Creativity on pkyek forum. Have a look..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This week GOTW had a task in which players had to use their creative side. I feel all have done a beautiful job so sharing it here with you. Have a look 😃
A poem by - Princezz22 (Her gift for Kabir)
Tum rehmat ho, zehmat nahin.
Mohabbat ho, meri nafrat nahin.
Tum dua ho meri, wafa ho meri.
Meri zindagi ka ashiyaan ho tum.
Jab suraj nikalta hain nayi subah lekar,
tu tum yaad aate ho.
Jab suraj dhalta hain, chandni lekar
tu tum yaad aate ho.
Jab chand nikalta hain, raat lekar,
tu tum yaad aate ho.
Jab chand jaata hain, tab bhi tum yaad aate ho.
Subah tera naam honton pe lekar uthi ho.
Shaam ko bethi rehti ho khamosh teri soch mein.
Raat ko neend nahin aati, becheini tarpathi hain.
Tere khayal, teri soch mein doobi rehti ho.


P.S: This is written by me, so please No Copying to all.



A OS on Jay by - NIDHSARA (Her gift for Jay)
OS- Our Haven'..for Jay(Task-5)
I was sitting in my regular place in my haven. It was a small area canopied by trees with a stream running on one side.
Perched on my throne as I liked to call the rock I was trying to cajole my mind into understanding the words of the line which going by my nature I should have finished 3 days ago.
Well my mind refused to listen. It kept on straying back to the ruthless stranger I had seen today. At how easily he had broken the heart of the college beauty.
Not that I liked her. But a heart is a heart after all. Even if it belonged to a complete bitch like her.
"Poor Tanya" I said feeling sorry yet not so sorry.
A rustling from the right alerted me. A shadow was heading into my haven. Suddenly the subject of my thoughts emerged from among the trees buttoning up his shirt. He seemed to be completely engrossed in the job (or was it something else?) that he didn't notice my presence.
"Ehem" I cleared my throat.
He looked up. If he was surprised he didn't show it.
I raised my eyebrows in a questioning manner.
"What'.this isn't your property right" rude sexy voice.
"Not as far as I know" I replied back in the same manner.
"Means I can be here" he eyed me as if daring to challenge him.
I merely shrugged and diverted my attention back to the unrelenting book.
"So do you come here often" a question which sounded more like a demand.
"Yes this my haven you could say" I replied a tad too boldly.
"Haven huh'.what's so special about this place" scoffing with a little amusement.
"Nothing'I enjoy being here so this is my haven" my eyes were still trained on the book.
"Hmm" a agreeing grunt.
"So you don't enjoy social life much is it"
Did I just hear an expectant tone?
"What makes you think so?" finally I shut the book. My mind wouldn't budge from the scene in the morning.
"Its five in the evening most youngsters will be gearing up for party or date'.you are here with a book which doesn't seem to interest you'.not hard to deduce"
I smiled inspite of being irritated by his questionnaire.
"I do have friends but I do not go out much" Why am I offering an explanation?
A brief smile lit up his face then it immediately went back into the arrogant mode.
" I should be going'.and guess I will have to find a new haven"
I got up dusting myself.
"Why are you fed up of this place or is it my intrusion" his eyes twinkle.
"Well you have already deduced that I prefer to stay alone" sarcastic without intending.
"Well I won't pretend that I haven't been here before'.in fact I have been watching you for days'.this was my haven even before you found it" amused accusing tone.
"Oh then why didn't you tell me earlier"
A casual shrug was his only answer.
I sighed and turned back to go.
"So do you mind making it our haven"
This time the expectant tone was evident.
"I don't even know your name" I shrugged.
"Names are only a manner of recognition'.what matters is the intention'.Jay Khuranna by the way" ruthless stranger said.
"So do you mind sharing this haven with me'.don't worry I won't be around much" assuring.
I again found myself smiling and most surprisingly agreeing to him, an arrogant heart breaker.
"Okay then" I said
He turned and walked towards his path. At the start of it he turned and gave a smile, which strangely pleased me very much.
Written by - CHAKKU (Her Gift for Abhay)
"She looked like her, exactly like her..."
"I cudn't believe my eyes when i first saw her b'coz i lost her 100 yrs ago..."
"She was not my Maithali, she cud never have been Maithali..."
"I hated her, forced her to hate me..."
"But she started falling for me, started falling for a monster like me!"
"I insulted her, disgraced her, hurt her..."
"Yet she loved me, trusted me nd never misunderstood me..."
"I wanted ppl to hate me...i wanted her to hate me..."
"B'coz hatred is d only emotion which ppl do truly nd deeply from deir hearts..."
"But she proved me wrong...she loved me more dan any one else...she loved me more dan herself"
"I was afraid, wat wud happen when she wud come to knw my reality..."
"But she opened her arms to embrace me wid wat i was..."
"I was a heartless monster...wid no feelings nd no emotions..."
"She became my heart...d reason for my dead life..."
"I suddenly felt heartbeats, i suddenly felt an emotion like jealousy in me..."
"She nd Maithali started becoming one in my heart...but Piya carved a special place dere also"
"I cud feel dat dis Abhay was only nd only Piya's nd noone else's..."
"But i guess i don't have true love in my destiny..."
"D one whom i love more dan anyone else, more dan myself...doesn't remember me..."

