'Rishta Janmo Ka'- An Heart Touching OS.... - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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mind blowing OS
it was awesome journey of them
they met bcoz their parents fix their marriage
first he wasn't ready accept her as his wife but with passing time both fall in love 😃
its hurt when she thought that he is with another girl but couldn't do anything 😭
finally both confess their love for each other 😃
it was emotional moment for both of them
poor soul they lived together with their love support & their love one for 50 yrs 🤗
but in their 50th wedding anniversary she died 🥺
it broke my heart I couldn't stop my tears as he was alone without his wife 🥺
it was beautiful journey of soul mate 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You were wrong Nikki di.. Ir was not sad at all, at least for me.. But it was very emotional.. Very very beautiful.
It is very much beautiful for words. I can't find out how to comment. Reason 1 the concept was so beautiful and different and the way you wrote it it felt just like reality. Like i am watching or feeling the way she is saying about each things.

It was a cycle which they completed together. It was meant to be like this. Like they come together once they had to be apart for a while to get back to their promises of birth. They had witnessed happiness and sorrow together, stayed with each other, became each other's strength. And that was the beauty of the relation. The relationship started with a bitterness but it turned sweet very soon
He was indeed honest and she choose the right decision which bring a complete life for both of them.

I am not at all sad by reading this but it made me awestruck.. I just kept thinking the beauty of life. And you bring it so beautifully that i had tears..

I think i can't give it a proper judgement as i still want to say many things but i can't find out what to say..


It is much more than beautiful..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you very much Nikki for the engrossing story, it touched my heart ❤️ ❤️

BTW sorry for what you are going through, hope everything works out soon...Sending you lots of 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is an an ode to love, the love between a man and a woman, softly, soulful, human emotions expose as sincerely as possible. This is the type of story that you feel and enjoyed fully, for once words failed me because its simply brillant. Thank you👏👏


Edited by sass8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its really a heart touching os indeed
yash was inlove with another girl but had to marry aarti, he told her but she still accepted to marry him because of their society that really show how much she loved her parent because she does not want them to be disgraced or bad mouthed if she reject him but she still allowed yash to see the girl he loved after marriage and she never complained, she felt prang of jealousy when she started falling in love with yash its normal for every girl who is inlove, and yash fell inlove with her too
slowly or little by little they started loosing their parent but they stood as each others back bone they shared both sad and happy times together they had two children and also had grandchildren what a cute family!!!
on their 50th anniversery aarti left yash to wait 4 him in the after life even after death he could still feel her presence he just had to let her go so she could wait for him what a sacred relationship.
so emotional wanna cry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nikki this was such a beautiful OS, Brilliantly written. Absolutely loved the way their story evolved from the initial stages of an arranged marriage to a lifetime of love. Words just fall short to describe the feeling after reading this. You did a fabulous job
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing story...you did a great job 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome OS yash always tubelight
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome OS yash always tubelight


Haha. You said it right 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

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Didu anything I say about this master piece cannot measure up to its brilliance! As usual you have taken due care for each scene. It's so beautiful and heartfelt and true to its name.

Indeed it's a relation of more than one lifetime, so deep she is able to console and reassure him from the beyond... He is able to let her go save in the knowledge that they would meet soon to embark on another journey.

Reluctant souls entering into a forced union. They were not particularly forced to marry each other but they knew whoever they married would not be their choice. Yet she recognized the good man he was through his honesty. This allowed her to be honest with him and this cemented mutual trust. More than love, trust is essential for any relation to hold. Having to live together forced them to see each other, to value each other and slowly they fell in love. Yet their trust was fragile, their mutual respect was deep, they did not want to ruin that but their hearts would not be ignored. The confession was so beautiful. She did not dare to allow any thought of his changing feelings to preserve herself; how delightful to be love in return by the one who holds your heart...

How tragic to realize your true love was never meant for you? Yet she loved him enough to recognize where is happiness lay...

They had a full life, 50 plus years filled with happiness! Two children to cement their bond, grandchildren to spoil. They shared sorrows and joys. A beautiful bond which was only the first phase in a journey which would span over more lifetimes to come

magnificent piece Didu! I absolutely loved it! ❤️


Tess the response that I got for this simple OS is too overwhelming for me. I don't think (after MTB) I cried after reading the comments. Not just in this forum but also in other forums.

I don't know from where this story came in my mind some 4-5 months back. And when I finally sat to work on it, I couldn't stop myself. It's as if words kept pouring in my mind and I kept writing.

After I read it, I too was shocked to see the results of my brain 😲

The last scene was the first scene that had come in my mind. From there the whole story kept forming and now the result is right I front of you and everyone to see.

I think after MTB, this is the story that I'll cherish for a long time.

Thanks sweetie for making this more memorable for me with this beautiful analysis. (I won't call it a comment as its more than tha for me). ❤️


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