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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another intruiguing story.
What a bubly personality that got crushed too early. But first I like how she was so carefree and friendly and taunting him, 😆 despite Yash guarded attitude. And Yash so gauche in the beginning 😕 poor guy he was so driven toward his goal until he couldn't help by being attracted to her in the end. And just when he figure thinks out she was gone. That dance was so sad , you could feel Aarti desperation at the situation we didn't know yet. She show such courage and confess her love, alas Yash didn't gtreasure it, but he wasn't ready and they lost years.
So Aarti had to resort to bar dancing to survive and take care of her mom. Yash jump to conclusion , of course 😳 and cheapened they coming together, never asking her what happened back when they were in school. Men can be so dense sometime 😡, actually most of the time and ego driven.
So could it be that despite all he followed her from a distance after that meeting and help maybe (I may be grasping at straw here), and now come the time to finally meet . So more soon, please 😊.

Funny I posted part 1 feedback almost at the same time you posted part 2 so I'll add the rest here.
Geez talk about being stubborness and fool 😆 , still in denial and yet created a baby out of wedlock
So I was surprise by Yash mother apperance, did not expect that but it added an interesting twist and so relieve that she actually scold Yash and not Aarti. Of course, Yash being an illegitimate son, should have been more careful. What a sad weeding, both not daring to hope. Yash has learned mistrust from his father betrayal and Aarti had a hard wake up call due to daddy abandoning them. I see how hard it was for them to trust. How much the relationship deteriote because of their fears. 😕. Why do men always choose the cheating or running path when thing get difficult at home , I'll never understand . Sad that Aarti loss her mother, her strengh, I was not suprise that the stress of it made her lose the baby. But SP redeem himself a little but giving sound advice to Yash; yes he had the woman he loves with him and running away would have destroyed that. I like Yash and Aarti honest discussion, finally confessing their true hear desire, fears and whishes.
What can I say about that passionate love, hot, hot and hot 😳😳, such a change from the desperate love they used to have before.
Seriously, Aarti father not even reognizing his daughter, shame and his loss.
It took them a while but they managed to get it right in the end. Loved it Bee . 👏
Edited by sass8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
B thank you for posting the second part so quickly. Poor Arti had to endure so much in her life because of men in her life, first with her father then Yash. No wonder she could not trust anyone and did not want to commit herself to marrying Yash. On the other hand Yash had been rejected/abandoned at an early age so played safe by guarding his emotions. Really felt their heartache and all they had to go through. Another awesome OS. Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG I didnt expect you to post the next part this soon but I am happy and grateful that you were rushed.
Coming to the update, no wonder that it was Yash who was Aarti's new boss and glad that they decided to be professional setting aside their personal differences ( as if we don't know they won't stick to it for much longer 😆 ).
Guilty as charged, they let their latent feelings resurface out of their jealousy. Ufff...this jealousy...Ultimately, she gets pregnant as was expected and the responsibility is now doubled as she must take care of both her ailing mother and the unborn child that she's nurturing within her.
Glad that Radha caught her with the fact of her being pregnant with Yash's child. And I love that she wasn't judgmental about her being an unwed mother. This is what makes me love Radha more than the wretch G3. The former has that empathy and broad mindedness to see things from all their perspectives.
Finally they unwillingly marry for the sake of their baby but still neither are ready to reach out for the other and mend the relation because of the ghosts from the past unless Aarti's mother insists her to have a try in settling things between them for the happily ever after, before breathing her last.
Even Yash is unable to silence the scream of his heart for much longer and that was to go claim the love of his life, letting the past in the past itself.

