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o my god poco!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU?? SUPERWOMAN????!!
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o my god poco!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU?? SUPERWOMAN????!!



Not yet. But i do aim to achieve that status. 😆
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Guys, i am a little busy , so am posting the update of the new precap in parts. Sorry.



Guesthouse, Marwaa

Her beautiful delicate hands were moving like magic over the saucepans and bowls. Her lovely black mane tied up in a pony tail and those doe eyes fixed on vegetables and dough that she was dealing with. And the evaporating steam of the coffee pot made her look like some fair beauty that had been conjured out of sheer magic Kabir was sitting on the parapet in his pajamas and a vest – his feet dangling and his eyes noticing all of these details about Anushka as she efficiently worked her way in the kitchen. Angad was charting out the plan that they were to follow for the next five days in Marwaa – spread education awareness amongst village women and convince them to join the school that was being set up in the village. He was busy blabbering and scribbling while Kabir nodded and his eyes drifting back to that pair of beautiful hands. Natasha , her legs up the headrest of the couch and her head settled on a cushion was busy filing her nails as she nodded in response to what Angad was saying.

Angad ( thinking )- Kabir, you are the best speaker of the lot. I suggest that you address the gathering when they all assemble in the village center at 11am today. Once the speech and questionnaire is over , we will divide the village women age wise and handle them in groups. What say?

Kabir ( getting his eyes off Anushka )- Yeah, sure. I can do that but I need to prepare a paper on that. I mean I can't just go and start chattering there , Angad, Let me see what points to put forward.

Angad ( grins at him )- Don't shirk from work, Kabir!

Kabir – Shirk from work? Hello? I am talking about the work that you are assigning to me, whacko!

Angad ( shakes his head )- Brother , you forgot the division of duties. You are supposed to make breakfast today! Anushka's only chore was to make morning tea and coffee and clean up the guesthouse.

Natasha gets up and winks at Kabir with her cat eyes.

Natasha – True! Get a little domesticated, Kabir. Don't worry about the address speech for the village belles and aunties. I am an ace at manipulation of words and I can prepare it for you. You won't be disappointed, trust me.

Angad ( concurs )- Agreed. Natasha was the best writer and speaker in school – at leas that is what her certificates and college form say. She will write it for you. And you go in the kitchen now.

Kabir looks at Angad and Natasha's cocksure and determined faces and shrugs his shoulders.

Kabir ( looking at Anushka in the kitchen )- Cool with me! Do my homework then, Natasha. While I whip up a nice continental breakfast for you guys….( stops naughtily )…errm… Angad , have you told Ruhi that you have been sniffing around Natasha's certificates lately?

Angad looks embarrassed and curses Kabir under his breath while Natasha just smirks arrogantly.

Natasha ( picking up the papers and opening her red laptop )- Not his mistake. I am brilliant and so you shall see.

Kabir ( getting a little flirty owing to his nature )- Aha, a chic chick with a brain . I like you!

Natasha ( looks at Anushka in the kitchen )- You do like a whole lot of odd stuff, Kabir.

Kabir ( puzzled )- What do you mean by that?

Natasha – Continental breakfast! I mean, I find that kinda food odd and out of taste,

Kabir ( smiles )- I didn't know that , beautiful. Okay, continental breakfast canceled madame! We will cook the food of your choice.

Natasha ( grins )- Charmer Kabir. Look, I am a total Punjabi girl , so I don't think I need to explain what you should be cooking.

Angad ( gets nightmares )- Paraanthaaz! White Butter! Buttermilk and mango pickle! Eeeeeeeekkkkkksss! All my gym will go down the drain.

Kabir ( impressed )- Wonderful! Did you ever think that hard about Bengali food considering the fact that Tracker is a Bong?

Angad ( blowing hot and cold )- Tracker is allergic to fish and she hates Bong food!

Kabir gives Natasha a hi-5 and laughing goes to the kitchen. Angad throws a pillow at Natasha and she rips it to fibers with just one sway of her copper brown painted fingernails. Angad is surprised looking at the shredded pillow.

