CCC: 18 Aug 2017 - Page 6

Originally posted by: sass8

Ugh, siding with Bee , come on

you really need an answer?

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

I will likely split the new OS and make it two different OSes. It was suuposed to be a light one but turned heavy... But after Madam Alien's comment I decided to make the first part into a different OS.

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

you really need an answer?

I'm back. 😃

Originally posted by: sass8

Yeah I saw that you sent a new os but I did not read it yet..

so you'll write 2 os then ?

yes, I can't find a way to change things around... Alien ji didn't like that Aarti was duped, and it occured to me whilst writing too but I got lost in the emotions and did not focus on that.

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

I'm back.😃

Anyone still here?

Tess, the OS is good. It has all elements in it from naughtiness, to jealousy, to sadness, to fear, to romance and all.

From my point you don't have to split it into two, just change the scene we talked about and it will become PERFECT

changing that scene will require changing how Yash fell for her and even that scene from the mall...

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

yes, I can't find a way to change things around... Alien ji didn't like that Aarti was duped, and it occured to me whilst writing too but I got lost in the emotions and did not focus on that.

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

I'm back. 😃

Anyone still here?

Tess, the OS is good. It has all elements in it from naughtiness, to jealousy, to sadness, to fear, to romance and all.

From my point you don't have to split it into two, just change the scene we talked about and it will become PERFECT

that's was the quickest nap ever

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

so you're talking to me now? 🤔

Originally posted by: B-onesie

that's was the quickest nap ever