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awesome update...
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hey wow awesome part.Plz continue.Waiting 4 Abhay 2 meet Pia😊
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link to chapter -3

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1736428&TPN=4

++++++++++++++++++ chapter -4++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

========== THE PARTY AT RAICHANDS==============

Raichand mansion

Abhay and Chand sitting at the fireplace. Chand cut the phone , turn to Abhay .he has excitement in his eyes but a mixed flow of worry n happiness was there on his face.

Chand to Abhay- Abhay! It is the time to get ready for the actual quest . its not hunting, it's not the fight, it's time to show what we were before being supernatural.

Abhay- i can sense something serious still something grate. i m looking forward dad. Please tell me what's going on.

Chand ' as u know Abhay we r here after something, don't u?

Abhay- you mean to say the protector family who have tht aura?

Chand- u got me right Abhay. They are here . the aura is here. We have to find aura n bring it to our side.

Abhay- but dad how we know the form tht aura is right now. Ur mom found it out . the protector family is none other than "jaiswals". And i am sure aura is with them . one of that girl has to be the aura.

Abhay- how can we know her?

Chand- i can smell her , ur mom can read her heart n spirit or the aura in her. Rudraksh can see her past n future n u dear u know u can read anyone's mind including vampires n other supernatural creatures too but the supreme. We need to get her asap.

Abhay- i can bring her here right now...

Chand- no dear no ! We can't bring her like that. She has to be with us by all her own wish not by force.

Abhay- then what is the plan?

Chand- there is no plan dear. It have to be all by it natural flow. As per the curse of the mother aura. She has to realise who she actually is n what's her past birth.

Abhay- then how much we have to wait dad?

Chand ' we have the time till they came to know about her. N pray that we can bring her before they know. She is destined to be with us but...

Abhay- but what dad? U are making me a question queue.

Chand- we have to fight for our existence , this will no more a power quest but the quest of lifeless life.

(not knowing tht the aura is none other than piya... they have all these ideas. But if they find the actual truth about i then what will happen to all of these Raichands god knows)

College

Piya looking distressed as her dream stalking her now every night. She was in the library searching for some text book n matching syllabus. As she was lost in her own world she mislead to the history section .she just walking through the section in each line as if she knows the answer to her dream is there.

She just stuck with the nail popped out of the book self. She turned back to free her n find a huge book scripted in golden letters " a love story beyond the history" subscripted "scarifies of life for eternal love" . the date though was not visible but its the year 1880. Written by some foreign author by was translated from some ancient local language. It was with a nice description n alive with colourful portraits. As she roughly go through the book she found the exactly same garden picture in the book. With no other thought she issued it in her name . she forget to take back the library card n the librarian keep tht on his table.

Abhay reached the college as it was the day of issuing new books he also headed for the library. He request the librarian to issue him the card as he is the fresher n new to the college. The librarian excused himself n headed to princy office for conformation n other formalities. Abhay got bored n go through the book list register. He found the same book in the history book list. N search for the same but failed to get it. As he came back being little bit worry the librarian gave him the card n ask him to grab the book he looking for n register them in the card. Abhay got all the study book n the librarian start listing them all in his card.

Abhay to lib- sir do we have any history book here , i mean about local history. Or about the ancient emperors.

Lib- yah we have the most famous book of dehradoon history.

Abhay- can i have it?

Lib ' sorry dear i cant .

Abhay ' but why? Books are supposed to be for all students . so why cant i have it?

Lib- u r not getting my point dear . how can i give u while its not here.

Abhay- u told tht u have it n now u r telling me its not here? What does it mean.

Lib- both are right .. we have all those book of history but the one u looking for is with some other student.

Abhay- so please tell tht student to return it, i can wait for the hole day.

Lib- i cant help u with tht? But i can assure u tht she will definitely allow you to borrow it from her. She is very good person awa the best student of the college.

Abhay-( in a hurry) whats her name , what class she belong to ...

Lib- take this card n ask in ur department they will help u for sure.

