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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sayu14

I guessed dat guy is Shanky........nic part......dat saari arguments r good...... PraSha arguing with each other.......i liked it.....😊😊
still confused😕 about dat day due to which raunak n Pratiksha r behaving like this with each other........eager to know dat secret......😊

thanks sayu14 i luved writing😳 the PraSha scene, n who knows may ur guess is right, PraNak, um well u know every shaadi has its ups n downs .... whats ur name?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aweeesomee update waiting 4 the next...part

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Irika95

aweeesomee update waiting 4 the next...part

thanks glad u liked it😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Heya Di!
Lovely part, liking it. I like te sari choices of Shankys, very good! And Ronak checking Araina out... Good. So Praz is just for Shanky!
Lol.
Continue soon di. I'm really liking it.
Chat soon di.
Choti
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Hey lalmirch!!!! srry i'm late in commenting.... net probs you know 🤢.
Anywayzzzz, luvd the latest chappie 👍🏼! Can't wait to see how you unfold the story and unite the couples!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bcoz srsly, I hv no idea how you're gonna do it!
Keep up the awesome work!!! Luv ya!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dear Fizu
Im so sorry abt being late to comment ..I have exam in 2 days lol Getting on my nerves.
What can I say yaara, awasome part once again. I like the way story is heading. Your are doing a awasome job my friend.
Im really looking forward to prasha scenes.
Edited by skoler123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys sorry 4 late update but i am really bust and will be till i think the end of june so i might not be able to update soon so yeah any way um dont forget to comment and press the like button
Ch8

Shashank walks up to Preteeksha he sees her scared and the goons behind her:Preeti tum yahaan?itne raat ko? (hugs her! Whispers n her ear just go along with me)kaise ho? Aur sunao ' how are mama and papa I mean aunty and commissioner uncle doing?

Preteeksha: they are fine

Shashank: good but yaar mein tho I'm so scared of your dad commissioner uncle after how he beat up that guy who just smiled at u

Preteeksha: yeah that's what happens when you mess with the commissioners daughter

Goons: commissioners daughter! They start running a way

Shashank: walks up to Preteeksha and puts his jacket on her(opens the door of the car):sit I will drop you home

Preteeksha: thanks for what u did but I will go myself

Shashank: tum pagal ho it's not safe I will not allow u to go ,I know ki abhi ur upset at me but plz let me drop u na, aur haan I know ki tumhare pati left midway on the road but I can't do that.

Preteeksha: dehko tum'tum ko kaise aur haan that's y I told him I can manage and come by myself it will take me at least 45 min to walk home and if I go with u he will know I got a ride

Shashank: I saw u both fight at the party and my car was in back of yours so I saw everything, fine then for 45 min we will go and drink coffee then I will drop you home so he will think you came by yourself ok

Preteeksha: theek hai laken tum ziddi haan(smiles*)

Shashank: I know I can be at times

At the coffee shop

Shashank brings two cups of coffee gives one to prats hers has a smiley face in it

Prateeksha smiles when seeing it : thanks

Shashank: if you want you can talk your heart out if you don't mind tum apne pati ko ..i mean teach a lesson that he cant treat you like trash, tum bole ki he said ki your nothing with out him etc' why don't u prove to him you can

Preteeksha sipping her coffee: haan laken kaise

Shashank: um why don't you get a job tum kya study kare I mean what was your major ?

Preteeksha: Fashion mera ek sapna tha ki mein india ki # 1 designer banu but meri shaadi hogai in fact I design my own sari n clothes

Shashank thrilled (funny surprised expression): Fashion? Um tum kal 8:30 a.m S. M Fashion house ajao I know some people you can a get a job as a assistant designer or even designer aur haan blue tum pe bohat acha lagta hai smiling* um I mean "wear blue it suites u and I t will look professional

Preteeksha exicted :S.M fashion house you know Suhbas Manhotra wow what dream come true but 8:30 is when raunak gets up to go to work, I have to make breakfast and pack raunaks tiffin for work

Shashank:dehko if u want to teach ur pati a lesson do as I say kal u will get up before he does get ready a be out of the house so when he wakes up he wont have a chance to say sorry if he is wanting to,2nd don't talk to him till u get the job then go and give him the appointment letter and say ki dehka mein karsakthi hoon. He wont be expecting that and last don't even look at him when you get home.

Preteeksha:laken mein yeh

Shashank: u have to trust me lets go it's been a 40min let me drop u home

Preteeksha:thanks but drop me a little far away so he wont see me threw the window

(she is dancing in the rain and getting so wet)

Shashank: you will get sick get in

Preteeksha: no I have to look like I was walking in the rain

Shashank watching her dancing in the rain thinking to himself: may she always be smiling like this God give a her, her share of happiness

Preteeksha gets home all wet

Shanti raju giving a towel and hot milk and her night gown :didi tum theek ho we were so worried(raunak seeing this from up)

Preteeksha: haan drying her self drinking the milk :I'm very tired walking upstairs passing raunak she goes into the guest room raunak is coming behide her She shuts the door on his face and locks it.