Angad ( in disbelief )- What was that?

Natasha( going back to work on her laptop )- Martial arts.

Angad ( impressed )- Whoa! You are talented , woman!

Natasha ( her cat eyes going deep )- No, Angad, I am magical.

Angad looks swept for a few seconds and Natasha immediately breaks the eye contact – her eyes drifting to Anushka and Kabir in the kitchen.

Anushka is wiping her watering eyes as the strong onion is turning her doe eyes a reddish brown when she sees Kabir enter the kitchen. He just stands there , looking at her amused and warmly.

Anushka ( weeping and blowing her nose )- What? Do I look funny to you or have you come to lift me and carry me out of the kitchen like you did in the road last night?

Kabir is forced to smile at this innocent sulking of this unpredictable sister of Abhay. He walks towards her as she butchers the onions.

Kabir ( teasingly )- You are still stuck on my lifting you, Anushka? I thought we were sorted on that part, sweetie! Look, it's you who behaved like an utter brat in the middle of an unfriendly jungle. I did what anyone else would have done. Stop crying now.

Anushka ( wiping her tears )- I am not crying, Kabir. The onions are making me cry.

Kabir ( taking her hands off the knife and the onions )- Leave them. Your duty was just to make the morning tea and coffee in the kitchen. I am supposed to make breakfast.

Kabir takes Anushka by her hands and brings her to the sink. He opens the tap and taking her hands in his , he washes them in the cold water. Her hands fit in so perfectly in Anushka's hands that they look like a measured painting. And as Kabir's eyes keep darting back to Anushka's watering eyes and her now red nose, he can't help but admit that how much he loved the touch and feel of Anushka's skin. It was like pink fluff that you could get lost in. Anushka senses that he is looking at her and when she looks back at him, he immediately looks away. Anushka feels her cheeks flaming and pretends not to have caught Kabir staring at her. Kabir takes a towel and dabs her hands dry. And then, wetting the towel a little, he cleans out her eyes. The stinging water getting absorbed in the towel and Kabir's caring nature. This is the first time that Kabir was seeing Anushka's eyes that close – they were not that big but the sharp slant cut with that amazing colour made them enticing. Kabir just stood looking at that oval face with doe eyes and a rose bud mouth for a few seconds. And then, surprised at himself , he blew into her eyes , making Anushka step back because it made something flutter inside her. Kabir understood that he had caught himself and Anushka off guard. So, he handled the situation immediately by chuckling and tossing the towel aside.

Kabir ( I am oh-so-smart look)- See! Common sense. You were trying to clean your eyes with your onion dipped hands. I mean, trying to kill spice with spice? All's well now…) holds his two fingers up)… you can see properly , right? How many fingers are these?

Anushka laughs and punches him lightly in the chest.

Anushka ( her face shining )- Shut up, Kabir! TWO ! I can see for sure! ….what are you cooking by the way?

Kabir ( tying an apron and moving about deftly in the kitchen )- Well, I am all out to impress madam Natasha and her Punjabi blood.

Anushka ( her eyes drifting to a busy Natasha in the living hall who is busy typing )- I see. Well, let me tell you that it is really hard to impress her because Bolsh…( bites her tongue )… I mean, Punjabis are big foodies and bad food really puts them off.

Kabir ( cutting vegetable skillfully )- I am an awesome cook, madam. And the Punjoo in Natasha is going to love the breakfast I come up with. You can't help me ,so entertain me.

Anushka ( taken aback )- Entertain you? And how should I do that? By getting on the tables and dancing?

Kabir ( dreamily as he picks up the cooking oil )- In short skirts only, please!

Anushka hits him with a frying pan and they both burst out laughing. Natasha lifts her eyes and looks at their innocent banter inside the kitchen as Angad plays with a goat in the courtyard. A dark cloud passes over Natasha's smokin' hot face as she hates the sound of Anushka's laughter.

