AarYa OS: His Number One - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

OS queen! OS queen! OS queen!
Congo for your new color... 😉 ❤️


thaaankuuu MAishuuu 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

Firstly (well, there is actually a comment above this one, lol!), Gizzz... I'm so sorry yaar! Don't know why I couldn't come here and comment, but today I said "Oh, come on, I can do this!" 😆
And I'm so so sooo glad I did!
Seriously girl, what a masterpiece! Are you from our Planet? 😲 How could you write so perfectly? ❤️
I think I just needed a punch to "rediscover" my passion for reading FFs here. ❤️
What should I tell you? 😳 Believe me - people are so damn right when they call you OS queen!
I couldn't breathe properly reading this 😆 'cause it was so damn interesting and *should I say this* Hot! 😳
Let me drool a lil': Haaayyyeee!
What a story! The characters, personalities, meeting places *ahem ahem* ;) ...
And now let's get back 😆
Loved Yash's character to the moon and back! Well, that moon though! She keeps playing Cupid in love stories, hats-off to her daring ishhhtyle! ;)
Amazing story and very beautifully written. You really make me feel every emotion of your character ❤️
Thanks a lot for making my day better with this 🤗 Please, don't put me comment about those scenes - cause all I can do is And trust me, I won't miss any of it from now on! ❤️
I wish I could comment longer about the story but please bear with me - that passion is out of the world
😳 maybe later... who knows. 😆
Tesshuuu sweetie, missed you a lot! 🤗 love you ❤️ Keep rocking with your fabulous writing skills! 🤗 congo shongo for being in the IF rockerz team now! ❤️

PS: I just realised there's no such thing like "Secondly" in my comment. Oh... never mind. 😆


well I was actually awaiting a "thirdly" as this was technically already a "secondly" 🤣 awww I love you too MAishuuu 🤗 ❤️ ❤️ I am pleased you loved the OS. It's ok, the stories are gonna be here when you get your mood back to read them. I'm just happy to hear from you and appreciate that you make an effort to come because I do miss you when you get so quiet... Take care sweetie! 🤗
Edited by Tessaloni - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: jhillyarya

Oh yes she always was his number one.. He said it and proved it again and again. Though he love Arpita but that love was different. Well I am not going to bash Arpita, after all she is a girl. She is with Yash from childhood, it is not new thing that she will have developed feelings for Yash, it's natural. Yes she did wrong to put distance between them but then everyone can't be great, she just tried to keep him with her, But she couldn't because he was belonged to someone else's, his true love.. True soulmate..

Yash's priority was Arpita but i think the misunderstanding was necessary to make Aarti his first priority too. He didn't abandoned Arpita just wanted to make his priority first to Aarti at last..

It is a beautiful piece with the🤢climax.. Do i need to say how much i loved it TC pie?


wow someone in Arpita's corner? [:0] I am very surprised VD! Yes you are right, Yash needed to make her his priority. You don't need to tell me you loved it VD of mine but it's nice to hear... Thaaankuuu 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful os
loved it
sorry for commenting late

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