~ ..I Belong With You..~Abhiya F.F..chap2-pg6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok so I have about a 100 things to do with my exams coming in May'but I just can't do all studying..so I decided to write

An f.f on Abhiya'I honestly don't know what exactly I am going to write'I have a 100 scenes in my mind and I need to piece them together'

Firstly about the title..I need to explain it'I got it from a song by Muse it's called "I Belong To You" and is in the Twilight saga-New Moon soundtrack(Listen to the song if you guys can its absolutely awesum'then again I Love Muse songs)'I somehow feel that Abhay and Piya signifies the essence of belonging together'they are not 'designed' to be together but well they are 'meant' to be together'.

That being said let me come to the story''

Character's


Abhay Raichand-I am giving only one word to describe him.He is an "Enigma"(even to me)'.I will give him definition as he lets me in his life and mind'only one thing is for sure till now that whatever he is or how messed up he is in his soul(or does he have one!?) he belongs with Piya'

Piyali Sharma-She is an 17 year old girl'She comes to Dehradun on her own on a rainy night(she is alone in this world as her mom died when she was just 8 months old and she doesn't even know how she looked or who her father was as the first memory she has in her life is that of being an Orfan)..She has a scholarship to study in the Dehradun Mount College'However what she doesn't know is that she is not here on her own will'she is here because she "belongs" here as her entire life(!?) is going to change for better(or worse!?) here coz here she is going to meet Abhay'.


Misha Dobriyal-She is a jolly character and also studies in Mount College'she has a loving family and lives with her Mom Mrs.madhu Dobriyal,her Dad Mr.Arnab Dobriyal and her two siblings Karan Dobriyal and Panchi dobriyal'


Karan Dobriyal-He is the elder brother of Misha and Panchi..However is in the same class as Misha because He dropped one year as he had a nasty accident when he drove his new sports car into a tree and ended up being Hospitalised for 6 months..


Panchi dobriyal-She is Misha and Karan's elder sister and is currently working at Mount college as the Assistant Drama teacher..

So that's the characters sketches for now'I will introduce many more characters' later'so tell me do you want me to continue this f.f???? Then I will put up the first update tomorrow'so guys do rply..

INDEX-

Chapter1

Rain drops-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40991326

Chapter2

Start Of Something New-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1651335&PID=41038633�


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey i luvd it...do update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good idea Titli, would love to see how it progresses
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice Character Sketch.. Loved d Title.. Do Continue soon n add me 2 ur pm list..lolz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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intersting introduction

do cont n let me know
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb!!!!!!!!
Amazing cncpt yar.
n wndrful name of d ff.
too gud yar.
i think u shud cnt wid ff ,m desperately w8ing for ur first updt.
so,plz cnt soon.
nd do pm me yar.
add me to ur pm list(I think m already in ur pm list but if m nt do add me).
plz do cnt soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waiting for your update
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titli go on and m waiting 4 it
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Chapter-1


..Rain Drops..

"Standing in front of the window..

I look into the world outside..

I can see drops of rain on the window pane..

I touch a drop and it just slips on the pane and disappears..

A teardrop falls from my eye as even a raindrop don't want to be mine..

Then how can I blame myself for not wanting to be a part of the "ME" I am…!!??"