Natasha ( under her breath )- Who can look at her and tell that she is a freakin' 300-500-who-know-how-old witch who can cast the darkest spells on not only the natural but the supernatural as well ?

In the kitchen, Kabir is almost done with the cooking and the food looks good.

Anushka ( claps proudly and thumps Kabir's back )- Good job, my dear friend. You are a good cook indeed and a fit candidate to marry a non-cooking wife.

Kabir ( bows )- Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! ….And now, my dear dear friend , before this platter is presented to Natasha, you must taste it and tell me if the salt and the spices are in place?

As soon as Kabir says that and takes a morsel of the food to put in Anushka's mouth , Anushka freezes on the spot and colour drains out of her face.

Anushka ( falling back in shock and stammering )- T-Taste ? I-I …I cannot taste this food, Kabir! Put it away!

Natasha's antennas go up immediately as she senses the fear and horror in Anushka's voice. She shuts the laptop and gets up to see what is wrong.

Kabir is taken aback by Anushka's reaction and he thinks that she only fears that he has cooked the food badly. Kabir takes everything in fun spirit and takes another step towards her.

Kabir ( advancing )- Put it away? What do you mean by put it away , Anushka! You have to try this , woman! Come on. Stop being a spoil sport.

Anushka ( moving away shakily and making two jars fall in the process )- KABIR! I told you that I can't taste or eat this food!

At that moment , out of nowhere , Natasha pops up from behind and pretending to be playful , holds Anushka's arms strongly. Anushka is alarmed. Why did Natasha come here all of a sudden? Oh shit! She had sensed Anushka's terror- Natasha knows something is wrong! Anushka knows she cannot free herself from Natasha because only a Czen or a werewolf can match the physical strength of a Bolshva.

Kabir ( laughs )- I love you for this, Natasha! Anushka is being such a brat! Hold her while I put this food in her mouth!

Natasha ( meanly )- SURE!..... ( to herself )… I don't want to miss the fun of seeing a scared Anushka and WHY!

Anushka ( struggling )- Kabir ! NO!

But Kabir doesn't listen to her and puts the food in her mouth. Anushka's whole food pipe burns and in a fit of witch's fury , before she loses her strength , she radiates pain to both Kabir and Natasha, attacking their brains and giving them a jolt of severe headache.

Kabir ( holds his head )- Ahhhhh! What the!

Natasha falls on her knees with that bolt of headache and Anushka, turning on her heels runs up to the room with superhuman speed as her skin is beginning to melt at a rapid rate. She blocks out Angad so that he doesn't hear what just happened inside. She couldn't afford to let anyone see what was happening to her. Natasha , inspite of the killing headache evoked by Anushka, runs after her while Kabir writhes in pain. He is blanked out by the pain and has no sense working to think what happened to him.

Boys' Room, Guesthouse, Irugarh.

The sun rays flowed into the room like a morning kiss as they illuminated the whole room- falling kindly on Misha's face as she slept like a baby on Abhay's bed. Draped in white sheets and her alabaster skin merging in beautifully with them, it was impossible that any of the last night's ugliness had happened to her. Abhay had protected her and cleansed her out of every single physical and mental trauma that Sam had inflicted on her. But of course, Abhay couldn't have removed the scathing memories and the emotional stress that lay inside her now. Because Sam had refused to erase the horrific memories or heal the wounds unleashed.

Misha slowly opened her eyes and she felt lighter, warmer and comforted physically. As if there was an invisible healing bandage wrapped around her body. She felt so much at peace. And then, realization struck her . There were no clothes on her! She was just covered in white sheets and quilts.

Misha ( sitting up straight )- What the…..!

Suddenly, she notices that her body is flawless , healed and not a single gash on her skin anywhere – clean and smooth like a porcelain doll.

Flash : Events of last night and all the physical torture that Sambhav put her through and Abhay coming between her and Sambhav.

