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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

CHAPTER 5

The next day morning welcomed them with heavy snowing. It was unusual to snow like that at that point of time. It was like the nature is against them in continuing the quest. Chand was looking restless. Abhay was lost in his thoughts. Suddenly a chilling sensation went through his body. He looked up. There was she, looking gorgeous in a light green t-shirt and khaki pants. It was not her beauty which caught his attention. But it was her strength of mind that amused him. He couldn't help but to look at her with his mouth wide open.

As Piya stood there facing him, she felt a sudden feeling of being betrayed. But her heart told her to forgive him as she recalled the tears she saw in his eyes.

"If I am in his position, I would have done the same". She thought to herself.

She slowly approached him and waved her hands in front of him breaking the trance. He stood up and looked at her hand. The blood was not flowing anymore. But the bruises were clearly visible. He felt ashamed of his behavior.

Abhay: "err… umm… I am sorry Piya"

Piya: "Don't be Abhay… I am sorry for the sarcasm I showed you"

Abhay: "No no… you did it right. I betrayed you. I was not supposed to expect better than that. But what I have done (looking at her bruises)… I was not supposed to do that…"

Piya smiled

"It's ok. You were forced to do that. Let's just forget about that. By the way I have something for you"

Abhay looked at her doubtfully. She just forwarded her hands towards him. In her palm, there was lying a small piece of metal. Confused by this gift, he looked at her. She started laughing and took him under the shade of a tree making themselves far away from others. She told him to hand over her the puzzle. He did it hesitantly. After arranging the puzzle, she slowly placed the piece of metal she had in the missing place. To the utter shock of Abhay, the metal fit well in that puzzle and they heard a 'click' sound. He looked at her bewildered.

"You… from where you got this?"

"Cool boy cool… I took it from a hair clip"

He felt that she was jocking him. He pinned her to the tree.

"What rubbish! Tell me clearly, from where you get it? I am not gonna buy your silly jock"

Piya: "You buy it or not, that's the truth. The hairclip is made up of gold and silver and it's my family heirloom. It was passed on to me by my grandma. She had told me that the hairclip has some power hidden inside. Of course, I didn't believe it. But… When I saw the puzzle, I felt I had seen the missing piece somewhere. Then when I went back to my tent and go through my bag, I found it"

He slowly released her hand and apologized for his behavior. She told nothing. She simply looked at him. Suddenly, they saw a gleaming light coming from the key. To their utter astonishment, it started rising and floating in the mid air. They both looked at each other. As they turned their attention towards the key again, they saw Chand standing at the other end. His eyes were red and a gleam of light was coming from his eyes and fell on the key. That means he was keeping it in the mid air!!!

Piya couldn't believe her eyes. Her heart and mind was contradicting each other. With a sudden courage, she stepped forward and tried to pull out the key

"Ouchhh…"

She creamed in pain. Abhay ran towards her and supported her from falling. Her hand had burned. She felt that her hand was gone. The pain was killing her. All the she could remember was Abhay's hands were wrapped around her as he looked at her panicked and she fall unconscious…

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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

wow yaar awesome update.I loved it.Superb.So may b pia also belong 2 some powerful family.Plz continue & update soon😊

Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Awesome update! This update was super interesting! I'm looking forward to what happens next! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
HEY ROSE
NICE UPDATE YAAR👏👏👏...
AT LAST PIA FORGIVE ABHAY...I M SOOO HAPPY
WHAT IS CHAND YAAR...IS HE RELATED TO ABHAY...
PLZ UPDATE SOON ...BECOZ I DONT HAV PATIENCE TO HOLD SUSPENSE...
HAV A NICE DAY
LUV
SUNITA
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
hey thats a very interesting update
so pia also belongs to a supernatural family
abhiya convo was although short but cute😳
i hope abhay will heal pia i m actually wondering is he a vampire❓
thanks for the pm and please update soon with lots of abhiya moments

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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
superb awesome!!waiting 2 c wat hapens nxt!!thanx 4 da pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunu123

HEY ROSE

NICE UPDATE YAAR👏👏👏...
AT LAST PIA FORGIVE ABHAY...I M SOOO HAPPY
WHAT IS CHAND YAAR...IS HE RELATED TO ABHAY...
PLZ UPDATE SOON ...BECOZ I DONT HAV PATIENCE TO HOLD SUSPENSE...
HAV A NICE DAY
LUV
SUNITA

all the suspense related to Abhay will be revealed in next chapter. i promise you that. my exams are going on, i'll update as soon as possible
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

hey thats a very interesting update

so pia also belongs to a supernatural family
abhiya convo was although short but cute😳
i hope abhay will heal pia i m actually wondering is he a vampire❓
thanks for the pm and please update soon with lots of abhiya moments

thanx😊. just wait for one more chapter. u'll come to know everything😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Gr8 ff yaar.. sumthing new n interesting.. carry on.. do pm me when u update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

CHAPTER 6

It was night when she woke up. She found herself lying in her sleeping bag. She slowly sits up. She saw a bandage around her burned hand. He knew that it was Abhay who had done it. She desperately wanted to see him. Within 2 days, she got attached to him soo much. But she didn't want to show it. So she kept on fighting with him. She couldn't help it.

