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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: mino1997
awesome dear 👏... love abhiya fights i love them ... ... loved the way u expressed abhiya feelings...eagerly waitin fr ur nxt update continue soon❤️😊

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#72

Wao!!!!!!
Awsm part dear.
fabulous,amazing.
too gud.
do cnt soon.
luv u
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#73

Originally posted by: rashika27.1997
awesome update yr...😃😃😃
i just loved it ...😃😃

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#74

Originally posted by: Gals_11
Gr8 Update Dear..d starting part wit d horn thing n whole abhiya was nyc.. Poor Piya..Sid is not her real bro n he's a werewolf.. Bt he surely loves her alot.. Loved it.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol.

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#75

Originally posted by: minibsp2007
👏Nice update and update soon. please pm me

will do so.thanksss

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#76

Originally posted by: mangona
hey syria wen wil u continue this ff its fab and i jxt love their fyts more then there moments

i will do it by please be patient

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_Klaroline_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

syria pleeez pleeez update this ff
I love this ff coz piya is in abhay's house
So pls pls pls pls continue this today if u can ok
N pleeez pm me

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

cool👏 update soon and plz pm me plz😕

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Minahil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

hey syria ... wen r u going to update this ff ... i just love this one due to the jealosy moments between them... update soon dear❤️

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The Hidden Prophecy

(Birthday Girl)

(Loneliness)
Piya had been crying all night in her room. The life she had been a lie. Everything her brother had told her was lie. She threw all the pictures (the memories) , she had left of her fake family. She was betrayed , and hurt emotionally. She did want anything to do with that family. It was her birthday. She questioned her self. What was the point of hiding the truth to her. She wished she had died along with her parents.

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(Feeling)

Abhay was pacing up, and down the stairs. The maids were blankly staring at him pondering why he was making a fool out himself. He felt imbecile with the hormones, and feeling rising through his whole body. He was supposed to be a vampire. A monster, a heartless creature. Then why the f**k was that chick was having so much effect on him with her agony, and pain. He wanted to go to her room, and comfort her. To assure everything would be alright. Abhay was frustrated as hell. To him Piya was not meant to be anything. Then why the hell were all these feeling kicking in? He raced through the forest to sort his mind out.

Piya

Piya pulled out the guitar from the closest she had brought from her old home. She brushed, and cleaned the cords of the guitar. And, She started singing Happy Ending. Lie ! Betrayal! Deceit! Pain! Suffering! Agnoy! Those were the feeling she had desired to cleanse from her singing. Singing was her one of hidden passion. Singing allowed her to be liberated from everything.

Abhay was leaning at the door with his torch video taping her singing. His gave her sly smile

Abhay: O baby! Did not you could sing so hideously . I am sure you tube will love this. Let's Videotaped. And, Now let's sign in you tube o upload this wonderful video (chirping brightly)

Piya ( hissing) - No ! If I can't destroy that phone of yours. She chased him through the hall.

Abhay using his telepathic powers to lure Piya in and out rooms. Finally Piya,who was leaned against the door to catch a breath.

Abhay came from behind and scared her.

Abhay- Boo!!!

Piya screamed her lungs out. Abhay laughed.

Abhay- Poor! Pathetic humans ! Can even catch up with us

Piya (snickering)- Motherf**ker! You think I am pathetic little human. I will show you. She threw her high heels at him. Abhay dodged it. Whatever she could find vase, or anything maid were carrying she threw at Abhay. She cussed Abhay, and scolded him. Calling him names. Finally Abhay, whose anger had been boiled enough pinned her against the wall. The maids who were walking back, and forth through upon sighting their prince with Piya sent daggered at her.

Abhay (yelling at the maids)- You little annoying bitches get out. Can't I have some privacy. The maid honored left on his orders.

Abhay: Now! You listen to me (pointing at her). Piya got lost in those intense, hypnotic blue eyes. She stared at him like a idoit

Abhay(snorting)- Today's it's your birthday. We are gonna celebrate it. I don't give a f**k if you want to or not. We are going to do it, and it's final. Besides, I want you too have something to cherish from all the shit you have found out today. I don't care. Go !Get your ass drunk, or sleep around. I don't f care. We are gonna celebrate birthday. That's clear, and whatever other things I could care less. Now, go get ready.

