FF-Hum Tum Forever- NOTE Page 9

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Author's Small Note : No Character Sketches As he story progresses you will know how the characters Shape up '' Read On'.. Oh Yeah It's not a Dark story at all like the show .. All is NORMAL''
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Too many Characters ideas in mind ' will try and manage

& if you want To be added to Pm list pls Add me to Buddy list
Special Roles in my FF ' Sara (nehara) & romi (romaila) thanks guys '. MUAHs to you both for putting up with me and helping me '''
And special Dedication to my Lollypop (pRaTiBhA.1990) Girl this is part of your 21 Birthday Gift Package I promised you ..
Oh BTW mish piya and pancchi have 3 year age difference
Mish - 20
Piya - 23
Pancchi - 26
AND MiYA Fans No worries Shaw Will be there soon
Chapter 1
Dobrial Family Moments
We see a Girl chatting away happily on her laptop .. panning Close we see a Chat Screen popup on her screen She grinningly starts to IM her BFFL
Chat screen Opens
CoolDude _KR123- Hey angel Love '' you there '.
SweetyGal _PD 98- Hey kabir how's everything?????
CoolDude_KR123- Piya !!!!! it's been like Forever !!! I am good '''''.
SweetyGal_PD 98 ' yeah it has been 4.5 years ok I have a news for you''. BRACE YOURSELF
I AM COMING TO LONDON!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I can't believe it I got my certificate I am a certified doctor Now!!!! Yayness isn't it???
CoolDude_KR123- Totally '. So that's what Sara& Romi have been hiding from me!!!! SO MEAN of You PD UNHE bataya aur Mujhe nai .. * VIRTUAL POUT*
SweetyGal_PD 98- Aakhir Dost kiske hai ??? * Virtual raising of collars* I made them swear that wo dono tujhe kuch naa bataye'. BTW , you look so cute pouting *Virtual pulling of cheeks* .. I Told Maan(author's note he is Piya Misha & Pancchi's cousin. Masi ka beta ) bhai and Geet bhabi the details tu fikar na kar . Mai chali Shopping karne '.. Mish & pancchi say hi and give u a hug '.. Ab Chalti hoon .. warna Pancchi maar daalegi
CoolDude_KR123- haan bye ' see you soon babelicious
Both sign out'..
Piya Dobrial.. The SUPER GENIOUS.. As friends call her .. was Grinning Like an IDIOT '. Apne Jigri friend se nearly 5 saal baad baat kar ke She was so happy '''.
Rhea Dobrial (same as (madhu) the show just changed name ) piya's mom Was going to call Misha & pancchi for their Family Shopping trip turns around and looks at piya Smiling ' Kya baat hai Piyu ??? Why you smiling so much eh??? Zaroor kabir se baat hui hogi hai naa ??? kaisa hai who '.. Romi aur sara ki bhi koi khabar nahi hai
Piya( still Smiling)- YEA !!!! IM par abhi baat hui thi ''' they all are good . waise London Mei Kitna Mazaa aayega naa Mom??? Doston se milna naye rishte banana So Interesting '. I guess Mujhe bhi mera Prince mil jaayeg what say Mom'. Meri baatein Choro .. Mish and Panchi kahan hai ??? Dad bhi gayab hai' they know that it's Family Evening ''.. ( she says walking to the dining table)
And Suddenly yells - DAD!!!! Shakkar waali chai Nai aap ka sugar barh jaayega
Rajveer(Same as Show just name changed)- Piyu (wails) hamesha se aise hi Mujhe startle karke pakarti hai tu Peene de naa Piyu ..
Piya ' DAD!!!!!!(mock anger ) theek hai aaj ke lie pee leejiye'' bas AAJ hi ok dad'.. Chalo aap bhi taiyaar ho jaaiye humari Farewell party ki shopping karni hai '.. Get going Dad'..
MOM where are Misha and Pancchi mai jaa rahi hun ab aur kitna wait karayenge yeh Dono ''
Pancchi n Misha coming
Both- Kya Hai Piyu aa rahe hai bhai''..
Piya - NO guys koi mere saath nai aane waala '''. I am Going .. thora kaam hai khatam kar ke aati hu''
Ok so that was a Small intro to the Dobrial Family
NEXT PART: Raichands ke Family pal '. Farewell party... Abhay piya meeting in the farewell party and It's not quite pleasant...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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INDEX

Dobrial Family Moments- Pg 1

Chapter 2
Bickering, Farewell Party & DANCE - page 3
Chapter 3
Dates Proposals A Broken Heart & Bonding- page 6

Chapter4A Pg 8

Note Page 9



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Edited by -Destiny- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤗mwahh lekhu🤗

wat a start
ma bday gonna b rocKing this year
🤗thankss janupie🤗
it seems lyk a haPpY haPpY story
so piya going 2 london
👏
😳m eagerly waitng 4 my darling abhay's entry😳
L😳V praty
Edited by pRaTiBhA.1990 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lekha itz awesome!😳

count me in!!😊
wud love to read this one😃😳...........do add me to ur pm list k😃
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u Nikki pari lollypop and deepthi

will be updating soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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add me 2 ur pm list
it is interesing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww... Lekha.....🤗 that's sweet...
and yaar... really love the beginning...it's interesting..... 😃
dnt forget to add me in ur pm list... 😉
and plz update soon..... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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what shall i say.......☺️ first of all very well written first part was short but conveyed the Doprail's relations very well.......bye the way Lekha what me n Sara are doing there. Next time Abhay se meeting fix karana.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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one more thing don't add me in ur pm list meinawein ajaya krungi frnds k post mein thora hi na invitation ka wait kartey hain......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: romaila

what shall i say.......☺️ first of all very well written first part was short but conveyed the Doprail's relations very well.......bye the way Lekha what me n Sara are doing there. Next time Abhay se meeting fix karana.


ek bataaun???? Shhh *kisi ko mat bolna *

dono Abhay and piya ki common friends ho t um Dono😳

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