Abhay took Piya's card , there was written PIYALI JAISWAL, 2ND YR ,PSY-(A). In no moment Abhay understand that she belongs to his class. she is his classmate. He rushed to the class but found none. Then he hurried to the department office . he enquired about her but all in vein as none of the staff agreed to give her address or contact number.

Abhay return to class n sad in bit worry . meanwhile Misha came in to class with her gang. She asked Abhay the reason of looking too upset.

Misha- what happened Mr. Raichand (in a comic way)?

Abhay- nothing like that mish. Btw whose this piyali?

Misha- i don't know dude.(as no one knows that Piya is Piyali Jaiswal)only Kabir knew that.

Abhay- weimb guys (in cheerful mood) you all are invited to Raichand's party today at sharp at 7 o clock in the evening. Everyone just scream out of excitement. Everyone bunk the last class for the party shopping n all the other hang-out at the canteen.

After the party announcement Abhay left college n arrive at the parking place. After leaving the library Piya was in the car thoroughly going through the book. She felt like someone is watching her secretly .Piya's car was parked just besides the car of Abhay. But Piya closed all her doors n the glass , turned on ac n reading the book at the back seat. Abhay can felt her presence but unable to find the real cause of the attraction for that feel. Same with Piya but she was feeling bit weird with conflicting feelings. One feel for Abhay n another for the stranger secretly watching her. Abhay try to connect his mind with Piya but at the same time he felt someone's presence around and avoiding Piya's feel he chase that strange one.

He rushed his car towards the college main gate. He found a tore piece of cloth stuck in the parking barricade pole. By sniffing that piece of cloth he felt something weird and unnatural. He drove back to home for evening preparation. He put all his books from library on the living room huge glass table where Chand was checking some official files with his new secretary Danish shing rathore.(his introduction will take a different story lately). He smell something strange n act in a vampire style (turning his hear n rolling his eyes all tht PKYEK stuff) n snatch the lib-card from the book. He sniff it carefully and excused himself from Danish, ordering Abhay to follow him.

Chand bedroom

Chand- Abhay where did u find this?

Abhay- this is my classmate's dad.

Chand ' its her Abhay! Its her , the aura.

Abhay- Piyali Jaiswal!

Chand ' what? Jaiswal ! that means they have her.

Chand call Haseena to know the fact. He dialled her number.

Haseena- Chand, is there everything ok?

Chand ' dear please let me know who is Piyali Jaiswal? Can u ask panchhi about this?

Haseena ' sure dear! I am calling her right now?

Chand disconnect the phone n joined Danish while Abhay was lost in the thought of Piya wondering why she take tht book from library. Is that a coincidence or something else.

At college

At the parking place Piya fall asleep while reading that book. Kabir came along with angad and rahil. They found Piya's car all closed but a/c is on. Kabir inspect the car carefully n found her inside the car. He gently knock the bump of the car to wake her up.

Kabir-hey angel ! wake up sleeping beauty .

Piya- OMG! Kabir , sorry yaar ,it's just, just...(wake up rubbing her face )

Kabir- what? R u waiting for ur prince charming to give u the true love kiss n u will get life all tht thing or what?

Piya- oh Kabir please stop this (blushing). I m just felt asleep reading something.

Kabir- oh i think boss panchhi kicked u out of ur house .

Piya ' you better know she is not that type nu please stop talking all these random stuffs.

Angad- but Piya what r u doing here alone? Are not u joining us in party ?

Piya ' what party? I know nothing about this yaar , seriously!

Angad- u r the best buddy of misha n she left u alone n went for shopping? How come its possible ?

Piya 'you must be joking, rnt u?

Angad- then u r good for nothing, aare yaar Abhay personally invited us all for their party.

Piya ' Abhay whose Abhay?

Angad- Mr. Abhay Raichand , the savior , the gr8 warrior(posing differently with all the attitude)n n n ...

Piya-(slapping on his shoulder)- ok ok bahut hogaya. Guys i am all alone please help me in shopping.

