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Posted: 6 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Blakey

awesome

they finally decided to act on their feelings and
give their relationship a second change the kids will be
so happy especial payal
hope their relationship will work out this time as they are now matured
and know wat they want


The relationship must work out. As you say they have matured. They must just be wise enough not to let any third party create misunderstandings.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: asmani

I came to the forum dont know after how long!
But as soon as i came, i fell into honey trap i mean the parent trap 😉 😆
Read all the chapter and addicted to it 😃
I will come back to read the rest of the chapter for sure
😛


For the story i am so happy with the last part for AarYa
And for Arpita i wish that the pandit should have said that the marriage could cause danger to Yash's life then Gayatri must have disagreed with this marriage.
😆

But anyway i wud leave that to you to do something with Arpita

Excellent work 👏

Ps my like button is not working 🥱

Welcome back Asmani.

I love the what you said about the "honey trap" Very clever😆

Sorry I didn't even thing about the danger part - I am not familiar with how these things work 😳 I'm just trying my best with what I've seen on the serials. 😛

This story is also not that dramatic. It's pretty easy going. There won't be too much drama ahead either, but I hope it is worth bringing you back here.😃


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Posted: 6 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

While reading this story I always remember this movie "Fools Rush In where they meet and get married and then things starts getting out of control as they start discovering each other's real nature. The girl becomes pregnant and they decide to divorce but then they realize their mistakes and apologize and reconcile.

But here the situation was different. Yash and Aarti, both were very young when they met. What they thought was love was physical attraction. Once reality struck things started going downhill.

They got married because Aarti had become pregnant. Before they knew it, they were parents of twins. When were not mature enough to take care of one kid, they had to look after two. Aarti got busy looking after the twins while he got busy indulging in Extra Marital Affairs. This relationship was bound to fail and it did.

After Sixteen years, now they both are mature enough to see and understand things differently. Now they know the real nature of each other. They both know that they are good parents to their children and that is what it more important to them then anything else as their lives revolve around their kids.

And what mature kids they have got. 👏

They themselves were immature at that age but their kids are not. They are the perfect Cupid to bring their parents together. The attraction between Yash and Aarti is growing which didn't go unnoticed by both girls and they take advantage of this situation to bring them together and they succeeded. Bravo kids 👏

The only obstacles are Arpita and Gayatri. I don't know what Yash told Arpita white breaking the news to her that he wants to give second chance to his relationship with Aarti, I just hope that Arpita doesn't cause any trouble.

I don't blame her though as she has invested so much in her relationship with Yash. It wasn't a platonic relationship and now he won't marry her. She is bound to get heartbroken.

Let's see what you will show us on Arpita's reactions and actions.


Bee, I am sorry for the late reply but I sure did missed reading your stories. So welcome back my friend 🤗



I LOVE FOOLS RUSH IN.!!!!

It's one of my all tim favourite chick flicks. I must admit I did not even see any resemblance to the movie but your comment makes me want to watch it again😆

No apologies for the late reply. I haven;t even replied on yours. I need to read them from scratch as I can't remember the stories. That is why I am working on my old stories and rather this new one because I can't remember what i wanted to show. But I will finish them come what may.

Yes, they were way to young to be married with 2 children. It was a recipe for disaster from the get go. But the children were their happiness. No matter the mistakes they made as people and as husband and wife, as parents they were very good and raised happy and well adjusted children.

The feelings were there, it just needed a gentle nudge from the girls.

Yes, he was committed to Arpita but at least he is honest with her. it would be a mistake to marry someone just because you are feel guilty and especially when you are in love with someone else.

Anyway Arpita is not that innocent. I will reveal in the next chapter which I think will be the last.

Thanks for the comments Nix Stix, even though you are so busy at the moment. 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#54
Awesome update B ⭐️
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: B-onesie

I LOVE FOOLS RUSH IN.!!!!

