AarYa OS: Love's Seed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tess for this sweetest gift. 🤗 ❤️

Loved it so much. It was love at first sight, but due to his broken heart he wanted to stay away from her. Couldn't do it, as rhe attraction, the pull was strong that he had fo move towards her instead of away from her. Cupid Palak made it all the more easy for them.
They both had felt this strong attraction the moment they laid eyes on each other. Deep down they both knew that they are made for each other, which is why Aarti was able to stand against Prashant and her own heartless and manipulative parents. It was this love that gave her courage to reject that proposal.

Tess from what I gathered (please do correct me if I'm wrong), I think Palak is not Yash's daughter. If I'm right then that was the main reason for he felt cheated and betrayed. With Aarti it became easy for him to trust her with Palak as he saw Aarti's protectiveness towards rhe little Angel. For Palak. Aarti didn't hesitate to scold Yash also.
Deep down he knows that Aarti will... She is Palak's mother in true sense.


Love the little romance in the car. 🤢.

What I loved about this OS is that where you showed a possessive Yash (whom I love the most ☺️), yet you showed how maturely he staked his claim. He didn't force her into anything. After that kiss in the car, when he learned about her true feelings for him, then only he proceeded to stake his claim.
And not before that.

And Oh My!!!!!! 🤢. What a way to leave the girl speechless. Coming to her home with marriage proposal with his parents but he wanted to marry right away, that evening itself 🤢 ☺️

And then he saw his JKR Aarti on his wedding night 😉. And she saw a little vulnerable yet so romantic Yash


I'm still like this ☺️


And Tess the whole last paragraph just took my breath away. I envy all those writers who are able to express such deep emotions so effortlessly. For that whole paragraph a million. ⭐️



Thank you so much for this gift. ❤️




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Posted: 9 years ago
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When i read the title of this os i thought that yash planted his seed in aarti anyway wow sis the os was amazayn i love it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Immediately attracted but trying to keep their distance due to their own issues.
Eventually Palak is the catalyst in bringing them together. She will always be a part of their relationship. I love that. I love the bond that developed between Palak and Aarti as Yash and Aarti were still battling with the feelings that they had for each other.

Her parents are the pits. Trying to force her to commit to a man she doesn't want to and then making he quit her job. That is so archaic. The he stayed away without a word, breaking her heart. Poor girl. But when he came back, he came back with a bang. Proposal, engagement and wedding all on the same day. Someone was impatient??? Even promising to making up for it at the younger sisters wedding. 😉

A great treat for Nikki. Congrats again Nikki. ⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats to Nikii. T borrowing your words , love is indeed a seed, to grow and blossom forever from being fed by all wonderful things. Yash once sure Aarti had planted the seed of love in him, wasted no time got engaged and married in the same evening. Not surprising Aarti felt the same. Fab story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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T another fabulous story. Wow proposal, engagement and wedding all in the same day! Loved how Palak United them as they had their reservations towards each other because of their own issues and insecurities. Loved the concept of planting a seed to grow into a beautiful blossom. Nikki congratulations on chaning your colour.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful os..loved it.. thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing
loved it
enjoyed reading it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Am just grateful aarti manage to stick her ground and didn't let pressure from parents lead her astray because i think if she got married to prashant she would have been a sex slave for him and her dreams came true he got all of yash physically, emotionally and his love umm luck you aarti.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was another amazing one behan ⭐️ Aarti' parents they don't really care about their daughter's feelings all they want is for her to be married stupid people, and forced her to stop working what nonsense, then again those people do exist maybe not in our society but they do 😆😆 Yash love him a man who recognized a good thing and made sure he had it 😆 worked quickly this Yash proposal engagement and wedding on the same day my my he is anxious 😆😆
again an amazing update behan ⭐️

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