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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi everyone I wrote a poem From Abhays point of view
Im not a poet so please bear with me
Click the like button if you enjoy it
Im open to critisism as it will help me improve so please give your feedback 😳


My life is no longer lifeless
With you in it its priceless
Love passion devotion
Forgotten were these emotions
You brought them back with a click of your finger
Now they are here forever to linger
I have but one wish my dear
Never to see a glimpse of your tear

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow amazing! loved itšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AmazingšŸ‘Loved it
Please continue writing....you are really talented
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ka7eela thank you very much 😃
@kritz08 aww so sweet of you I will try to write more 😳
thanx for the encouragement guys
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey very nice poem pls continue writin !!šŸ˜ŠšŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: niru273

hey very nice poem pls continue writin !!šŸ˜ŠšŸ‘


Thanx this just came to my mind after such a beautiful episode if more comes to me I will write for sure 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Really nice poem
Keep on writing more such lovely prosešŸ‘šŸ¼
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wow i liked it
keep on writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu93

Really nice poem
Keep on writing more such lovely prosešŸ‘šŸ¼


Thank you I will definetly try 😊

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