My first ff-Our Sweet Love(Chap 8 page 24) (Pkyek) - Page 18

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Chapter Eight

Cruz grimaced "Don't care, he is a bit tipsy" he informed Pia who was gaping at Abhay, She looked back at Abhay to confirm her doubts, to her utter surprise he leaned forward and pushed Pia's nose using his index finger.

"Cruzeey' I don't like this girl' she is giving me flirtatious looks'. She is cheaaating on you" Abhay huffed angrily distancing himself as far as possible from Pia.

"Told you" Cruz commented snorting at Pia's amused face and turned to driving.

"Stoppp the Caaar" Abhay suddenly screamed after a short time, causing Cruz to halt the car abruptly, he flabbergasted looked at Abhay, before demanding him reason for his fussiness, but Abhay just narrowed his eyes in return "Bad Cruzy, forgot his promise, no chocolate for poor Abby Dabby" he jingled glaring at Cruz, whose expression held between amusement and disbelief.

But Pia couldn't hold herself any more; she busted out laughing hard looking at their expressions, Abhay's pouty one and Cruz's appalled one.

Abhay look fiercely at her, and turned to Cruz "She is a bad news' I don't want her to be my Bhabhi" he declared folding his arms, Pia choked on her laughter and glared at Abhay.

"Bhabhi?" Cruz questioned looking at both of them in confusion, Abhay snorted; "You don't know what it means Cruzzy Wizzy?" and winked at him.

Pia narrowed her eyes at Abhay, before replying to Cruz "He means Sister-in-law."

"She is a friend Abhay," Cruz informed him kindly before opening his side of door and moved around popping his head on back-seat window, "You want anything else?" he asked Abhay looking at the food store behind him.

Abhay gave him a look, "I want lots of chocolates," he said spreading his hands wide, "That's it."

Cruz then turned to Pia, who was pretending to be looking at something in the glove compartment, "Ummm, Pia would you like to have something?" she look sheepishly at him, even thought she was hungry, she didn't intend to force Cruz to waste his money on her.

"No" she lied, but her stomach growled at the same time, giving her away.

Cruz chuckled shaking his head while walking towards the store; they both were staring at his retiring body before he pushed open the door and disappeared entirely.

"Look Ms. Pia stay away from Cruz from now on." Abhay advised her in a deadpan tone.

"Excuse me?"

"I said, stay away from my friend."

"Why should I?" She demanded in a playful tone.

"Coz I said so." Abhay growled.

"Like I care." Pia retorted snorting a little.

Abhay grunted "I hate you"

"Same here" Pia snapped without missing a beat even thought she didn't meant it.

Cruz came back after ten minutes carrying few large bags, he opened his door and settled himself before giving away one of the bag to Abhay who was jumping impatiently in the backseat, "No Abhay, first finish your Pizza, then you can have chocolates." Cruz ordered him sounding like a father to some 6 year old one, no wonder Abhay was behaving like one right now, he groaned at not being able eat the chocolates first but nodded nevertheless.

He turned to Pia before placing a bulky box in her lap, she opened her mouth to refuse but Cruz shook his head, the box contained different varieties of small pizzas, Cruz bought just a hamburger for himself.

Abhay was muttering under his breath with his mouth full, Cruz gave him a meaningful look, which only caused Abhay to send daggers in his away.

"What's your problem?" Pia demanded directing her question at Abhay, who turned to her with an irate face.

"You of course" Abhay murmured still chewing his food.

"Abhay" Cruz started, but Pia was already prepared to give a piece of mind to Abhay, "It's your entire fault, why I'm here right now in the first place, as I would've just preferred to stay in my room... instead I'm stuck here listening to your non-stop dumbness" She took a deep breath, before continuing "I just don't understand how Cruz tolerates you, I mean' look at you' you are such a mess"

Abhay had enough his whole face was turning red, he looked at Pia before moving his gaze on to Cruz, and in the next sec a deep weep escaped Abhay's lips, and before Cruz or Pia could open their mouth, Abhay busted out crying, his face was now covered with tears.

"Cruzy' doesn't love' cute lil Abby" he said between sobs.

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