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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Chicken Curry and parathas. I should have just gone to buy the rootis that he told me to get at the Indian place near work. I hope it tastes ok

Good luck! 😆

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

You and Tess have become too sensitive. I give my honest views and you both start making changes
I honestly don't think that you have to tone down anything just because some are harsh in judging characters.
We can't please them all.

What did I change?

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Girls a quick question

I know I told you that it's okay if you don't comment on MTB's Epilogue in PM. But I want to know how it came out?

I had shown it to you few weeks back, but this week I added the flashback scene and also what Gayatri told to Viren.

All I want to know is that does it need anything more? I don't want to miss out on anything 😳

Also Tess if Sassy makes changes, do you have the original copy of her OS? Mario and I would love to read the actual version

Edited by lovely_nikki - 8 years ago

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sass8

@sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Girls a quick question

I know I told you that it's okay if you don't comment on MTB's Epilogue in PM. But I want to know how it came out?

I had shown it to you few weeks back, but this week I added the flashback scene and also what Gayatri told to Viren.

All I want to know is that does it need anything more? I don't want to miss out on anything 😳

Also Tess if Sassy makes changes, do you have the original copy of her OS? Mario and I would love to read the actual version

Hey hey, no cheating, although that was smart Nikky 👍🏼. Tessa you know it need to go through spells check, please.

Were you serious about no comment to MTB,🤔 that'll be a first

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B-onesie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

You and Tess have become too sensitive. I give my honest views and you both start making changes
I honestly don't think that you have to tone down anything just because some are harsh in judging characters.
We can't please them all.

I made the changes as i also found that there was something lacking. I wanted to cram so much info into a small section so that it can remain just one part. It flowed but there was no clear areas of separation between the scenes

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Yes it was perfect! No changes required Alien ji

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Sassy I'm allowed to cheat 😆

And when did I say NO Comment in MTB's Epilogue? Didn't you read the PM properly?

I said I don't want you to comment in PM's but keep them ready and directly post them in the thread immediately after I post the chapter 🤔

No where I said No Comment

I'm even forcing Lazy Bee to comment 😆. In fact tomorrow I'm going to send you all reminders to get your comments ready 😃

Girls I'll leave in few minutes

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Nix, I really can;t see what is missing. I just a beautiful culmination of events, wading through the pain and past it to happiness. Life is never perfect, it all depends on how people deal with situations in their lives. And here is so much love and forgiveness and redemption. I can;t even say how much i love it.

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

What did I change?

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sass8

@sass8

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Sassy I'm allowed to cheat 😆
And when did I say NO Comment in MTB's Epilogue? Didn't you read the PM properly?

I said I don't want you to comment in PM's but keep them ready and directly post them in the thread immediately after I post the chapter 🤔

No where I said No Comment

I'm even forcing Lazy Bee to comment 😆. In fact tomorrow I'm going to send you all reminders to get your comments ready 😃

Girls I'll leave in few minutes

😆 just checking and teasing. That's make much more sense.

I should add that I am sure it will be flawless as usual

Edited by sass8 - 8 years ago