ff fallen (do see - an abhay sid and others ff)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ff :FALLEN

prologue :-

( note to readers the coming up paragraphs are what the characters in the ff think )

sid - traitor , betrayer, disloyal , bad , evil and low caste is what they call me . they punished me for something i never did . my brother whom i loved and cared for who was the only person in my life whom i loved the most, misunderstood me , broke his relation with me and blamed me for something which i never committed just believing another persons words. my parents threw me out of the clan . they disowned me . why should i forgive them , my parents , my brother . for hundred years i have been alone . no one cared for me , no one loved me . traitor , bad betrayer was all i heard why should i go back to my family , why should i forgive them after all what they did to me even now they dont know the truth they still think i betrayed them

abhay - even though i love him and think that he is innocent . how could he betray me . our family . i cant get over this . is he the same brother who loved and cared for me . is he the same brother who in our human days , used to starve and give me his food when i was hungry . is he the same brother who fought with others when they used to tease me everytime i fell off the horse . is he the same brother who stayed all night awake while i was ill . i cant believe that my brother could do such a thing . even though we hate eachother now i know somewhere my big brother still loves me like how i still love him
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(okay guys that was the prologue . this story is based on abhay sid . they are the central and heart of this story . ofcouse piya and others are there but this is the central story . pls tell me if i have to continue . and yes to my other ff 's readers i am ypdateing them soon but do tell me if you like this one too)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwww
sid and abhay relationship

plz plz plz cont
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting prologue!! Do continue...!!
-Nidhi 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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another gd one yaar...
pls cont.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Dear hwz u..?? Finally ur back after a long time.. Coming to d FF.. Nice Title. Gr8 Prologue.. Continue soon n plz update ur other FFs also.. Thanx for d pm.. Tkcr..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hy didi sounds awsome but i hope u dont forget your other ff cuz im addicted to it so carry on with dis but continue the other one xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey ur alryt
do cont. eagerly w8ing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it looks very interesting !!
do continue ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept..
plz continue
and plz update ur other FF's too...i've been waiting

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