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Hey people its a new fanfic created by me..Its a dark love story of a girl.Abhi itna hi btaungi nd nw a preview of my fan fic & its characters.
Beautiful City Shimla & its beautiful mountains.Christmas is coming & everyone is in a very happy mood.Everyone in the town is talking about christmas party which is goin to take place at Oberois Mension.The Oberois,they are very famous people & they belong to music industry.They have launched many talented singers.Their mension is most beautiful house in the whole Shimla & infact in whole India.They are a one small happy family.Their family consist of :-
Siddharth Oberoi-The owner of the Oberoi music industries.A very soft person by heart & very helpful.Loves helping needy people & very down to earth.
Nitya Oberoi-Wife of Siddharth Oberoi.She's bit rude & arrogant.Very closed person & dont like to interact with others.Totally opposite of Siddharth.We can say she's Introvert.
Rishi Oberoi-Son of Siddharth & Nitya Oberoi.The hottest guy of Shimla.Girls go over ga ga for him.A big flirt who believes that whatever he want,he'll get it.Mamma's boy.He's bit grey in his attitude & behaviour.
Natasha-Would be wife of Rishi Oberoi.Damn gorgeous but a close book for everyone.Always sad & lost somewhere.Love to rebel Rishi though Rishi loves her alot.From her heart she hates Rishi & dont want 2 marry her.Reason is still hidden.She loves to roam around the city in night & that also alone.She has this deep pain in her eyes but she always try to hide it.
Angad Arora-Best friend of Rishi & Natasha.He's very down to earth person & always try to save girls from rishi's flirtatious nature.Great supporter of Natasha.
Trisha-Angad's girlfriend.Child from heart but quite mature from mind.She knows how to handle natasha & Rishi's fight.
Rahul Singhania-Want to be a singer with the help of Oberois.Very cute & gudlooking guy.Always smiling but Rishi hates him & always try to malign his position in front of Siddharth Oberoi.
More characters will be introduced later on.
So here's the story :-
Its 24th December's evening.Mension has been decorated like a Bride.Everyone is singing Christmas Carol & waiting for the grand party which is goig to take place at Oberois Mension.
Angad-Dude tu kal party mein kya pehnega?
Guy in black Gucci Jacket-Hum jo pehate haiwoh fashion ban jaata haišŸ˜‰.
Angad-I know I kow nd den girls will be like OH MY GOD DEKHO RISHI OBEROI KO HE'S SOOOO HOT😳.Come on yaar jab dekho apni tareef krta rehta hai.Aur ek Natasha ko dekh,woh kabhi tere jaise nhi karti.
Rishi-I know usse kisi se matlab hi nahi hai.Yaar pata nahi kahan khoyi rehti hai.Mein kuch bhi pehnu uspar koi asar hi nahi padta.Ab aaj subah hi dekh le.Mein uske liye Ritu Kumar ki dress laya tha party ke liye.Usne woh lene se mana kar diya.
Angad-Kyun😲?Mein agar Trisha k liye ritu kumar ki dress lekar jaun to woh toh mjhse shaadi hi kar legišŸ˜†.
Rishi-I know.Yaar saari ladkiyan mujhpar marti hai & ek mein hun jo iss par mara hun par yeh mujhe ghaas hi nahi daaltišŸ˜•.
Angad-Waise hai kahan woh?
Rishi-Jaane kahan hai.
To be cont.
Guys i'll continue dis story later on.I hope that u all will like it😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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gud intro cont. soon liked it very much
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice Intro.. Liked it.. Do Continue soon n add me 2 ur pm list.. Waiting for d next part..lol.
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So here's my next part :-
Angad-Arre what do you by saying k jaane kahan hai.She's ur fiance dude.Your would be wife.Agar woh yahan nahi hai ya kisi baat se pareshaan bhi hai toh u shud kno k aakhir baat kya hai.
Rishi-Yaar usse kitna puchun.Kabhi kuch share nahi krti.Phir mjhe gussa aata hai nd mein usse marta hun.Woh meri sunti hi nahi hai.
Angad-Yaar itni baar kaha hai k bandi par haath na uthaya kar par tu sunta hi nahi hai.šŸ˜”.