Realization dawns upon Misha as her hand immediately goes to her ribs. As she frantically touches her ribs, she realizes that the rib she had felt break and hang in her stomach is back in place – as if nothing ever happened!

Misha ( shocked )- I am fine? Bloody hell! I AM FINE! BUT HOW!....Sam ripped me apart last night! And why am I without clothes?,…

Misha looks at the bathroom in front of her and looking around to make sure that nobody is around , she wraps a sheet around herself and runs into the bathroom.

Latching the bathroom, Misha looks at herself in the mirror and her disbelief only gets worse as she looks at her flawless pristine body. It was perfect indeed. No gash. No bruise. Not a single drop of blood. Just then, Misha looks at the reflection of Abhay's bathrobe hanging behind the door. Her eyes go wide in shock.

Misha ( shocked at this brainwave herself )- Abhay…..Did he?....( frustrated )… what the hell is happening around me! I have got to talk to these morons.

She wears Abhay's bathrobe and tying it around her slender waist , she steps out. As soon as she lifts her hand to open the room's door and go out , something stops her and she shudders on the very thought of fear showing it's ugly head in her brain.

Flash : Sambhav turning into a wolf and unleashing tyranny on her.

Misha stops in her tracks and fear rises in her eyes as she clenches and unclenches her fists. Her breathing also goes numb at the realization that Sambhav could be outside.

Misha ( in a whimper )- S-Sam…what if… what if he is.. I mean 'it' is outside? H-He will… ( recalls Abhay's lecture to him )….No, he won't. He listens to Abhay.. or does he? …( collects herself )… okay, Misha. Get a hold on yourself. You….you have seen a werewolf! If you can survive him once… ( gulps unsurely )….y-you can survive him ….again…. Just WALK OUT!

With one strong indrawn breath, Misha opens the door and goes into the hall.

Hall, Guesthouse, Irugarh

Misha comes into the hall but it is pin drop silent. She cannot see anyone around,.

Misha ( looking around )- It is 7.30 and I thought everyone would be up and about and…..

Suddenly, realization strikes her and she looks back at the room that she had been sleeping and has just come out of in shock.

Misha ( slapping her forehead )- SHIT! I was sleeping in the boys' room! I should have known. The bathroom – Abhay's bathrobe. That means Abhay and… and…S-Sambhav were not in their own room last night? Ughs! I feel like such a clueless blonde right now! WHAT. IS. HAPPENING!

Misha goes ahead to run upstairs to the girls' room when she notices Piya sitting on the floor and her head down on a table. Misha goes closer and sees that Piya has fallen asleep . Her face looks very pained and strained even in her sleep – and there is a tear at the corner of her eye. Misha is alarmed. What happened here! Why is Piya sleeping like this? And has she been crying? Just look at her face!

Misha ( worried but waking up Piya gently )- Piya…. Piya? Get up?.... ( Piya slowly opens her eyes )…What's wrong? Why are you sleeping here?

Piya opens her eyes and her body tenses up again and her eyes regain their panicking hysteric colour which alarms Misha to no end.

Misha ( horrified )- Piya?

Piya gets up and looks around hysterically and desperately like a caged lion who doesn't know how to get out.

Piya ( timidly and anxiously )- Abhay? ….( calls out with a breaking voice )…. ABHAY!

An alarmed Misha catches hold of a subtly insane and anxious Piya and spins her around to face her.

Misha ( anxiously )- Piya! What is wrong with you? Why are you searching for Abhay like this? What happened ? Where is he?

Piya ( breaking into tears and her eyes still looking for Abhay )- I – I don't know, Misha. He was ….( feels her whole body shaking )….he was upset about something , Misha…and he just left! I thought he'd come back but… but he didn't . I have tried his number , I have looked for him everywhere….( losing grip over her voice )….but…. I … ( helplessly )…..i can't find him. He is angry with me , isn't he? ….( paces around rubbing her forehead anxiously )… I shouldn't have pushed him! How do I bring him back now…. What do I do, Misha… wha….

