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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pia

You never fail to astound me
With your powers divine
It's not your face that charmed me
But the fact you were always mine
I know I can always trust you
Because you and me are one and the same
And if you cannot trust yourself
It's no use giving anyone else the blame
You always cared for me
When I thought I was alone and in despair
And yet you always pretended
That you really did not care
But I know that you love me
My heart knows I love you too
I'm waiting for the day when in front of everyone
I can finally express my desire for you...

Abhay

I wasn't supposed to fall in love again
I wasn't supposed to bear this pain
I was supposed to let my memories be hidden
I was supposed to keep our love forbidden
And yet I do not hesitate
In telling each cruel trick of fate
We will never be separated come what may
I am a creature of the night, but your love is my day
I know you trust me beyond your life
I intend on always keeping that trust in me
For in a span of such a short time
You've become the only thing my eyes can see...

I know it's incredibly cliched....but I wanted to share it with you guys..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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😍**Mesmerized by your poems Meg,⭐️

Loved this one especially,

"I am a creature of the night, but your love is my day"
😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow! you wrote it?
Its really beautiful. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugaryanu

wow! you wrote it?

Its really beautiful. 😳


Yeah I did..😆 Thanks...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awwwwww this has to be by far the best one I have heard from u..
Their emotions were drained so beautifully.. No words to describe it..u have said nearly everything..in a flow..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: NIDIZ

Awwwwww this has to be by far the best one I have heard from u..
Their emotions were drained so beautifully.. No words to describe it..u have said nearly everything..in a flow..!!


Something's wrong with like button.. Thank you so much...my poems are like my babies...😆 and I really liked it when people appreciate them...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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megsieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🤗..absoltely fantastic..loved both the POV..esp abhay's !gahh u really captured his train of thought!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its such a beautiful poem
Write more you are good
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg! that was so beautiful.. you totally brought out how abhay-piya felt through the writing..
i loved abhay's one the most:)
please keep writing more! its a pleasure to read such beautiful poems.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome. Perfect feelings for both of them.

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