AbhIya FF Pyaar Aur Takraar

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AbhIya FF Pyaar Aur Takraar

Chapter-1

Hey Guys, this is my very first FF on ABhIya , If i get support and encouragement ..........then,will continue..........

Waiting for your response guys.........


She had just broken up with her boyfriend, and life had never seemed so gloomy.

Every time Piya felt depressed, she drove here to the park. She left her car, slowly walked deep into the wooded area and sat on a bench.



The cold spring sun frowned through torn clouds. The dreary moans of doves cast further gloom over Piya, and she felt vexed. Even the shabby squirrels stared impudently at her.

"I am the most unlucky person on Earth!" she said aloud.

"Why?" she heard from an unknown man as he sat down next to her. Sometimes, when we are upset, we need just to talk with whoever will listen. Piya tried to explain her feelings to the stranger, but the man looked at her oddly, and she grew perplexed.


Piya thought about her life and could find no reason to complain.

She had good parents whose only fault was that they loved her too much and spoiled her. They paid her tuition and other needs, and she had never known what it was to be on a tight budget.

She was in perfect health.

Yes, she had caught her boyfriend cheating on her, but, honestly, she had no strong feeling for him. She realized that now.

So, what was the matter?

She could not understand, and she cried. The man smiled and started speaking easily and articulately.

His soft, peaceful voice echoed deep in Piya's mind and, surprisingly, her soul. She had not given her soul much consideration.

"How trifling are all our problems when compared to the Greatest Mystery of Creation," he said. "How insignificant are all our reasons to be upset in view of the countless number of other worlds. How miserable is all our suffering next to the Eternity of the Universe. Am I right? I'm Abhay Raichand." The man got to his feet. "Look around! The world is beautiful, isn't it?"

Cheerful starlings now chirped optimistically. Warm sunshine flowed all around.

Tender moans of the doves aroused sweet dreams of true love.

And the girl laughed. Piya felt capable of understanding and forgiving everybody, and

it was deep, real happiness. She looked at the man. He started towards his car.

"Abhay, wait!" she gasped. "I don't want you to just go! Let's have a picnic."

"Piya, dear, I'm busy." He smiled tenderly.

Had she given him her name when telling her story? She must have, she decided.

"How about the weekend?"

Abhay hesitated. "Okay."

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Hey...............Guys,A very humble request, those who like FF and want PM ,Please like the above POst

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nice concept
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Originally posted by: mayur_shanak

nice concept
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Thanks for liking ..............................😊

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thats a good start..do continue..send me a pm..
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seems like a nyc story:)do pm me the next part!!
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good beginning 👏
update soon😉
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nice start..
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Awsm dear.
jus luvd it.
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hey.... nice start yaar....
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