Misha is alarmed at the body language and the mental state of Piya which is actually a simmering volcano right now. She needs to be comforted and pacified right now or else she might just come down with a nervous breakdown. No, Misha. This is not a time to ask any questions to Piya about Abhay's identity or how you healed overnight. You must bring her back to her normal state first!

Misha, with a determined look on her face , takes a deep breath and goes to Piya.

Misha ( holding Piya by her arms and trying to calm her )- Piya, Piya, Piya… ( pats her hair )…. Relax….( holds her face )… look at me. Trust me. Abhay will come back , okay? You know how he is, Piya. And ..( thinking fast )…. And you know that he can't stay away from you for long , hmmm? He will come back to you – infact , he maybe on his way. He may come in anytime now, Piya.

Piya ( shaking her head in Misha's hands )- He is not coming, Misha! I cannot feel him anywhere around me! He left me! HE LEFT ME!

And as a stunned Misha watches , Piya throws things around and reacts rather violently , making it hard for Misha to control her.

Piya ( howls )- Bring him back to me!

Hearing all the chaos, a sleepy Tracker comes and stands at the top of the staircase, rubbing her eyes.

Tracker ( sleepily )- Piya? Why are you screaming, baby? Something happened?

Misha takes Piya in her arms and restricting her movement and looks up at Tracker.

Misha ( immediately )- Tracker , get ready, sweetie. We have to go to the village in 2 hours and you know how long you take to get dressed , hmmm? Go, go and don't come down until you are looking your best.

Tracker nods and confused at the situation , goes back inside. Misha is at her wits' end , not knowing how to handle Piya who seems to be behaving as though she has lost her marbles.

Piya ( her face blotched red and eyes swollen )- Misha , I pushed him away! I DID! Now, I don't know how to get him back!... ( falls on her knees and it is an unbearable sight to even look at her )….i am sorry! I am so sorry, Abhay. I will never ask you anything again! I PROMISE! ….( cries)… please… please come back to me!

Misha is about to bend and pull Piya up when the front door is swung open and Sambhav walks in with T. They all stop in their tracks in shock. Misha because the very sight of Sam makes her withdraw her feet in horror and makes her heart jump out of her mouth . Sambhav because as if the sight of Misha after last night's rollercoaster ride was not enough , she is coolly moving around the house in a bathrobe and on top of that , Piya is in this terrible shape. T also looks surprised by the scene – okay, now why is Piya sobbing as though I really snatched away her precious Abhay from her?

Sambhav ( not looking at Misha as he walks in )- What happened here? ….Piya?

Sambhav sees that Misha has drawn back her feet and is clutching the edges of a table to hide her fear upon seeing him. But he keeps his attention on Piya,

Piya looks up at Sambhav and seeing him, she gets up and runs into his arms. Sambhav is momentarily shaken by Piya's state. Oh Lord! What happened to this kid?

Piya ( sobbing )- Sam! Abhay!...( shaking him by his shoulders )…. I can't find Abhay anywhere….( crying )… he just .. just got up and left me. He.. he is unreachable on phone …he …he has not come back… I can't find him anywhere …. And I know he is angry with me..( Sam can feel that her body is burning hot with fever now because of his increased sensitivity to body temperatures of mammals )….he's blocked the connection! He doesn't want me to find him! …Do something, Sam! PLEASE! Find him! Find him for me , please!

Sambhav looks at Piya and he finds it an unbelievable sight. Can someone actually love somebody to that madness? Those limits? Rather across those limits? What is this child crying for? A vampire's love? The very thought that he has left her has driven her mad. She is going to kill herself at this rate. Damn! What all crap happened in my absence? Abhay just got up and left? Shucks! I have to find him. Abhay has to stay at the center of Piya and Maithli. But Sam knew somewhere inside that this time , he wanted to do it for Piya. No matter how devious his plans were for Abhay in the long run – right now, he just wanted to stop Piya's crying and her agony. She was a horrible sight to look at. And the hiding man behind the wolf cringed at the sound of her cries.

