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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guyz i had composed a poem,i posted it in kmh forums also n now i m posting it here 4 u awl as this poem suits the situation of the current track of show , the situation is wat a person feels wen he/she loses sumone or sth special lyk Pia lost the trust of dobrials,Abhey lost Maithli
Title : I lost sumthing

i lost sumthing wich was very dear,

y i lost it??,its really unfair.

i hav been searching it 4 past few days,

4 searching it i applied all my ways.

wen i got it,i was so happy that i went mad,

now wen i hav lost it,i m really sad.

i want to get it back now,

but the problem is how??

there is so much noise wen a glass is broken,

but no one could hear the sound wen i was heartbroken.

i don noe whether i'll get it back or not,

but 1 thing is sure,i'll miss it a lot.

guyz do leave ur comments
Gud luck to awl.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely poem. And so kinda of describes Abhay and Maithili's relationship I guess
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinuchand

Lovely poem. And so kinda of describes Abhay and Maithili's relationship I guess

thnx dear 4 liking it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very well written
👏
do write more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely poem 🤗keep writing more on abhiya 😃

Edited by tanubie. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnk u guyz 4 ur comments😊
ur comments mean a lot n they inspire me to write more
luv u awl🤗

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