Raunak ,Shanti ,Raju are shocked :didi has never acted like that with bhaiya

Raju:but it's about time

In side the room Preteeksha is so happy thinking to herself: muhje yakeen nahin hai ki mein ne Raunak ko asise treat kari aur kal I have a job interview with S.M Fashion House! I cant sleep lots of things to do I have to put a portfolio together of my designs ( she is up the whole night working away(4:35a.m): finally finshed I have to keep my degrees and my certificates aur what should I wear ,have to wear something that shows I am a desighner? Just she then she remembers what shanks says *Flashback blue tum pe bohat acha lagta hai smiling* (she opens the cupboard and takes out a blue and white sari with roses holding the sari looking in the mirror )

Perfect!

6 A.M

Preteeksha is up wearing a t-shirt and trackpants

She picks up her iPod and leaves the house

She is listening to her iPod and jogging

She trips on a rock Shashank he catches her eyelocking session!, just then Song playing in her ipod

Shukran Allah Wallah Alham Dulillah
Shukran Allah Wallah Alham Dulillah

{Shukran Allah Wallah Alham Dulillah
Shukran Allah Wallah Alham Dulillah}


Nazron Se Nazrein Mili To
Jannat Si Mehki Fizayein
Lab Ne Jo Lab Chu Liya To
Aasmaan Se Barshi Duyaien

Aise Apni Mohabbat
Aise Rooh-e-ibaadat
Hum Pe Meherbaan Do Jahan

Shukran Allah Wallah Alham Dulillah
Shukran Allah Wallah Alham Dulillah

(she suddenly yanks the ear phones off feeling akward because of the song )

Shashank suddenly see's she is lost in him just to be naughty he winks at her

Prateeksha get back to reality :Um hi thanks again

Shashank: please don't say thanks after all yeh tho ek adaat hogya hai ( laughing cutely ) tum ko koi problem hai aur mein tume help karta hoon

Preteeksha: annoyed dehko I'm getting late I need go home and shower and get ready for the interview thanks again runs back home.

Yeh tayloo ram ko bhi very unpredictable hai I too cant wait for the interview

S.M Fashion House

Preteeksha gets there at 8:15 a.m

Receptionist asks her for her portfolio she hands it to her

Receptionist: please take seat boss will call you in shortly

In the Cabin

Receptionist: sir Mrs. Rai's portfolio and details (he is seating so the chair is to back towards the door so no one can see him) haan keep it on the desk and leave

Looking at her portfolio and details picking up the phone: Ria please send in Mrs. Rai

Preteeksha goes into the cabin:hello sir

Boss: have a seat (still not seeing her) haan I looked at your portfolio and details you are very talented, how would you like to start from today aur haan your first contract is 1 core

Preteeksha: kya thank you some much sir

Boss: aur u get your very own cabin paid vactions office perks the whole deal but this is a contract to contracted deal meaning 6 months if I feel you are good enough I will make you full time designer here is your first check half the amount 50 lacks turning around

Preteeksha: is shocked tum!

Boss:Haan mein S.M

Preteeksha: yeh tho suhbas Manhotra ka office hai na phir tum

Boss: suhbas Manhotra is my dad he and my mom retired and are in London now so I Shashank Manhotra handle the business ,(looking at preteeksha from head to toe) aur haan like I said before blue tum pe bohat acha lagta hai smiling* by the way nice sari

Preteeksha shocked

That's it for now hope u guys liked it don't forget to comment n press the like button

Precape ch9 preteeksha reaction n and raunak reachion more PraSha and Arnak scenes

Edited by lalmirch28 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Nice part Fiza, please update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
Hey hey hey!!! 🤗
Loved the chappie yaar 😃! Nice to see PraSha getting closer to each other 😳😉, And the scenes were great too. I also loved the part where prats bangs the door a\on raunak's face 😈.
Looking forward to the next one...............⭐️

😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lily96

Hey hey hey!!! 🤗
Loved the chappie yaar 😃! Nice to see PraSha getting closer to each other 😳😉, And the scenes were great too. I also loved the part where prats bangs the door a\on raunak's face 😈.
Looking forward to the next one...............⭐️

😉

hey lily😉
thanks alot yaar luv ur sweet comments Embarrassed
i too luved writting the part when she shuts the door on raunaks face😆 he deserves it 😡 dont worry their will be more PraSha scenes and they will get closer n closer Preteeksha ko farak par hai! even though she wont accept the fact 😆

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