And then the much-awaited con& con. and 🤢🤢🤢.
Back to the present day. Well about despicable Satyendra, no comments.
Aww... the second baby is on the way. Now they are one happiest family. Loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful os B even after all the unhappiness they had to endure they ended up together and happy, good job B
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Emotional chapter
Aarya worked at same office
It was heart breaking moments for aarti knowing yash dating
Oops aarti got pregnant when aarya make out at their office
Yash mom was really understanding loving caring women
She just understand aarti was pregnant
Uff yash didn't even tried to confront with aarti abt anything
Just brought him mom at aarti home for marriage proposal
What aarti's so called dad did to her & her mom it's broke her trust
Even yash misunderstood her
Aarti lost her mom &a her baby that was heart breaking moment
The loss was turning point for aarya relationship
As both open abt their feelings
Finally aarya got their fairytale with their loving families
At last aarti met her so called dad he is completely disgusting pig
Awe aarya cute paratha moment like in their school time
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Posted: 8 years ago
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There are honestly no words for this OS. An emotional journey of two soulmates who faced the trials and tribulations life could offer and got compensated with everlasting bliss. Well done, Honey Bee 😊 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry for the late comment sis my ear it's giving me a hard time since yerstaday evening.
Res for now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Res I loved this very much ⭐️ both afraid of opening their hearts to love, afriad of being disapointed. Destiny had it own plan they were meant to be together.

Yes Sharlsie, Aarya forever. They were always destined to be together
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sass8

Another intruiguing story.
What a bubly personality that got crushed too early. But first I like how she was so carefree and friendly and taunting him, 😆 despite Yash guarded attitude. And Yash so gauche in the beginning 😕 poor guy he was so driven toward his goal until he couldn't help by being attracted to her in the end. And just when he figure thinks out she was gone. That dance was so sad , you could feel Aarti desperation at the situation we didn't know yet. She show such courage and confess her love, alas Yash didn't gtreasure it, but he wasn't ready and they lost years.
So Aarti had to resort to bar dancing to survive and take care of her mom. Yash jump to conclusion , of course 😳 and cheapened they coming together, never asking her what happened back when they were in school. Men can be so dense sometime 😡, actually most of the time and ego driven.
So could it be that despite all he followed her from a distance after that meeting and help maybe (I may be grasping at straw here), and now come the time to finally meet . So more soon, please 😊.

Funny I posted part 1 feedback almost at the same time you posted part 2 so I'll add the rest here.
Geez talk about being stubborness and fool 😆 , still in denial and yet created a baby out of wedlock
So I was surprise by Yash mother apperance, did not expect that but it added an interesting twist and so relieve that she actually scold Yash and not Aarti. Of course, Yash being an illegitimate son, should have been more careful. What a sad weeding, both not daring to hope. Yash has learned mistrust from his father betrayal and Aarti had a hard wake up call due to daddy abandoning them. I see how hard it was for them to trust. How much the relationship deteriote because of their fears. 😕. Why do men always choose the cheating or running path when thing get difficult at home , I'll never understand . Sad that Aarti loss her mother, her strengh, I was not suprise that the stress of it made her lose the baby. But SP redeem himself a little but giving sound advice to Yash; yes he had the woman he loves with him and running away would have destroyed that. I like Yash and Aarti honest discussion, finally confessing their true hear desire, fears and whishes.
What can I say about that passionate love, hot, hot and hot 😳😳, such a change from the desperate love they used to have before.
Seriously, Aarti father not even reognizing his daughter, shame and his loss.
It took them a while but they managed to get it right in the end. Loved it Bee . 👏

So true Sassy. They allowed their hurts and fears to dictate their decisions. Causing separation. But in this time destiny never allowed them to forget each other. I would say that in the end the very same hurt, fear and separation was what made their relation more cherished. They had loved and lost and now that their hearts finally found each other it would not be parted again.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fandu

B thank you for posting the second part so quickly. Poor Arti had to endure so much in her life because of men in her life, first with her father then Yash. No wonder she could not trust anyone and did not want to commit herself to marrying Yash. On the other hand Yash had been rejected/abandoned at an early age so played safe by guarding his emotions. Really felt their heartache and all they had to go through. Another awesome OS. Thank you.

Thanks so much. It's sad what shapes our decision making in most instances in real life too. But luckily in my stories I can always give it a happy ending.

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