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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: B-onesie
aaahhh😃

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Girls last night I wrote a Aarti and her parents and her kids scene from MTB. But I feel something is missing from it. I wrote what I wanted to but for some reason I'm not satisfied

you wanna show us?

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

you wanna show us?

Of course I want to. I even told Bee that as soon as I finish it I'll show it to both of you. But it's not complete yet. But the main dialogues are done.

If you still want to read it then I can send it immediately. I really need to finish this chapter and this story now.

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: B-onesie
i am not whining. I did see that he ate... well he bought fish and chips and I dished it in s plate and gave it to him. And poured the cooldrink. Yeah, what a good wife am I?

🤣 oh my word! Yes, truly top class you are! 🤪

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B-onesie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Girls last night I wrote a Aarti and her parents and her kids scene from MTB. But I feel something is missing from it. I wrote what I wanted to but for some reason I'm not satisfied

i am sure its just perfect

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B-onesie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

🤣 oh my word! Yes, truly top class you are! 🤪

sarcastic much😡

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

🤣 oh my word! Yes, truly top class you are! 🤪

We wives are always PERFECT 😎. 😆

I have sent the scene to both of you. Let me know how it is. By early next week I want to post the chapter so that I can then work on DV.

Bee, because of mood I forgot to read TPT and Tessa's RW also. I'll try to read them soon

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B-onesie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

And about the light hearted stories? I gave you the "stolen away bride" and "windows"

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Got it Alien ji, will read later. Don't stress too muh, it will be fine.

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B-onesie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

We wives are always PERFECT 😎. 😆

I have sent the scene to both of you. Let me know how it is. By early next week I want to post the chapter so that I can then work on DV.

Bee, because of mood I forgot to read TPT and Tessa's RW also. I'll try to read them soon

no worries. I haven't read DV yet. And the laptop is too slow. I can't chat and open a new tab to read on the phone