AarYa Os: Enchanted chptr 3 on pg 6 (19/10/2016) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --HANSA--

yash ego get hurt
arti is so cute love it
its short na


yes ego got hurt and thank you sis.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Poor Yash, did not think that the "rich" factor will play against him, that was funny😆 how she dismiss him. And so Yash, Prashant and Aaman are firends here. Next chap please 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sass8

Poor Yash, did not think that the "rich" factor will play against him, that was funny😆 how she dismiss him. And so Yash, Prashant and Aaman are firends here. Next chap please
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😆😆 yes he didn't think that. He thought maybe he will get points. Yes they are bestfriend.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Important note about the charaters. Yash Aman and Prashant are best buddies and they are unseparatable. They are like mouth teeth nd tongue. We can't separate this thing. I know i hate prashant's charater but he is good here.
Edited by BusiMusi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting & very catchy start.. Awesome..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys here is an update i hope you will like it. Sorry for the delay 😃.

Chapter 2

Aarti got a call from her father telling her to come home this weekend has their close friends are coming this weekend to reunite after been separated for 16 years. Okay bauji i will be there. Love you too. Bye.

Friday evening on the road. Yash stop pouting you look like a dog that has a flu. It will be fun said G3.

No it won't be fun ma. I was suppose to hunt this girl and make her fall to my knees and back me to love her because she turned me down.

Hahahahaha aww someone's ego got smacked and smashed hahahahaha.

Hahahahaha every funny maaa said Yash pouting.

You are defiantly your fathers son. He did the same thing when i turned him down.

Okay we are here. Yash help me get suitcases out of the car and don't worry you will get the girl it's in our blood to get the ladies winked SP.

How bauji asked Yash.

Well i can give you some points i got from my bauji who got them for your grate grandfather. The cycle the can go on.

Oh it's like a food chain. Hmm no thanks bauji. I don't think anything that worked in 18 century will work now it's 21 century now.

Well than good luck on not getting the girl then said Suraj Pratap walking away from Yash.

Wait bauji. It won't hurt hearing those 18 century points.

Okay are you ready Yash.

Point 1:
Show of your beautiful smile with your perfect teeth. Don't smirk that a turn of. You can smirk after getting the girl.

Point 2:
complement her everytime how beautiful sexy hot she is. Make sure your complement makes her flushed and sometimes frustrated.

Frustrated why bauji.

Well a frustrated woman is hot and she can turn you on and make it easy for you woo her with your exotic complements.

Okay. Anymore points.

Yes last but not least. Point 3:
Show how toned your body is. Women love a men with 6-8 or 10 pack and your mother loved all this said Suraj Pratap showing Yash his 8 pack and Yash chuckled.

Come on you two it has been nearly an hour since you are out there.

Yah we are coming said SP. SP and Yash greeted Radha and Satyendra. Well am kinder tired can i rest aunty.

Yes beta. Let me show you your room and Aarti well come and wake you up for supper around 6pm said Radha.

Yash lied about needing to rest. He wanted to see if those point bauji gave him will worked has he discovered he doesn't need to look far for the lady who smacked and smashed his ego thought Yash (not his words but his mothers words).

Time skip.
Yash took a shower around 5:30pm and Aarti came to call Yash for supper when she saw Yash shirtless.

Omg good what are you doing here.

Am here because aunty and uncle invited me and my parents and stop staring at my virgin chest said Yash like a drama queen and Aarti ran out with a flushed face.

Time skip. The next morning.
Woke up and smell the coffee Jash you are not my type. Hey what are you doing said Aarti.

Doing what you asked me to do. Am smelling the the coffee like you asked.

Argh you are an idiot.

And you are beautiful said Yash showing of his sexy smile and straight white teeth.

Aarti you haven't even started making breakfast. Yash beta don't distract my beautiful daughter with your well toned body look how flushed she is.

Maaa please you are embarrassing me.

Oh i didn't know am sorry Aartiji i will put on a top. It's just am used to walk topless at my flat and i bet you also walk in your underwear at your dorm said Yash smiling and Radha chuckling.

Aarti hit Yash face with a dish clot and she was flushed and frustrated.

Sorry for the spelling grammatical mistakes guys i will correct them soon hopefully.

Please feel free to live a review and don't forget to hit the like button.

Love Busi
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God Bless Y'all
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Peace Out

Edited by BusiMusi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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🤣 Awesome sis 🤣
Well i see the parents are young up to the point people they have a very good relationship with their kids 😆 SP and his advice love it he is so relaxed and G3 teasing her son 😆 this is such a fun story ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fantastic update.. Thanks for pm dear..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😆don't you just love the parents and their wisdoms, SP points where hilarious cause Yash ego took a brunt. And it seems the advice is working, Yash is making Aarti blush.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very interesting and funny ,update soon

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