PV OS /SS Maid (Made) for Me AKA Nikki's OS - Epilogue - page 16 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Will copy and paste soon, yes, emos and all! 😆



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Stupid, thick-skulled, brick-headed, tubelight! 😡 seriously? So convinced of his convictions that not even her sobs got through to him! Aarti had to preserve her dignity. She lost so much already, this hurt worse because this time she had given her heart, trusted him with her love because he came to mean so much! To find out she is seemingly wrong must be so hard! They both ignored the call of their hearts and she left, he did not stop her.


I really like Aaman. Unlike tubelight, he's willing to fight for his love. 😆 imagine a stranger coming up to you out of the blue and embracing you! Craziness! Yet it's fate they met, Aaman is the one link to her destiny! and he had me giggling! 😆


oh my! that scene at the restaurant had me 🤢 he realizes his folly in letting her go and had to control his caveman urges but when he is near her again, he shows her in no uncertain terms that he means business this time. he follows through and shows up at her doorstep and my oh my! 🤢 🤢 Mansi walked in at just the right time to save Aarti from losing her head 🤣 and going against her character! but she really missed him, poor soul!


I don't blame her for not trusting things this time. not only is she insecure about her working class status but in not stopping her the first time, he reinforced her belief that nothing good ever lasts for her, that she loses it just when it's going good. he realizes this and shows her through actions that this time he is never letting her go! she's maid for him! status be damned!


Arpita is the the source of a different perspective, she is seeing things from the outside and is more objective and finally opens her eyes, just as she did for her. you are right, one could really feel them connecting in that scene and can easily see a lasting friendship between them.


went through a host of emotions again! 🤢 😳 😆 ❤️

🤣 🤣 not a bad copy an paste right Honey-Bee? 😛


now Hurry up with the next! 😡


i suppose they are both at fault. They gave up too easily. Once again it is all about perceptions and fears.
Hers because she thinks she is not entitled to her happiness and her re-inforces that by his words. And his because he is so out of his comfort one that he can't recognise what is being offered. More than just her body and her gratitude. In his mind he feels he is doing right by her when he hurt her more than he could ever understand.

But he will fight for her now. Just as she is. Because that is the girl he fell in love with.

I wanted Aarpita and Aarti to be allies. She needs someone like her on her side to help her in the future to remind her that she she is the perfect fit for him and no one else. She might also need her as an ally when faced with Yash's snobbish peers in the future.

Not a bad copy and paste at all.

The next chapter is all in my head. Nothing penned down. Will try and post by at least Sunday.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Tessaloni


two words for such a long comment??? 😡

Yes she called him. She already accepted him as her protector subconsciously.

Yash was the typical mans man. Not much for emotional entanglements. But in a matter of moments she changed that. At first yes, it was the physical attraction, but she forced her way in his heart by the open, honest and lovable person that she was. He couldn't handle her and he couldn't let her go.
He was compelled to take caregiver and protector from the outset.
But the unfamiliar and overwhelming feelings for her causes him to alienate her. But as you know they were destined to be and he will make good on his past mistakes

So glad the linguist in you did not allow for a comment just in emoji's 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Yes she called him. She already accepted him as her protector subconsciously.

Yash was the typical mans man. Not much for emotional entanglements. But in a matter of moments she changed that. At first yes, it was the physical attraction, but she forced her way in his heart by the open, honest and lovable person that she was. He couldn't handle her and he couldn't let her go.
He was compelled to take caregiver and protector from the outset.
But the unfamiliar and overwhelming feelings for her causes him to alienate her. But as you know they were destined to be and he will make good on his past mistakes

So glad the linguist in you did not allow for a comment just in emoji's 😆

😆 😛 that's better!
Edited by Tessaloni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: B-onesie

i suppose they are both at fault. They gave up too easily. Once again it is all about perceptions and fears.
Hers because she thinks she is not entitled to her happiness and her re-inforces that by his words. And his because he is so out of his comfort one that he can't recognise what is being offered. More than just her body and her gratitude. In his mind he feels he is doing right by her when he hurt her more than he could ever understand.

But he will fight for her now. Just as she is. Because that is the girl he fell in love with.

I wanted Aarpita and Aarti to be allies. She needs someone like her on her side to help her in the future to remind her that she she is the perfect fit for him and no one else. She might also need her as an ally when faced with Yash's snobbish peers in the future.

Not a bad copy and paste at all.

The next chapter is all in my head. Nothing penned down. Will try and post by at least Sunday.

well hurry-up! 😡 😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Wonderful update. The beginning was seemingly a tragedy but after the entrance of Aman, I couldn't stop grinning because I knew from then on, the day is saved! 🥳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

well hurry-up! 😡 😡

😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome superb updt sis i luvd it 2 d core

oh yash is such a dumdum even humpty dumpty is clever thn him bt wit his stupidity his is still cheesey also "if u luv sum1 set thm free 😆
nyc one tubelight plcng ur hand on aarti's thigh

i cnt belv aftr 3 yrs aarti is still childish to wake up jash hmm

manu is totally hilarious drooling ovr yash lik a dog drooling ovr a bone i jst laugh loud whn aarti slapped manu's hand that was tryin 2 touch aarti's man

plz cont sn sis am eagerly waiting 4 d nxt chapter.
Edited by BusiMusi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Magic...I can't wait to see what happens between our most loved jodi aarya, hash gave her enough time to realize whether it was love r just gratitude but it was love, I'm just glad they met before because he would have made the biggest mistake of marrying a women he didn't love, a women who was in love with another man...update soon honey Bee
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: B-onesie


Yes, he was really her nigh tin shining armour, but that turns out to be the problem. As you will see in the next chapter 3.
thanks for the comment Zee. Hoping you are better as well.

so much better now Bee, thanks for asking I'm working on my come back OS , Ihave already finished most of it, it just need some polishing...for now I will only tell you its title...LIFE LINE
Edited by zuby87 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: zuby87

so much better now Bee, thanks for asking I'm working on my come back OS , Ihave already finished most of it, it just need some polishing...for now I will only tell you its title...LIFE LINE


Zuby-Duby we are still awaiting our surprise!

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