Sambhav ( holding Piya's face )- Listen to me! …( drawing her attention to his eyes)….I promise you that I will bring Abhay back. Find him from anywhere and bring him back here to you…. ( reading her eyes)…I am not a mind reader , really but I think I know what happened between the two of you….( wipes her tears )… he has not left you, he has not deserted you, okay? I WILL FIND HIM, PIYA. TRUST ME.

Piya ( like a child )- Promise?

Sambhav ( rubbing her cheek with his thumb )- A wolf''s promise…..

With this Sambhav gives Piya a reassuring hug and she cries into his shoulder as T is shocked at the strength of Piya's emotion for Abhay. Misha is looking at Sambhav suspiciously and unconvinced. Sambhav and her eyes meet and for a few fleeting seconds, he reads distrust and disgust in her eyes for him. When fear settles , often disgust and hatred rise in you for your tormentor. Sambhav reads the same in Misha's eyes.

Piya ( broken )- Bring him back to me. Wherever he is. Just bring him back to me.

Sambhav ( comforting Piya and sending a message across to Misha who believes otherwise )- I WILL.

TO BE CONTINUED………………….

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😊Res!😃

Aww!! The Kabir-Anushka part was so cute!😍 It was so worth the wait!! This Natasha should be killed! What's her problem😡 But wait a sec, I didn't understand her problem with Punjabi food. What exactly happened? Did it drain out all her powers or what? Or was it like a transformation like vampires have at the sight of blood?? Btw, what do witches eat, exactly?😛
Poor Mish is still confused, trying to figure out what's going on around her. It's worse if you know only half the truth. Either the full thing or ignorance is bliss, well, at least it is for everyone other than the PKYEK girls😛
And goodness gracious me! Pia is madder than I thought! I feel so bad for her! Her condition is horrible😭 😭 😭 She's literally begging every single person to bring Abhay back to her, aww!! I'm glad Misha knows when to ask questions and when not to ask questions. Pia's craving for Abhay is seriously crossing all limits. I don't blame Sam for being totally shocked. And aww! For this once, he won't bring Abhay back for his selfish reasons but for someone else, for Pia!! He's so sweet, Poco!!😳 😳
But Misha doesn't believe him, does she? I hope she realises that beneath all that wolfiness of his, Sam is still human😊

Awesome update, Poco! I loved it!! Please continue whenever you can. I want Abhay back!😭
Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago
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I loved Pia's desperation....and want to know more on Sam and T...please dont make them a couple Pocho.... :( anyways, waiting eagerly for the next part..
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Aww, I so love your portrayal of Sam and Piya's relationship...😳
Wondering how will Sam start talking to Mish,or vice versa 🤔



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Res! :)

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Aww, that Kabir-Anu part was adorable. 😳 I could actually imagine Anu .. I so want a girl like that opposite him in the actual show. 😳 If only they would stop giving all their screenspace to AbhIya && manage space like you do. Anyway, I loved their part! And even I'm confused, does Punjabi food put Anu off? Or what is it something in the food? Aha, btw, I was grinning when I read that .. coz I am punjabi! :P

Aww, poor Mish. She's all shaken up, terrified & disgusted. I so want her to see the 'human' beneath the wolf in Sam, again. If only he stops physically hurting her .... I bet something drastic's gonna happen, maybe it's to do with T's emotional compelling Sam .. but I bet it would be something like that that will make Misha go to Sam & talk to him. Something will happen! 😳

Damn, I feel worse for Pia right now. Her love actually seems like 'love' in this FF .. Show mein toh, who knows? I stopped watching it. Anyway, I adored her broken state! And I completely totally absolutely adored Sam in this one! 😳 If only Misha starts seeing the 'human' side in Sam too .. though, only rarely, but still. 😊