It's one of my all tim favourite chick flicks. I must admit I did not even see any resemblance to the movie but your comment makes me want to watch it again 😆

No apologies for the late reply. I haven;t even replied on yours. I need to read them from scratch as I can't remember the stories. That is why I am working on my old stories and rather this new one because I can't remember what i wanted to show. But I will finish them come what may.

Yes, they were way to young to be married with 2 children. It was a recipe for disaster from the get go. But the children were their happiness. No matter the mistakes they made as people and as husband and wife, as parents they were very good and raised happy and well adjusted children.

The feelings were there, it just needed a gentle nudge from the girls.

Yes, he was committed to Arpita but at least he is honest with her. it would be a mistake to marry someone just because you are feel guilty and especially when you are in love with someone else.

Anyway Arpita is not that innocent. I will reveal in the next chapter which I think will be the last.

Thanks for the comments Nix Stix, even though you are so busy at the moment. 🤗




What a coincidence, we talked about this movie and it came on T.V tonight 😳, but it was in some other language so I didn't watch it
Even I like that movie and somehow your TPT reminded me of how they ended up arguing about every single thing.
I'm sure Yash and Aarti too must've gone through the same in this story as they were actually very young and immature.

Yes Yash was at least honest with Arpita but she had so many expectations from this relationship so I'm sure she must've been hurt. But knowing you I know that you won't turn her into a full vamp.
But I'll ragery wait for the next chapter to see what you are trying to say when you say that Arpita is not that innocent.

Bee, I read Asmani's comment and what she said about the Pundit. Actually in Hindu religion we match Horoscopes to see if the both and girl are compatible or not. So what Asmani was saying that if the Pundit tells Gayatri that in Arpita's horoscope it's written that her husband won't survive after marriage then Gayatri definitely won't let this marriage happen 😆

And do not worry about reading my stories. I know you are busy and are struggling to work on your own stories. I'd rather you concentrate on your stories so that I'll get the chance to read them 😳






Edited by lovely_nikki - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#56
My goodness! Seems I blinked and missed this! Didn't know you posted! 😲
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

My goodness! Seems I blinked and missed this! Didn't know you posted! 😲

jip, that I did. I just don't send pm's anymore
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie

jip, that I did. I just don't send pm's anymore

it seems you did blink an eye Tessie-poo but since you here you can catch up and believe me it is a treat and we have been treated like royalty and we just can't get enough so we keep coming back for more, you know this is the place we come when we need some peace from the world and we always find it here, be it in new stories or old ones.
We are thankful.

Coming back to the storie Bee how about an update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: zuby87

it seems you did blink an eye Tessie-poo but since you here you can catch up and believe me it is a treat and we have been treated like royalty and we just can't get enough so we keep coming back for more, you know this is the place we come when we need some peace from the world and we always find it here, be it in new stories or old ones.

We are thankful.

Coming back to the storie Bee how about an update soon

Hi Zuby Duby 😃. Glad you're loving the royalty treatment and bringing activity by reading the story. Don't mean to boast bit I did read this story last year already! 😉 mind you she frustrated me by not completing it so I am absolutely eager to see its progression
Edited by Tessaloni - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#60
early morning treat for me! I sooo loved reading this, so much so that I am absolutely giddy right now!

They loved each other, that much was very clear. Sadly their passions let them to consequences very adult in nature that they weren't ready for. And it led them to part ways: Aarti was very right in distancing herself from him because he clearly needed to mature. And he continued that lifestyle of sleeping around because he wanted to forget her, she remained celibate because deep down she knew he was the only one she wanted in that way. It took meeting again to wake them up to their feelings that never went away because of course it was true love. But having gone through separation, and also not wanting to destabilize their kids security, they had to really asses their feelings. I am a little disappointed that London did not have any passionate moments, but then I realized it was because it would have been too much of a reflection on their past, and it would have made her the other woman. So I love that when they are back together, she is his one and only for all time.

Now I am thrilled for the explosions that are bound to follow. Especially Gayatri. She is sure to have a fit, but of course their brood will be the happiest. But they do deserve to finally have a complete home.


Loved, loved, loved it Honey-Bee ❤️

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