Angad- shopping ! mujhe marwana hai kya? If ruhi find me in the mall she will bankrupt me. God knows . even i hav a doubt she will mortgage me for her latest fashioned dress or shoes . yaar forgive me.

Piya-(to Kabir making puppy face) Kabir plz.

Kabir ' ok angel only for this time. Next time find someone random bf . i cant help u every time. N that unfaithful mish i will see her in party myself.

Piya- i will help you. She have to pay for leaving me alone.

They all have a grouped hug then al left for the mall. Piya select a mauve coloured knee length single sleeve dress with a cream rose flower. Kabir pay for it as a gift to her. She gifted him a olive green t-shirt. they also find all the other girls n friends there. In short they all have a nice shopping time.

Jaiswal house

Panchhi inform Piya about the invitation. N told her to get ready. but Piya told her that she knew about that n she also had a shopping for that. Piya showed her the dress n panchhi appreciate her choice. that very moment panchhi mobile rang.

Panchhi-hello! Panchhi here.

Haseena-hi panchhi! r u all set for the party? I guess u must not forgot that.

Panchhi- no aunty! not at all. Rather we both r getting ready for it.

Haseena- that's good . btw may i ask u something?

Panchhi- sure aunty! Please do ask. it will be my pleasure if i can help u any way.

Haseena- how long u... i mean ur parents are here in dehradoon?

Panchhi- i don't know the exact year but i guess since Piya's birth.

Haseena- so Miss Piya Jaiswal is by birth is local to dehradoon..

Panchhi- no aunty it's Miss Piyali Jaiswal . but please don't tell her that i have disclosed her secret name to u.

Haseena ' (in bit shock) ohh of course not .i crossed my heart.( they both have a hearty smile )

Piya-( shouting from her room) di r u cooking something against me?

Panchhi- sheepishly smiling no piya not at all. Aunty i got to go n see u at the party. Bye .

Haseena- (with a broad smile) bye dear see u!

Haseena inform Chand that the girl they r looking for is Piya n she is coming to the party with panchhi. the whole Raichand family was eager to invite their destiny.

Dobrial's house

Back in misha's place she just trying to wear her new 2/3rd with a multicoloured ts.madhu came to her room to check whether she is ready or not. She just got a heart attack while she saw her.

Madhu- u little brat what the hell u shopped with that huge money.

Misha- my dress!

Madhu- this tore pant n this weird ts.it looks like u borrowed it from some slum guy. Bhikhari lag raheho. Arre bhikhari bhi bhikh mein yeh naa dein.

Misha- mom u r insulting my coco n piccu.

Madhu- who is this poco puchi?

Misha ' its not poco puchi mom. Its coco n piccu, indicting her new dress.

Madhu- cried out of horror ARNAAV.

Arnav-what happened honey ? is here everything ok?

Madhu- till ur spoilt brat is here i even cant breath inpeace.look what she is wering. Some poco took.

Misha- mom ita coco n piccu.

Arnav- mish u get some dress. N plz comb ur hair at least for once. those louse also need some air .

Misha- stumping her feet POPPA!

Madhu-( handing over her a nice maoon coloured short sleeve less gown n a maroon high heel) put it on right now else i ll not give ur pocket money for next 2 months.

Misha-(grinning her teeth)ok only this time.

Arnav n Madhu left for the party where as Misha decide to come with piya.

Panchhi also joined arnav n Madhu n Piya left alone at home waiting for Misha.

Piya's place

Piya was checking herself in the mirror n getting final touch up. She felt something strange, as if someone at the door. She call her governess (Mrs. Bellomorea)to open the door.

Bellomorea- (open the main door)who is here dear?

Piya- Mrs. Bellomorea who is it?

Bellomorea- Piya baby! No one is there. I think its the wind.

Piya ' oh i see. Thank u Mrs. Bellomorea.

Piya went to her room n try to read the book she left with the page mark. But she can feel some ones presence at the balcony back at her room. she got bit scared but with courage she turn on the balcony light n carefully step ahead. she found no one over there. She quietly left the balcony n turn off the light by closing its door properly.

