Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended. - Page 6

Originally posted by: jenny1000

AMAZINGGGG!! Nitiz, contact Ekta mai right now.. and tell her thta you will write for her show.

it was too good. please continue.

Originally posted by: NIDIZ

Poor Piya..
Abhay n Piya can't even stand each other fragrance..
I'm happy atleast somewhere Abhay shouts @his parents.. Oowowo..the last part was mysterious..can't wait to find out.. why wuld Haseena give her Maithili's dress..
Lovely updates......can't wait do update soon..

@Jen- I agree with u..Ekta u have u're writer in here..grab her..

Loved it !! Abhay cannot stand his parents 😆. Update sooooon 😃😛.

Next day , Kabir , Pancchi , Tracker and Misha were sitting the college cafeteria. Pancchi looked a little worried while Kabir , Misha and Tracker joked around.

Misha ( laughing )- Kabir , I still can't believe that you told T that you'd marry her only if you were reborn a rat'..poor blunderista! She never gets her fashion right and when she found the right guy , the right guy doesn't think he is right for her' that is so freakin ouch!

Kabir throws back his head and laughs and puts his arm around Misha's neck .

Kabir ( dramatically )- No no no! There is just one right girl for me'that's you!

Tracker ( fluttering her eyelashes )- Why? What is wrong with me/

Kabir ' Nothing! You resemble T! That is the only problem and' ( notices Pancchi's lost look)' Pancchi? What's wrong?

Misha ( shaking up her sister )- Meena Kumari Remixed! Don't tell me you are missing Danish. The guy's gotta work or else Mom-Dad will get you married to some walkie talkie credit card!

Everybody laughs but Panchhi looks as sullen.

Pancchi ( irritated )- Shut up guys! You are not getting it. 'I am not missing Danish. I am worried about him.

Kabir ' Worried ? Why should you be ? He is on a dream job , has a salary and perks to die for and your parents are loving him.

Pancchi ( shakes her head)- I cannot pinpoint what Kabir'but Danish is changing. Something in the air around him is not right and I '. I can sense something is wrong. It is almost as if he is hiding something from me'.

The group looks both puzzled and worried.

Misha ' Have you tried talking to the cockroach?

Pancchi ' I don't know how to approach him in that regard and'..

Just then, they all see Piya approaching them and Kabir looks at her stunned. She is wearing the same green dress that Haseena Raichand had gifted her.

Kabir ( with an indrawn breath)- Beautiful'.

Misha ' Wow! Our very own desi jungle queen!.... lovely!

Piya comes to them.

Tracker ( pouncing on her )- I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE this dress! Gucci? Valentino? Yves Laurent?

Piya ( laughs )- No! I can't even afford to take those names'. ( feels the fabric)' this is' just a gift from' from my benefactor' anyway, what are we doing here? Aren't we supposed to be at rehearsals?

Kabir ( rolls his eyes)- Rehearsals? Ya, sure. If His Highness Mr.Abhay Raichand shows up , why not?.... C'mon yaar. Without Romeo, we can't send Juliet alone on stage to play Lady Ga Ga'.

Piya becomes conscious as she hears Abhay's name and the events of last night flash across her mind and her hand goes up to her cheek instinctively.

Kabir ( putting a hand on her shoulder )- Piya? What happened?

Piya shakes her head and turns on her heels and there she sees Abhay walking in ' towards them. Tall. Dark. Towering. Rude Beauty. He looks at Piya and stops in his tracks as though rendered lifeless by her appearance. His frigid face melts and a surge of emotion springs in his eyes and the space changes for Abhay'..

Abhay finds himself standing in front of a sobbing Maithli who is holding his face and crying. Abhay looks very emotional as he tries to hold on to Maithli.

Maithli ( pleading)- Don't let them do that to me, Abhay!....You must save me' get me out of here! You promised that you will love me till the end of time. Keep the promise, Abhay! I am waiting'..Abhay?

Abhay ( his tears not stopping)- I will get you out of there! I promise!...

Abhay jolts out of that pensive moment and he finds his vision fogged by tears as Piya appears a ghost in the misty vision. Abhay's jaw tightens and he clenches his fists. Piya is looking at him and not even budging from the spot. Abhay is about to take a step towards her and make mincemeat out of her when he hears familiar voice behind him. Calling out to him.

Voice ' Abhay?

Abhay is struck by the voice and he slowly turns around as Piya and the gang watches curiously. And we see a beautiful tall woman come running towards Abhay and throw her arms around him. She is happy and to everyone's shock Abhay hugs her back. Infact , they all notice a pleasantly surprised smile on his face.

Piya finds herself clenching her fists and digging her own fingernails into her skin. Who is that girl?

TO BE CONTINUED'''..

Originally posted by: ssdtvgojan

Poco,

Amazing👏.................Loving it.

Abhay is a not a mama's boy..............also he can't stand Piya Fragrance😲😉....................Loving it.😃

@Jenny: Agree with u, Ekta is missing a Excellent Writer

Its Ekta's Loss.

Poco, As B4, loving yr work, U r Stupendofantabulous👏👏👏

Edit: Nice Update, I was reading the prev update, and double bonanza, loved today's update toooooooooo😊Even I am eager to know Who is that girl😲😆😆

Keep Going

Originally posted by: Chill_Out

Oh God! Oh God!! Oh GOOOOODDD!! Poco, you're going to kill me someday!!!! Who is that girl??!?! And what's Maithili's secret???(more enthusiastic for this one than the one in the show!) And if all this wasn't enough, now Danish too!!

And I must say, the characters in your story are so witty!!

Without Romeo, we can't send Juliet alone on stage to play Lady Ga Ga'.🤣

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

Nahiin , nahiin main tumhe nahiin marne dungi. 🤣.....Thank you so much for the appreciation. 🤗...who do you think the girl is? 😉