Abhay-Piya OS : Arrest Her.

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Munaza sami

@M2NZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

senorita poco please update fast 😃

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

I loved it Nicita. The part about Tanushress Don't kill abhay coz he is too hot was damn good. I liked the story over all. The emotions were so raw between Pia and Abhay

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Sumana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Pocu this is WOW !!! 👏

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Frozen.K

@Frozen.K

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

nice one...I knew it...u were gonna write about protest...lol...

I want chapter 2 to it...can u update asap?...now I am loving this sadu raichand 😳

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Nidhi

@...Nidhi...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Awesome OS Nitica di!!!!👏 I really really loved it, it was so perfect, all emotions so beautifully portrayed!!!😍 Plz write atleast a second part of this one, plz plz plz, I really want to read further and am sure everyone else does!!!!
😊🤗

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A.hemalatha.kini

@TOTAL-ROMANTIC

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

OH GOD POCZ..my fav part is so easy to guess na..!! yeah ofcourse that part when ABHAY pulls her to him ..in his warmth..embrace her awww..from that crane..wooo hoo I so wish & feel it will be this way..GOD POCZ..what woudl we all do without you in this forum ...makes me getup with a squeak at nights some times..🤣 its as serious as that i mean..🤗

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Rehanna aka Parri

@Black_Paradize

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

em almost fainted litterally after reading this OS..em like some dead body i dun know wht to say but all em dreaming is abt tht scene where abhay saves her from the crane..and pia's feelings and condition after feeling abhay.em already dreaming even em not sleeping right now...u r awesome POCO,,simply awesome