Aarya OS - A 10000 Hits For You **Treat for Tessa & Jhils Sizzlers - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sass8


😆 of course you do

of course she does😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: B-onesie

of course she does😆

no pressure hey? Sure😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki


Edited,..


First of all for the Title 👏. I envy all of you for always coming with so apt titles, while here I always struggle for perfect titles

Now coming to the content of this OS...


A Tom and Jerry OS for our very own Tom and Jerry of the forum 😲. WOW! ⭐️
This AarYa is no less than our own Tom and Jerry 🤣


Aarti...

She is really a JKR. She knows how to trap her Enemy. Oh yes, Yash is her number one Enemy as first he uses her for his own benefits and then steals her heart and on top of that is ignorant of her feelings but more interestingly, he is ignorant of his own feelings for her.

Oh yeah! He loves her but as usual he is a Tube-Light who's switch needs to be turned on for it to be lit.

This Aarti is not only beautiful but also bold and vivacious and also very tenacious. She is not afraid to speak her mind. To save her best friend (her love whom she is trapping) she marries him. She is the one who takes the first step and make his hers. Oh yeah! With this AarYa it's always the other way around. Aarti is the one who's taking first steps in everything.

Yash...

Once again he is nothing but a Tube-Light.

Wait a second... I think I've already said that. But then again it's the Universal Truth 😆
Mr. Smarty Pants thinks his friend is doing him a favor from saving him from the wrath of his parents by agreeing to Marry him. Little does he know that he is getting trapped and that also his Mommy Dearest is the one who is the Master Planner 😆



Gayatri...


After MTB and DV, I'm in love with this Gayatri. She knows how to handle the boys of her family, including her own Husband. Mr. Suraj Pratap is as Clueless and as much a Tube-Light as his Dearest Son.

I also loved the juxtaposition that you showed. On one side Dear Parents as dreaming of more grandkids and on the other side, newly married AarYa are planning and working on it 😉

Another thing that I liked is that Yash didn't got angry after learning the truth about how his beloved wife trapped him with the help of his own mother.


This brings me to my special demand...


My Demand...


You mentioned that Gayatri says that Prateek is also in love with some girl only he isn't aware of it yet.
So my demand is that you write second chapter of this OS where you'll show how Gayatri manipulates and makes plan to make Prateek realize and acknowledge his feelings for Paridhi. But here Aarti should be the mastermind.


You can also show that Yash learns about this and wants to take his revenge (in a loving way) with his beloved wife fro tricking him. But his dilemma is that here Aarti is doing it for his own brother. So he can't even mess with her plans.

Now this will be a real challenge for you to show how Yash avenges her but also manages to make her successful in her plan 😳

No pressure... I simply won't let you rest in peace till you give me 99,996 more chapters of this OS 🤪

Oh yeah! I'm MEAN 😈

Don't worry you'll get used to it 🤣



Btw, loved this OS ⭐️




Ah Nikky , this warm my heart , thanks very much. I am also not good with title but this one spoke for itself. Yes I love a strong Gayatri with a hold on her family even a little manipulative sometimes for the greater good 😊. I always though that the character had potential beyond the servitude (not that it wasn't also ok) but at least I can try to explore that in my stories.
And now the mean part, really, 😆 not making it easy, I see. Now I am going to get the other DQ pursuing me with angry emoji😉. Anyway can this get me closer to another chapter of the untitle treat you sent me or SN. I am not picky. 😃
ps: don't tell anyone but I have tentatively penned the main parts on paper tonight just have to fill the details now .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie


of course she does😆


so do you! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: sass8


Ah Nikky , this warm my heart , thanks very much. I am also not good with title but this one spoke for itself. Yes I love a strong Gayatri with a hold on her family even a little manipulative sometimes for the greater good 😊. I always though that the character had potential beyond the servitude (not that it wasn't also ok) but at least I can try to explore that in my stories.
And now the mean part, really,😆 not making it easy, I see. Now I am going to get the other DQ pursuing me with angry emoji😉. Anyway can this get me closer to another chapter of the untitle treat you sent me or SN. I am not picky.😃
ps: don't tell anyone but I have tentatively penned the main parts on paper tonight just have to fill the details now .


open secret? 🤣

now hurry up! 😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bumped to make it easier to find
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Bumped to make it easier to find


Copy cat 🤪


But it's only easy if you (including me) comment immediately. Or within a day or two. Even after bumping if the comments are not made, then again it becomes difficult to find the thread. Like I'll have to hunt down (once again) Sassy's SS on Bua.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki


Copy cat 🤪


But it's only easy if you (including me) comment immediately. Or within a day or two. Even after bumping if the comments are not made, then again it becomes difficult to find the thread. Like I'll have to hunt down (once again) Sassy's SS on Bua.

I learn from the best😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing os love aarya's banter ,everything was planed by aarti with yash's parents aproval wow ,aarya is just to cute together and also loved sp and g3 banter especially the bedroom talk ,great job saas
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: bongalisoo

Amazing os love aarya's banter ,everything was planed by aarti with yash's parents aproval wow ,aarya is just to cute together and also loved sp and g3 banter especially the bedroom talk ,great job saas


😃 thanks bongalisoo , glad you enjoyed it
Edited by sass8 - 8 years ago

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