Rishi-Toh kya karun.We are together from the last 3 years but ab tak usse happy nahi dekha.Mein usse kitne gifts lakar deta hun,kitni parties deta hun,kitne vacations par le jaata hun but woh hai ki.Can u believe it k aaj tak humare bich ek kiss tak nhi huišŸ˜’.
Angad-Yaar mein wohi toh keh raha hun.Tu uspar har baar apna zor yun chalata hai.Pyaar dega toh pyaar milega.
Rishi-Haan bhai saari fault meri hai
Then we see a Church which is beautifully decorated with lights,colorful ribbons,little fairy dolls,candles & a christmas tree.There's a girl sitting on the floor with joined hands & tears in her eyes.She has a very beautiful big black eyes,her hairs are long jet black,skin is as white as snow,lips are pink like roses.We can say she's a girl with eternal beauty,purely feminine & she's wearing white floral dress.She looks like a princess.
Girl-Why me God?Why me?Mein aapse kuch zyada toh nai manga tha bas sacha pyaar par uski jagah mila ek Dhokha.Aisa dhokha jisse mein kabhi bahar nahi aa sakti.Mujhe maar kyun nahi diya.Ye din dikhane k liye kyun zinda rakha hai.I hate myself.Mujhe khud se ghinn aati hai😭
Then another girl comes from behind.
2nd Girl-Babe tu yahan hai?Pata hai meine tujhe kitna dhundha nd kahan kahan dhundha?
Girl-Yaar tjhe pata hai na mujhe yahan aana kitna acha lagta hai.Kitni shaanti hoti hai yahan😊.Aur tjhe pata hai mein aaj yahan bachon k liye gifts bhi lekar aayi.Woh sab bahut khush hue.
2nd Girl-I know but ab hum chale?
Girl-Trisha plz yaar.tu jaa mein khud aa jaungi.Aaj mein khub ghumungi.Its Christmas yaar.City i decorated like a new bride.Mein nahi jaa rahi.Mein toh chali ghumne.
The girl who's talking to Trisha is none other than Natasha.
Trisha-Natasha meri pyaari Nats tu ghar chal.Wahan tera romeo tere liye pagal hua jaa raha hai.
Natasha suddenly stops smiling.
Natasha-Toh kya karunšŸ˜’.
Trisha-Matlab?
Natasha-Yaar i really dnt care.Karne de usse wait.Mjhe koi farak nhi padta.
Trisha-Nats dnt say that yaar.He loves u alot.How can you say that.
Natasha-Bt I
Trisha-😲
Natasha-I mean theek hai i know but I want to enjoy this tym.Plz yaar chal tu bhi chal mere saath ghumne.
Trisha-Plz yaar kal chalenge abhi tu ghar chal.waise b bahut der ho gayi hai.Plz for my sakešŸ˜’.
Natasha-Acha chal ghar chalte hai.Ab zyada nautanki mat kar.
Trisha-šŸ˜†.
At Oberoi Mension
Nitya-Kahan reh gayi yeh ladki.Dekh liya tumne Rishi.Aur chadha kar rakho isse sar par.Ab tak wapas nahi aayi hai😔.
Rishi-Aa rahi hogi mom.Gayi hai trisha usse dhundhne.Mein karta hun isse aaj baat.Bahut ho gaya.
Siddharth-Chodo bachi hai.Apne aap theek ho jayegi.
Nitya-Rehne do siddharth.Tum toh hamesha uska support krte ho.
Rishi-Dad aap bich mein mat padiye.Ab mein dekhta hun isse.
Natasha comes back.
Natasha-Sorry mein late ho gayišŸ¤”.
Rishi-Time dekha hai tumne?Tum jaanti ho k hamara itni der tak ghar se bahar rehna bilkul safe nahi hai😔.
Natasha-🤢.
Rishi-Tumhe asani se kuch samajh nahi aata na.
Natasha-Let me live my life.I really dont care bout anything.
Rishi slaps Natasha very hardly.
Natasha with tears in her eyes-Ho gya?Yahi toh karte aaye ho 3 saal mein.You know what I HATE YOU.
Rishi-Go to your room🤢.Kal party hai & kal
Natasha-Mein nahi aa rahi kisi party mein😔.
Rishi twist her hands ver badly
Rishi- You are coming & now go in your room🤢.
This was all for today.I hope that you all will like it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmm no response kisi ka bhi...i think i shud discontinue writing...

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