Continue soon! You know you have me addicted! ;D
Edited by _Akanksha_ - 14 years ago
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LOVE U POCOOO!! But man seriously!! every time abhay cant face a situation he runs away, here as well as in pkyek...
but i have to say poco...im loving ur fanfic nowadays....i almost feel guilty for saying this, but when i was watching pkyek just a few mins ago....which was obviously supposed to be one hell of an excitement...i kept fast forwarding every time there was no dialogue happening just so i could finish watching and get on to read what happened to abhay, piya, sam and misha in ur fanfic!! i gotta say i was extremely disapointed with todays show though...please noone bash this and think about what im saying logically and respect my views....as i was saying i was extremely disappointed today...did nobody else feel that vivian's acting was really weak today?...i mean i agree he was improving...but obviously not enough to carry off such an emotion-ridden scene ...his portrayal of abhay was pretty childish i gotta say....im really sorry but i have to say this ...my pov ...others may not agree.....and i was so confused!! i mean whats with him showing his vampire- self to piya just to get her out of a fire??!!! it doesnt make sense!! he has shown his supernatural abilities and saved her millions of times before this without having to show his vampire form...so y now? it just didnt seem well thought out....its jot even like he was saving her from a predato that he had to become a predator himself in retaliation...all he needed was his superhuman strength and speed that he anyway has without his vampire form too...so why turn into a vampire just to protect someone from a fire??!! ...no explanation makes sense unless his vampire form makes him AND PIYA invincible to fire!! which seems illogical somehow!! i really wish they had though it through properly before writing this scene!!....and i gotta say Piyas mind is in overdrive!! she now seems to be showing suicidal tendencies for her curiosity!! its quite disturbing....
but enough about that...coming bac to this fanfic....i repeat....u r AWESOME!! keep up the good work!!
and update soon or i might die in expectation!!
xoxo
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chill_Out

😊Res!😃


Aww!! The Kabir-Anushka part was so cute!😍 It was so worth the wait!! This Natasha should be killed! What's her problem😡 But wait a sec, I didn't understand her problem with Punjabi food. What exactly happened? Did it drain out all her powers or what? Or was it like a transformation like vampires have at the sight of blood?? Btw, what do witches eat, exactly?😛
Poor Mish is still confused, trying to figure out what's going on around her. It's worse if you know only half the truth. Either the full thing or ignorance is bliss, well, at least it is for everyone other than the PKYEK girls😛
And goodness gracious me! Pia is madder than I thought! I feel so bad for her! Her condition is horrible😭 😭 😭 She's literally begging every single person to bring Abhay back to her, aww!! I'm glad Misha knows when to ask questions and when not to ask questions. Pia's craving for Abhay is seriously crossing all limits. I don't blame Sam for being totally shocked. And aww! For this once, he won't bring Abhay back for his selfish reasons but for someone else, for Pia!! He's so sweet, Poco!!😳 😳
But Misha doesn't believe him, does she? I hope she realises that beneath all that wolfiness of his, Sam is still human😊

Awesome update, Poco! I loved it!! Please continue whenever you can. I want Abhay back!😭



You guys respond to all my updates and i feel guilty about not answering.😆....Thank you so very much for liking the update.

Oye, Anushka is not affected by Punjabi or any food. It is something in the food that is linked to a curse on her which Natasha will force out from her and use it against her by spilling the beans to Maithli.

Sambhav is NOT sweet at all. He is grey and he will always be grey. If at all he has any affection for Abhay and Piya, it will be run over by his duty. Misha is Sambhav's soulmate and they will always be together but NOT with each-other.

Piya is only going to get worse because Abhay will refuse to return with Sam.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Prateeksh

I loved Pia's desperation....and want to know more on Sam and T...please dont make them a couple Pocho.... :( anyways, waiting eagerly for the next part..



Sam and T? Well, let's say that even when Sam finds out about T's use of EE on him , he will see his own reflection on her. Forced evil. Rejected and hated by Misha, Sam will bend towards T because she will never turn around and call him a monster.

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