And then Piya closed her dairy…!! Its not everyday that she writes in her dairy nor does she record every single detail of her life in it..It's enough pain to live through her half-empty life as it is…writing that down will just be a tad bit much to handle…but well on days like this when she feels absolutely dejected and afraid and empty and allows a lone tear to fall from her eye is when she doodles some lines or thoughts or even some lyrics from a million of her favourite songs on the dairy she got as a farewell gift from her fellow friends of the orphanage..where she stayed for the entire 17 years of her life…At this moment she was on her way to Dehradun..She starts college tomorrow and was supposed to go and settle in the college hostel before midnight..However as usual absolutely nothing in her life goes according to plan so the train she took was about 4 hours late and it was already midnight and it will take at least 1 hour more to reach Dehradun on top of that it was raining heavily and there was hardly a chance that she will get any transport from the station to the hostel.All these thought was making her super depressed and that sucks…so she started doodling on her dairy…However although she tried to write something cheerful in it..she ended up writing some weird and twisted definition of the fact that she was absolutely disgusted with being herself because no matter how brilliant she was in studies(she got a 99% in her last exam and cracked the Mount College Scholarship which was given to only one person each year),or how eagerly she was looking forward towards starting a life on her own in the outside world the fact remains that she hates being on her own..all she wants is to belong somewhere but well as she has learnt the hard way in the past 17 years she doesn't belong anywhere..

The train came to a screeching halt,thus breaking Piya away from her reverie..She got up took her bag and descended from the train in the middle of tremendous rainfall on the Dehradun train station.Here she was at Dehradun the place she was meant to be..Wait!! "meant to be" Piya was so shocked as this thought crossed her mind that she stopped in her tracks..She never felt like that the idea of her being meant to be somewhere was so absolutely new that it was as if someone else has put it in her mind..

"Honestly Piya..!! What are you thinking!!" she said out loud to herself and came out of the station to see if she can find any transport the chances of which was however very thin as it was about 2'o clock..As obviously she didn't get any transport so she decided to walk to the hostel good thing it was straight on the road as she knows from the direction map given to her along with her college broachers and if will take her about 20 minutes to reach it..However bad thing that it was raining heavily..she doesn't have an umbrella and she was scared that she will catch a bad cold if not have fever the next day..

"God please please I don't want to fall sick on the first day of college" she was praying in her mind while walking towards the hostel..

Abhay was mad..he was so angry that day that his control on his powers was lapsing it was as if he doesn't want to control his powers and cause massive destruction.Well then again he hasn't really caused massive destruction in a long time so may be he has earned it..On top of that his so called parents wanted him to attend college that was plain infurating.Ok it was his fault if only he was not enjoying the entire I-want-to-be-an-anonymous-vampire charade he was playing to be away from the way he was held in the Vampire Community at large then he could have just told them his so called parent's to back-off and they would have to listen however he can't do that as those stupid vampires with whom he was living thinks that he is a fairly new vampire(super-funny idea) just a few centuries old and that they had taken him under their wing and not otherwise and for the sake of his own sanity and offcourse fun he has to keep it that way..He had just had a verbal brawl with his so called mother Haseena about attending college tomorrow the reason well he wanted to go to college on his own whereas she wanted him to go with her husband and his so called father Chand so that everyone knows how much power(hell if only those nave Vampires had any idea about how much power he actually has)he has as Chand had just become a new trustee of the college and got about the maximum say in things. Anyways in the end haseena won the fight not because Abhay wanted to give in but because he was getting mad and had to ran away before he lost control over his powers and brought down the entire house or something equally stupid yet enjoyable..He missed destruction..It was raining heavily and after running till the border of Dehradun he again rain back..He was feeling marginally better now..Running never fails to get him in a good mood. He decided to try something human for a change so he slowed down to a walk and started walking towards the Dehradun railway station..it felt good to be walking that way and that was a pretty nice feeling it was as if he was meant to be walking that way..wait!! "meant to be" that took Abhay by surprise and honestly after living for so long he is not easily surprised by anything but the whole idea was so new that he felt a bit shaken..He has been to numerous places been with numerous people human-vampire-witches-even shape-shifters but he had never felt that he was "meant" to be somewhere except for that one time decades ago.."F*** Abhay don't you dare go there" he cried out loud to stop his mind from wandering into that territory which made him feel so much pain..and continued on his walk…However no matter how much he tried to shake the feeling he still felt as if he was "meant" to go that way…!!

Precap-Abhay and Piya meet..(or do they really!!??)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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a very nice strt
i felt eerie as i read da last part
gud wrk
cont soon

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