AarYa OS: Then String Between Hearts Final Chapter: Page 8) - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Beautiful update,loved the ending


Thank you Alekhika
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: saf24

A simply beautiful ending. Loved that Yash didn't give up once he found her and I liked Meera and Aman's part in getting them together. Fantastic job as always. Loved it.


Thank you for your lovely comment Saf 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie


The ending was really bitter sweet ❤️ 😭

I of course suspected that something was amiss but i was hoping against hope that I was wrong.

That horrible Arpita was trying to manipulate the whole situation in her favour. First the press release and then exposing Aarti to her parents. What a witch. Especially since Aarti did not know about the engagement till she saw the mag. it must have been terrible for her to face her parents in that situation. Luckily mom was still on her side.


Wow, what a trial Aarti went through She lost so much. And she was still prepared to give him up. Fortunately she has amazing people in her life that made re-united her with her love and still keeping their promise.

So glad Yash did not just give up on her and neither did her friends. And finally they experienced true and unconditonal love. Nothing could keep them apart, they lived their destiny.

I love how you used the symbolism of the Payel in the story. It was always part of their love story and despite losing her legs he made sure that it continued to be part of it.

Beautiful Beany⭐️⭐️⭐️





Though it was bitter sweet i hope it made you smile at last. 😳
Well Love really found its way, though Arpita tried her best to keep them apart but though it took time but they came together. It was her love and his hope for the love, though she lost so much but got back the real happiness.
About the Payel, she got his Payel, in more beautiful shape 😃

Thank You Bee with Honey 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksen

amazing part

loved the ending


Thank You Ksen
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: sass8

It was all so intruiguing , especially after the disappearing act, then to learn that the man of her dream was engaged must have been heartbreaking. Its understandable that she cuts all ties to him. He should have been more forthcoming but was to scare and lost her for years. But I agree with Bee, the ending was bittersweet, so much pain and hurt and loss. But in the end they got their hope and joy.
Beautiful sweet OS. 😊


Well i had to keep that to shape the suspense. I love suspense (Ask Rossey di and Tess😆) I would end all the chapters of my FF at suspense and got so much scolding😆

Those are the days ( sigh)

But i am glad thay you found it intriguing and liked it.

Thank You Sassie for your beautiful comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: premap

Brilliant ! It is a 'magical' romance !! Bitter sweet but the sweetness remains ,even after the story ends . Thanks for giving us a lovely story !


Thank You sweetie. You really brought smile on my face 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Before I start, you forgot to add this to your collection thread, I struggled to find it 😡 also, you should indicate the page for part 2 as well!

Coming to the story: just when Yash had given up on ever finding her and consented for a loveless marriage, he ended up at precisely such a place which reminded her of him. He could sense her presence and his suspicions heightened after that dessert. He was not all that surprised to finally see her but seeing her in another's arms made him believe the worst, why else would she stay away so long?

Aarti had given up on ever having her love, it didn't help that she was never sure of his feelings. Still she risked finding him but lost her parents in the process; that caused her to lose all the fight within her.

To think this all happened because Yash never confessed his feelings. Arpita used that small fact to drive them apart. She ensured she was effective by confronting her in front of her parents, in a way Arpita is indirectly responsible for the ensuing tragedies. Still nothing can stand in the way of true love and all her scheming was for naught. Conniving witch that she is! 😡

Yash still tried to fight for them but she did not want to be a burden to him. I'm just glad that he learned the truth in time. Finally they can be together and be each other's strength.

I loved the symbolism of payal in this story. It was foreshadowing what was to come when Aarti left it behind... For Yash finding them was like the string of their love getting broken. They then got the payal they lost in the form of their daughter. Now they had an even stronger string tying their hearts together forever!

Heart-wrenching but so beautiful and heartfelt! Loved it Chumchum ❤️


Oh yes You caught it right. The misunderstanding created mostly because he never confessed, he loved her but was in another mind and that gave Arpita chance to apart them. She could fight only if he confessed before still she trusted him enough to come back but in that process faced such big lose which.
But then their love helped them ti get back to each other.

Thank you so much
And welcome back TC 😆
I need more of that 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: jhillyarya


Oh yes You caught it right. The misunderstanding created mostly because he never confessed, he loved her but was in another mind and that gave Arpita chance to apart them. She could fight only if he confessed before still she trusted him enough to come back but in that process faced such big lose which.
But then their love helped them ti get back to each other.

Thank you so much
And welcome back TC 😆
I need more of that 😳



And i did update my thread with this story 😡
Check properly😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Final Chapter was Awesome

So it was Arpita after all that had her hand in Aarti leaving Yash
but glad to note that both Yash and Aarti are back together after all the misunderstandings that Arpita has caused

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