Piya nodded. She had never seen him in a such a temper. She was aware he was more powerful than her. Whatever he was planning today, she would follow his order to celebrate the birthday but not be his little puppet. And, the asshole was right, Why the hell was she going to spoil her birthday ?

Sid, and Panchi

Sid sitting on the sofa frustrated .

Sid: Panchi! She will never forgive me

Panchi(Consoling him)- I know Sid! And, today it's her birthday. My heart is aching to see her

Sid (putting his hand over Panchi rising up)- I think we should give her some time to take it in. She will come around. I know our bond is so strong we will conquer this. We will emerge victorious in this battle. Panchi hugged Sid.

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Birthday
The birthday celebration

When Piya walked in to the hallway, they were Abhay's friend whom he had invited. Abhay approached her, and handed her the roses, and a small bag .

Piya was shell shocked. What an Earth trnaformation had taken place in Abhay (her thoughts were running through the head)

Abhay (smirking)- You are wondering why I am being nice?

Piya (inquring curiously)- How did you know?

Abhay (hitting her head, )- I am a Vampire duffus! Duhhh! Anyway, It's ur birthday Let's make a pact not to fight . (handing his head out)

Piya (pleased)- Fine! Only For this day (pointing at him)

Abhay( enthustically)- Deal!

Piya shaked his hand as a symbol that it was a deal. She felt a shiver of electric current. Abhay, and Piya both withdrew their hand immediately. Sanjana came running through the door.

Misha: OMG !Babes ! I am so happy to see you. I miss you

Piya (teasing her freind)- You are squeezing me

Misha: ( pulling from the hug,her hands on her hips)- Come on my bear hug is suffocating for you. How mean? I am here to see my bestfriend after such a long time, and this what I get.

Piya: Kidding! Chill ! Anyway, Where is my gift? (handing her hand)

Misha: Abhay! (pointing to him). See this! This girl will pratically rip you off on yor birthday. Here! You babes 100 dollars bills, and your bro, and my fatty sis wanted me to hand this for you/

Piya: I am not taking their gift (She walked off)

Misha followed her , but Abhay stopped her.

Abhay: Mish! Don't worry she is cranky right now. But, she will accept them soon enough.

Misha(sober)- I don't how you deal with Miss. Tantrum there , but she has a pure heart .

Abhay: Tell me about it. She should be called Miss. Moody because her mood swings are always shifting back and forth. Anyway, Let's get to the celebrations (grinning)

Misha (enthusiastically chirping)- Have alcohol on you?

Abhay: Babes You have no idea! You can get your ass drunk all you want (wrapping his right arms around Misha, and leading her towards the party).

Piya remembering Abhay's deal went to the party . She put on her happy glowing face, and walked in. The bartender was handing alcohol to Misha already. Misha was competing along with some other girls. People greeted her as she walked in . Abhay yanked her from the crowd.

Piya: Why the hell did you yank me out?

Abhay (smirking)- To meet my boys silly! Come on!

Piya: If they are pigheaded like you. No thanks!

Abhay (sarcastically laughing)- Haha! Very Funny! Remember the deal (raising his eyebrows)

Piya: Fine! Lead the way (admitting her defeat)

Abhay enthusiastically lead her the way.

Abhay ( like a little child)- This is Fin! Marco! Paul! This is Piya

Piya: Hey ! Boys (flirting with them looking at them seducitively getting Abhay irked. Abhay calmed himself down.)

Marco- Dude ! If I could have a hot human like running around. I would do her right now.

Abhay(hitting Marco's head)- Shut up ! Duffus! She is a virgin. Let's be p.g. here.

Paul: Don't mind these 2 idiots. I am Paul handing his head out . You are extremely beautiful, and half the girl here envy you. (kissing Piya's hand). Abhay nearly punched him, but again relaxed himself.

Piya (seeing Abhay's jealousy gave Paul a kiss)- You are a such a cutie, and a gentleman. Marco! Thanks for the compliment. And, Fin won't you introduce yourself to me?

Fin(snorting)- I prefer not to acquaint with humans . (He left)

Paul - Don't mind him. I am here at your Madam Service. Wanna enter the competition along with you friend.

Marco- Will you have the first dance with My Lady, and don't mind the competition.