When Abhay found her falling unconscious, he could do nothing but carrying her back to the tent. He had seen this side of Chand quite often. He could do things what normal people cannot.

"Oh boy! You will have to face her again. Surely she will have a lot of questions in that small head of hers"

He muttered under his breath as he saw her awake. He was not wrong. As soon as she saw him, she raised her eyebrows. Her big baby eyes were demanding answers.

Abhay: "Don't look at me like that… fine… I will tell you everything"

Piya: "Everything? Is there a lot of things which you hide from me?"

He nodded.

"To be frank, yes. I had to hide it from you for your own safety"

"Oh please… cut this crap and come directly to the matter"

Abhay: "Okay… Whatever I am telling you is true. What you saw out there was real. Chand has powers to raise the objects with one look. He has the power to create an aura around any object which makes that object secure (He paused for a second and then continued). In short, he is a witch"

Piya (astonished): "A what?"

Abhay: "A witch… he is one of the supreme witches…"

Piya: "Oh please… don't tell me that I am in a super natural world"

Abhay: "Unfortunately, yes. Aren't you afraid?"

Piya: "I know I had to be afraid. But right now, I am not feeling anything. May be it's because I believe in supernatural like my grandma… by the way, umm….are you a super natural?"

He smiled at her innocent question. She started stepping backwards and eventually touch the wall. He came soo close to her that they could feel the breath of each other. He whispered in her ear.

"I am the chosen one"

She looked at him confused.

Abhay: "I am a human like you. But the difference is that I am the chosen one to find out that treasure and no matter what, I'll do it"

Piya hesitated for a moment and asked

"Do you have any special powers? Are you like a superman?"

At this question, he felt a sudden urge to hug her tightly, soo tightly that he could forget all those pain he endured from his childhood. Even though he managed to put up a smile in front of everyone, he was broken inside. Soo broken that he desperately needed someone to lounge to. Whenever Piya was in front of him, his all features melt towards her. He couldn't help it.

Abhay: "I don't have any special powers dear. That's why I need a protector like Chand"

Piya: "You said protector?"

He nodded and continued

"Yes I said. As I am the chosen one, evil forces are behind me, they don't want me to find the treasure. So they are trying to kill me"

She felt a thunderbolt had striked her. She doesn't want him to be killed. She couldn't withstand the thought of something happening to him. She wanted him to complete his quest. She knew that if he finds the treasure, nobody will be able to harm him. She decided that she'll help him at any cost. she moved her hand towards his face.

"Ouch… Abhay"

Suddenly her burned hand started paining. Abhay couldn't understand what's going on her. He held her tightly. She was screaming in pain. He tried to console her.

"Shh… don't cry… let me help you. Tell me what happened"

"Abhay… its soo much paining… I am feeling burning sensation in my hand"

A reality struck Abhay. He looked up. There was Chand, again with those red eyes. Abhay could easily make out that Chand is very much angry. He knew that it's Chand's magical powers that hurting her. Abhay felt to strangle Chand to death for hurting her.

Abhay (fuming in anger): "Stop it Chand. You are hurting her (still holding her in his hand). Let her go.

Chand: "You Fool! You told her all about our secrets? You freaking human! I protected you from all the evils to witness this day?"

Abhay (trying to calm down): "Chand, she is not threat to us. She is the one who helped us to complete the key. We owe her. Spare her Chand. Don't do this to her"

Chand didn't take any interest in Abhay's word. All that he knew was, he should kill that girl. She was a threat to their quest. Abhay was not supposed to be distracted by some silly girl. They are onto a mission on which the fate of the human kind rests upon. Being the supreme witch, Chand couldn't allow the dark forces to rule the earth. For that, he is ready to do whatever it takes. Even if he has to remove the throne named Piya…

Abhay could understand what Chand is thinking. He and Chand were connected mentally. He knew how far Chand can go to protect their secret. Abhay had witnessed that before. But not this time… he doesn't want to lose Piya. .. He will go any length to protect her. She was the light in his life. He knew that she is the one meant for him. For a moment, he didn't think about the consequences. He was even least bothered whether she has the same feelings for him. All he wanted that moment was to protect her by showing Chand how much he loved her, how much she meant to him… Abhay slowly release Piya from his arms. Her big baby eyes told him that she was scared. He cupped her face in his hand. He kissed her forehead, then both her eyes. He looked at her lips and then at her eyes. He bent down. She closed her eyes. His lips touched hers. He started kissing her softly. They both felt soo divine inside. Abhay didn't felt this much happy in his 28 years. His overpowering emotions took control over his mind. His grip around her waist tightened. He started kissing her passionately as she clunged to him like a little child.

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