THIS IS STRAIGHT FROM ABHAY'S HEART...FOR HIS BELOVED PIYA...
🤗




This was written by me for Abhay when Abhay was frozen!!!



Siggy and Poem by - Sliaan (Her gift for Abhay)
POEM
O my dear Abhay Raichand
You are my rare diamond
Whenever I see u Abhay
In the sky i flew away
And ur beautiful eyes
They are of no price
U always make me mad
Without u my day is sad
You are my real hero
Everyone else is zero
LOVE YOU LOTS
Written by - Cuteshrishti (Her gift for Abhay)
The story of Fire & Firefly
People used 2 think him beast
He was the creature of dark night
Sun never used 2 shine over his head
All happiness left him behind.
He was the loner
Destiny used 2 hate him
Life ditch him big time
He used 2 suffer without doing any crime.
They call him inhuman & heartless
& he never complain abt tht
But One day her soulmate arrived
& she gave him name: Angel
Meeting her was a delight
He felt happy & light
But 4 her safety he gave a thought
Lets leave her all alone
He was a fire & she was firefly
Who always wnts 2 go in his life
Fire tried his bst 2 keep her apart
But firefly was already his part
Firefly wnts 2 destroy her life in love
Bcoz she knew she'll get solace there
She jump into fire without his permission
And soon they become True soulmate & lover

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Posted: 14 years ago
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WINNERS of LoveVilla..Search for Miss Perfect
(Keeping all the tasks in mind, Here are the winners)
Winner (Abhay's Miss Perfect)
CHAKKU 👏
Here is your winning siggy:-
1st runners up (Abhay's Miss Perfect 2)
CUTESHRISHTI
Here is your winning siggy:-
2nd runners up (Abhay's Miss Perfect 3)
SLIAAN
Here is your winning siggy:-
WINNER (Sidharth Mehra/Raichand's Miss Perfect)
Sidchu
Here is your winning siggy:-
WINNER (Kabir Rathore's Miss Perfect)
Princezz22
Here is your winning siggy:-
WINNER (Jay's Miss Perfect)
NIDHSARA
Here is your winning siggy:-

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Just finished reading ...mindblowing !!. Thanks @TM ..i wouldn't have read if not created seperate thread for this . Awesome ...all of you 👏👏👏👏.
Congtz to winner 😳😳
Edited by abhaylove - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congo chakku,archi,nidhs & mahi.Love u all🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG seriously????????
I am the winner?????????

But my other Abhay pankhis(srishti and sliaan) were also gr8

Congo to Archi, mahi and nidhsara🥳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you Smiley for posting our works separately...
Congrats Chakku, Archi, Mahi for your Miss.Perfect Titles
Congo Sliaan and Shrishthi on becoming runner ups
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I loved Chakku's written gift for Abhay. The last line was touching!

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