a determined voice staring at both of them accusing them with her eyes for hidind the secret, Abhay stood stern and jay fumbled with words in is head to tell her in a simple way so that he would not scare he daylights out of her.. it was his damn idea to tell.. and hell yea he had to deal with it..!!
ok guys here is the update.. sorry for taking so long.. i was just a bit busy.. sorry guys will try to updte the next one real soon.. love you guys... and if you liked it.. please do hit "like" thnks..!!!!
katiehiwatari thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
thnks dude.. im updating this part sitting in the college internet library.. lol.!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
good update seems really interesting i liked it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...great update...
thanxx for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks for the PN
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow
wonderful update !
Loved it . .
OMG !! Is jeh really going to transform?
Thanks for the pm
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsum dr... its really interesting... cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update katie👏👏👏...plz do cont soon...luv u-sunita

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey thats a really nice part...but sad for jeh...actually he really loves pia i think but abhay nd piya will never be separated ...
res...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Great update !!!...thnx for d pm

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