Piya (winking at Paul)-Let's me have this dance with this charming fellow , and your are on.

Abhay (hissing) - You ain't getting your ass drunk or dancing with Marco.

Marco (whining)- Come on Abhay! The lady is the one who can say yes or no? What's do u say Piya

Piya (putting her hands forth): I remember Abhay telling me today's my to get drunk, and dance. That's what I am doing. Now shoo! And admit your mistake vehemently

Piya danced with Marco. And, later competed with Piya's for shots. Abhay could not stop her , since he had opened big fat mouth. Paul was a womanizer, and he did not want Piya to get hurt. What was he thinking he was like a Paaul? Except., Abhay had loved a woman once, and was now on the verge of falling for another. Abhay watched as Piya drank shots by shots. She was pretty drunk now. He went to aid her to get her up.

Piya (drunk)- Shoo! Abhi! Darling! Go Away! I am legal now. I can take care of myself. Chess!

Abhay (looking at the crowd)- Shut up! And , and let's leave. Ypu are pretty wasted already.

Piya (whim-ping)- Hell No! You bloody ass vampire.

People murmed , and got curious . And, said nothing.

Abhay: Fine! I am a arrogant selfish jerk. Let's go (trying to pick her up)

Piya(pretending to feel disgusted): Hell No! Eww! A 200 year old age is touching me. You sex offendor! Creep !!! Leave me alone!

Abhay(amused)- But, you are 18 now (picking her up)

Abhay told the crowd, and his friends to leave.

Piya: I am only 18, but you are some 200 year old creep. This is violation. Call the police. Shut up! Let me go!

on the ay, Piya blurted out some Abhay's secrets embrassing him. Abhay! The great vampire! Sleeps naked at night in a red underwear. Is afraid to father a child. Actually, he sings in the shower too. There is more! Is a obsessed pokeman fan.

Abhay- Shut up! And, stop spilling my embrassing secrets out.

Piya felt asleep, and began to snore. Upon reaching her room locked the door. He softly laid her on the bed.

Piya (murmuring), and Abhay's amused

Piya: Abhay! You selfish bas***d! D***head.

Abhay (furrowing his eyebrows) - Cool! She curses me in sleep. What do u think about me Piya

Piya: A selfish, arrogant, and a hot bas***d which is swinging around my mind all day. Stupid! Ass! Why the hell is having so much affect on me? He is a bloody ass stuck up vampire?

Abhay ( amused, and smile on his face)- Prey! Tell me Love! What else you feel about me?

Piya - No! Telling you ! And, she crashed in to her deep slumber.

Abhay lightly kissed her forehead, and stopped himself beofre he got out of control. Abhay went to his bedroom, and whatever Piya had confessed he could not take his mind off that more than the way she had embrassed him.

Breakfast

Piya woke with a huge hangover.

Piya threw the blankets

Piya: Shoot! I drank so much, now I am getting punished for it. Piya took a quick shower,and changed in black shirt, and jeans.

Piya went downstairs dfor her breakfast. She did not want the maids to come to her room.

Abhay ( reading her shirt)- Nice Shirt ! Babes! So, you don't do

Edward Cullen

Piya: Shut up! (hissing)

Abhay : Thank God! I thought maybe one day I would have to a favor on a despo like you.

Piya: Me a despo! Come on! I am not some stupid bimbo (pouring milk on his hair)

Piya stumped her foot, and left.

Abhay: Piyali! You are so going to get this. Abhay chased her with human speed, and Piya chased him too. Soon, they bumped, and landed on top of each other.

Abhay, and Piya have a quick eye lock session. And, before Piya can pull away. Abhay inches his lips towards, and pulls her head . Piya losing control give in to the temptation. She taste his mouth, and tasted him. She went deeper, and deeper feeling his mouth, and tasting it every bit of it. Soon, They heard a foot steps pull away quickly leaving Piya;s cheeks with heat, and Abhay was just shocked on what happened.

Piya (finally finding the courage to speak)- Look ! I am gonna go ok!

Abhay: Me too (feeling uncomfortable , and happy at the same time.

I know this chappy is okay dokky. This whole ff until Abhiya do not fall for each is going to be written like this with no serious english, but plain old english. It's going to be simple.

Adieu, two new ff are under construction.

From next time onwards the update are gonna be longer, and more well written

Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago