AarYa OS: Flashes of Desire - Page 2

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

i think I was drooling over my keyboard thats why it didn't load

Originally posted by: B-onesie

i think I was drooling over my keyboard thats why it didn't load

Tess once again another masterpiece from you ⭐️

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Tess once again another masterpiece from you⭐️

I won't say anything about Malia, as for me it's Tess that's more important and valuable. So based on that I'm writing my comment.

They met in a drunken state. Yet their souls recognized each other. They didn't give into temptation or passion, they came close because that's what destiny had written and planned for them. That night on the beach, it was their heart and soul that connected. They both felt it, so much so that Yash even feltimpregnating her. Such strong was their connection. With heavy heart they had to leave each other, only to keep searching for each other for the next five years.

More then anything I loved Prateek, Palak and Paridhi. Most importantly, Prateek-Palak's bonding. They connected so well despite not knowing who the other was. And Palak is such a cutie pie❤️

Prateek recognized that it was Aarti for whom Yash has been searching for. He organized for them to meet. They met and once again felt the connection. No I won't call it attraction. Cause if it was only attraction, I don't think they would have searched and waited for the other for five years.

In Yash's office they both admitted that they don't know anything about the other and it was only attraction between them. Well I don't agree with them.

In my POV..

If it was only infatuation or attraction, Yash would have forgotten all about her and had moved on with some other girl.

Same way Aarti would not have gone against her father and left everything behind. She would have aborted the baby, married Prashant and had completely forgotten about Yash. I mean she endured so much, raised her daughter alone. For what? If it was not for love for Yash!

I mean they both were drunk that first night, so much so that they didn't even remember each other's names. Then why did they waited for five years? Because their soul had connected. Which is the most strongest and unbreakable connection.

I may have missed some points in here while commenting but I expressed what I felt on the main points of this OS and that was that their hearts and souls connected the moment their eyes met.

Like I said, another masterpiece⭐️

awww thaaankuuu so much my lovely Didu 🤗

I just had to comment on the attraction vs connection. Jodhu actually picked it up well that it was our darling tubelight Yash who insisted that it was attraction. Aarti knew she loved him, she was disappointed that it was not a love declaration. She said she knew they were destined to be but she gave him a chance to realize his feelings. That's why she insisted on abstinence so her tubelight would realize the truth without the cloud of passion 😉

you've made me very happy waking up to your rare and therefore treasured views. Thaaankuuu! 😃

Wow, what a starter, hot 😳, it did set the scene and the expectation because reading thru the story , I just wanted to see the mystery unravel.

That was an intense meeting for them to still remember it, as if things just happened yesterday, unable to forget the pull they felt toward each other, increased by the year apart and the yearning to find out if those feelings they felt the first time were real or a wish.

I like Aarti spirit, despite the difficulties, she chose the hard path by having Palak knowing that daddy will cut her off, angry that she got pregnant out of wedlock 😕, not obeying him, and so goes society harsh rules. Palak is so sweet and well raised in their humble surroundings; every child can have tamper tantrum but at least she knows to apologize knowing she went to far. The remark on not having more sweet but save the money, show an understand of their live and maturity beyond her year. In the end it was all worth it because its Palak that brought them back together.

Until that destiny decide to move thing ahead with the meeting with Prateek, to bring Aarti and Yash closer to their destination, finally finding their better half. The moment Prateek realize the truth was funny 😆 cuting off Paridhi. And shameless Chachu , using Palak to get Aarti to go to the interview, smart. The meeting confirmed everything, the attraction, pull, desire, love, you name it; not yet touching but making love nonetheless ⭐️. Obviously Yash wasn't going to make the same mistakes twice and lose her again and hire her on the spot (gosh I wish my job interview happen like that, the instant hiring part only of course 😉).
I love the family reunion. Yash and Palak meeting, so natural and smooth and her happy chatters, just sweet. Aarti apprehension at Yash reaction only to be reassured by his possessiveness and claim. They waited a long time and now they can explore their feeling and love .
What an ending still hot 😳, desire fulfilled indeed.
Absolutely wonderful story 👏

Amazing os ,fitting title ,what a strong connection they had to know each other the minute they meet again and to love each other and hold out for each other for so long ,its cute how palak reacted to her meeting her dad and prateek and knowing they family

Originally posted by: B-onesie

No words for little innocent you❓

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Ok, ok.
Finally.

I
really enjoy Tessie stories but she is an innocent girl so I am sure this story
was written by Malia.

Why do i say so, weeelll ...

From the very first line of the story, it is a scorcher. The
passion is too hot to describe. No wonder 5 years later they still could
not forget. Aarti more so than Yash as she had constant reminders of it.
Her daughter being the main one and then also her day to day struggle to
survive.

i can imagine her helplessness, trying to give her daughter everything
and yet not being able to. And Palak is but a child and instant
gratification seems to be the norm. She is too tiny in any case to really
understand the struggle that her mother faces every day. In most people's
lives a chocolate is not a big thing but in theirs it was.

It would have been embarrasing for her to accept the chocolate from a
stranger no matter how kind hearted. It must have pleased her in that her
daughter calmed down but who wants to depend on the alms of strangers

How terrible was her father. It was bad enough that he wanted her
to abort the baby and still marry a man she didn't want but blocking her from
working was the pits. Did he want his daughter and his granddaughter to
beg on the streets? That is pretty callous to do to your own family, no
matter what she had done.

And Yash, yearning and looking for her for 5 years and remaining
celibate after that one experience was shocking. For a man. It must
really have been phenomenal. Going to
that place year after and not really know who you are looking for, if you had
seen, walked past her? But i suppose that he was confident that he would
know since the connection was so intense and passionate.

And destiny had hand in this for sure.
How else would the chocolate buying stranger be Palak's very own uncle? And she runs into him again and becomes
friends with him and Pari. She trusts
them so much she tells them her story and they recognise it as the same as Yash's
and decide that they will orchestrate a meeting.

The Yash in your stories are crazy these days. Imagine after them recognising each other, he
gives her the job and has a desk put in his office to be close to her. And so
in awed by the others presence that she forgets about her child and he forgets
that Prateek mentioned a child.

But he recognised is daughter as he did the nameless, faceless stranger
that he fell in love with.

And finally their dreams became a reality. Each found their dream lover and became more
than that, husband, wife, parent. Yes, finally
they became a family. And they could be live their desire and dreams everyday.

Happiness!!!!👏

one down, gazzillion more to go! 😆

Malia says thank you Madam Bee 😃

Tessa a sizzling hot and amazing OS.