As she turn back she screamed out of fear as Kabir n angad masked with a Dracula n just behind her. She snatched their mask n hit them with pillow. They have a little fun with each other. they waited for Misha around half an hour but left for the party. Piya dialled her number n called Misha.

Piya- r u lost or at zoo u stupid animal?

Misha- Piya! I am in a grave danger.

Piya- what? R u planning to wash the plates after the party?

Misha ' yaar ! plz try to understand me . mom ordered me to wear some girly cuchi cuchi type dress else shes gonna snatch my pocket money for 2 months yaar what do i do?

Piya- don't worry mish.. u just come here ill handle it.

Misha- muaah !my sweet angel u r the best! I am just coming beb. Just 5 min i will be there.

Misha arrived at Piya's place Piya helped her to carry the all new get up. She put some makeup on her face n some nice deep maroon lipstick. Tie her hair with pearl pins. Turn her to a human from a devil. And they left for the party.

Party place

The whole Raichand palace was decorated with beautiful bright little lights. the garden was decorated with radium wires. It was looking like the Pandora in avatar movie. there was a band playing some instrumentals piece in the open stage. Everyone just enjoying to their fullest.

Arnav , Madhu and panchhi reached at the party . Haseena n chand welcome them with open heart n arms. Chand take care of arnav n ask him about him while Haseena handle panchhi n Madhu.

Haseena ' where are the others.

Mabhu- sorry Mrs. Raichand they ll be bit late, but don't worry they will be here any moment.u know todays generation. All there stuff its bit difficult to handle them.

After sometime Kabir n angad arrived there. T, ruhi,rahil, n others join them. Abhay n Rudraksh lead them to the respective area n make them comfortable.

Panchhi- hey Kabir where are ur so called jai veeru.

Kabir- they will be here at any moment. There is no Piya's fault it's all Misha. U know her what to say.

Panchhi- u just keep an eye on them. When they arrive inform them to meet me.

Kabir' ok di. i will.

Piya n Misha arrived at party at the end. everyone just can't help themselves staring at them. Misha n Piya were looking like twin princess. Misha just ran to Madhu in embarrassment. Piya was still with others outside the house. Panchhi , Madhu and arnav jaw dropped when they saw Misha in her all new avatar. they introduce her to Raichands.

Panchhi- hey mish, where is Piya?

Misha- she is outside with Kabir n angad.

Panchhi- call her inside. Raichands want to meet her.

Misha- i can't go back plz.

Panchhi- its ok Mish! She called her mobile n tell her to come inside.

As she enter the hall there was a light out. There are only the candles all around with their soft lights. due to sudden light out Piya couldn't make her steps n fell down. But before she hit the ground she felt a pair of strong masculine arms around her waist, Covering her whole body, Holding her in a great care as if she is the most delicate flower laid in a box of silk. She has her curls all over her face n her eyes are closed out of fear. She got shivers by the touch of those cold fingers in her back. someone softly whispered." Its all ok . u r safe now !". Piya opened her eyes but her curls are all over her face. As she tried to remove them . he stopped her n said "let me do the honour lady". N he remove the curls from her face. But none of the saw their face. They can only saw their eyes. Piya was lost in his deep blue icy eyes n Abhay can't help him break the eye lock. Her big brown eyes r so innocent n pretty as if they are known to him , inviting his soul ...

Precap-recall of the past


link to chapter -5

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1736428&TPN=7

Edited by quarkinsen - 14 years ago
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wow yaar awesome update.I loved it.U r too gud.Plzz continue.I wnt 2 read more.Reveal secrets soon😊😊
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Awesome part..👏 U write well..😳 Continue Soon.. pta nai ye secrets kab khulenge..
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W()()()()()W... awesome updates.. i lovd them... i love how the story is proceeding.. it sooo womderful.. eager to knw who is stalkn Piya... n i love the Abhay-Piya romance withour seeing each other.. cute..! thnks for the pm.. update soon..
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awesome update dear😊

cont soon
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awsum yr...
pia in abhays arm...
cant wait cont soon...

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