Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended.

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Ritika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#961

Originally posted by: Pocahontas
You guys are playing guess-guess on my FF? 🤣.....

Thank you, AbhIya Lover for such a nice response.

The next update will be up by 3am IST today. ❤️

You're welcome! Thanks for acknowledging me! And of course we are playing guess-guess! It is no fun if we don't. Though, it is a shame that we can't actually voice our guesses. We are all living in fear of you! 😆 Jk!

Ok, my review!

Poor Piya. Her love comes into her dreams in the middle of the night, and leaves her with only a memory, all the while hiding from her because he thinks that she isn't safe with him and can't live a normal human life. Misha is almost as curious as Piya was in the show! It's true, even though Piya didn't know what Abhay was when she fell in love with him, when she did find out that he was a vampire, she still loved him. Most people would have the same reaction as Piya did in the show, and not come back. And Piya's right. Since Mish has seen the soft side of Abhay, her heart will not let her be afraid of him. She doesn't need a charm like Piya does. 😆 At least, not for some vampires. If he doesn't come back, remember me with both the good times and the bad times together. The first time I read it, I missed it.Now, I see where should have known what she was going to do. And also, I should have known because this is what you said she was going to do in the precap! 😆 Good, Anushka will not hurt Abhay willingly. Yay! I got to see some AnushKabir in this part! That made my day! You have made my day twice in a row! You are an amazing person, did you know that? But, I have a question. Since Natasha said that she wanted Anushka alive, if Anushka refused to erase Abhay's memory and replace it with new ones, would Maithli still hurt her. Or was it an empty threat? What's wrong with Bella? When Edward left, she was not suicidal! She was just miserable, and then when she fond out that she could hear Edward's voice when she was in danger, she became and adrenaline junkie. Is that so bad? I like that Sam is comforting Misha. I think that they are going to learn to trust each other. Not for a while, but eventually. That was a good way to sum up Abhay and Piya's relationship. Why did you have to leave us with a cliffy???😭 But I really like how you described AbhIya. It was sweet!

I am waiting eagerly for the next part!!!

Edited by AbhiYa_luver - 14 years ago

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#962

mindblowing update..............waiting eagerly for the next part, plz update fast

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Ki fark Painda hai

@Courageous_Leo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#963

Hats off 2 u dude.......................no words 2 describe.....................no adjectives............................u r an outstanding writer................

pls ............................pls.............................pls...........................pls..................update soon..........................

its a humble request....................................................................................................................

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Kavita

@-kavita-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#964

Poci, fab update😳

Piya's love for Abhay...gosh...my POV...its insane, madness...to love someone with that intensity...scary. Agreed though that you cant understand or measure the depth of such a strong emotion as true love without having felt it yourself first. Soulmates, eternal love, true love...they are just words in your vocabulary unless you know of the feeling. Abhay will have no choice but to come back to Piya. Without Abhay, Piya can never be😳

Btw this scene reminded me of Bella throwing herself off the waterfall so that she could feel Edward's presence around her. She wasn't trying to kill herself though she would have died had Jacob not saved her.

Waiting for your next😃

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Neetz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#965

Res!😳

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Ok, Pia is going absolutely crazy! She told Misha that Abhay was a vampire like she's telling her that the Earth is round😕 And Misha, she must be thinking she's living in some twlight/VD era.

Gosh, I feel so so soo bad for Anushka! Arrggh! Natasha and Maithili😡 😡 Now I think Kabir will try to find out about Maithili and in the process, he, too, will know about this supernatural world existing😛

Ok, so I can already see Misha slowly getting over what Sam is. I think in a while, she'll also accept this world like Pia did, and yes, of course, the Sam-T equation will be a catalyst in the process😃

Wow! I have no words to describe your last scene!! It is so so so sooooo beautifully written!😍 So, Pia is not insane after all, it's just that she is not thinking sanely. We see that Pia can't imagine her life without Abhay in it even though he's forbidden!! It's making me feel worse about the memory track

I'm actually really excited about the Daksh revelation! Now that you know who I think he is, I just want to be proven right!! Ya, ya, I know, I love being right😊 😊 😊 Update soon, Poco!! PLeaseee!! I look forward to this FF more than I look forward to the show🤗

Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago

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sushmita

@tantrums..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#966

by god........ poco......... how do u think so much ???

i mean the way u describe piya's state and feelings .... it seemd as if u were writting ur own emotions....... really u shd defintely publish ur writings .... u know i hate it whn i read the last line for it means i hav got to wait for further story but u kno i realize that this period is the best....... we try to give out all the possibilities as to how the story will move ahead ...its so fun...... imaging all ....... trying to understand more of the character's emotions as ours.....

todays update was just another wow!!

misha has got so many surprises.......... it was nice to see that she didn't hate abhay after knoing his real identity .......it expresses their bond....... evn sam's understanding of abhay nd piya's love was appreciable ......... i didn't forget our anushka either.......... hell to that natasha ....... wht has she made of our anushka.............. kabir and angad both hugging her making her feel safe was cute ….. and that mathali….wanna kick her.......... now the best among best....... PIYA"S lines -If he doesn't come back, remember me with both the good times and the bad times together. m absolutly flat on this line.......i mean the way u foretold the situation was -......(m not getting any word to fill in) ......... poco u the best.... the above lines m gonna save it in my most precious diary forever......... i m grateful to u poco........

luv u

waiting for ur nxt update.......patiently !

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shyamz

@shyamz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#967

love its so pure,precious....and piyas love for abhay is deep down from the heart...its not a mere obsession of a teenage girl....her feelings are something that can redefine the word "love". loving a person who is a monster and waiting for his dead heart to beat for her and in the end when she understands the pain her love is going through worrying abt the future,she simply decides to give herself away...........selflessness bubbling in her heart,all ready to give herself,sacrifice herself for him....her abhay......

poco...........................u r the best...........ur imagination is gold......

i just loved the way u described piyas inner turmoil and her decision....i never felt tht she is taking a wrong step.....ur words really made me understand what piya is going through and while reading that part even i too had a small smile on my lips.....the sense of happiness she was having filled my heart too...i really dont know how to explain..it was just magical...and yes...your words are just magical...it has that power to make one feel the meaning it carries....hats off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!