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Posted: 14 years ago
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I was thinking about abhiya and scribbled some lines...Please bear with me....

The breeze is flowing, the birds are chirping, the weather is pleasant....
but something is missing...

I have my friends around, i am smiling, i am laughing....
but something is missing....

I am strolling, feeling lonely and isolated but failing to understand....
what is missing....

And then...

I see a stranger walking towards me...
A stranger whom i know since ages...
I gaze at him like a deer caught in flashlight

Now

I know what was missing....



Waiting for comments....

Love
Suvi
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TOTAL-ROMANTIC thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very very nice...Thank you so much..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome......
thanks 4 this lovely post
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👏 very nice post !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww... beautiful... 😃
I just loved it !!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it,you've so beautifully expressed your thoughts about that void which only that certain stranger can occupy in your life..Just when everything seems perfect,you wonder...is this what I have been waiting for,or all that I ever wanted in my life...
Awesome,do share more of your creations 😳

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